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Ok something weird, before it recorded that busiest day I had on April 4th had 6,116 views. I remember it because it was asymetrical 6116. Now it reports 7,005
views on your busiest day, April 4, 2012 Must have been a Florida Recount.

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#277
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Views are actually down by -26.33% last week and by -100.00% this week.

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DemonRisingSun wrote...

 1. Sadly no there's no way to get Wordpress to play the tracks like a playlist. 2 I didn't make them I found them after hours of listening to fan made music on Soundcloud. 
3. You should download the tracks that are available to download from the Music Pages by clicking the down arrow on the player. Then you can play them in a playlist.

4. There are endings where Shepard dies. 1 where they recover the body, 2 where they don't.

5. Excellent Questions!


Thank you for your answers! I've read those ending today, and shared my thoughts about them on the site. 

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Felt much more rewarding for my paragon Vangaurd with Liara(LI) and Garrus. The wedding scene seemed a bit unnecessary, as a shot of a couple of little blue kids would have sufficed. Well done, thanks for putting these out there.

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dakphillips wrote...

Felt much more rewarding for my paragon Vangaurd with Liara(LI) and Garrus. The wedding scene seemed a bit unnecessary, as a shot of a couple of little blue kids would have sufficed. Well done, thanks for putting these out there.


Some like it, some don't. Thanks for visiting.

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http://collegeage.wo...rissom-academy/

Part 2 of this chapter is up. I didn't want to split chapters so soon but I saw a really good cliffhanger and had to split it. I'll be writing Chapter 3 asap.

Also I'm thinking of starting a new Thread for the entries into the mini Novel, what do you guy's think? 

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Chapter 3 of the Mass Effect 3 sidestory novel is up. Come on I know you want to read it then rip it appart!!! :devil::P

 
http://collegeage.wo...ess.com/2679-2/

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#283
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So no uh, feedback other than Rache123. I'm hoping that the story is enjoyable.

#284
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 Space Magic :wizard: Oh and uh, Bioware Please Hire Me!!! 

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Tyler Korpesho asked: "Is this actually going to be published? The four other books were amazing."

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DemonRisingSun wrote...

 
Tyler Korpesho asked: "Is this actually going to be published? The four other books were amazing."


I'd like it to be Bioware, I'd like it to be.

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Awesome epilogues!

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Wrote Part Two of Chapter 3. It's available. 


http://collegeage.wo...ess.com/2679-2/ 

#289
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If you ever wanted to see an Alliance Admiral and a General do battle with the Reapers your wish will come true... Tomorrow.

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Wow, the male shep adept version with liara(LI) and wrex as squaddies was almost an exact replica of my headcanon, that was an awesome read. If the new dlc is half of that id **** my pants with happiness

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JediMaster_Murph wrote...

Wow, the male shep adept version with liara(LI) and wrex as squaddies was almost an exact replica of my headcanon, that was an awesome read. If the new dlc is half of that id **** my pants with happiness


I would too, I kind of wish that before it was too late that I could rewrite the actions sequences with more description but I can't do that without spending at least 10 hours on all the updates. I'd rather spend that time writing the new chapters in the side-story. I'm starting to brainstorm titles but eh, should finish the novel before doing that.

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DemonRisingSun wrote...

So no uh, feedback other than Rache123. I'm hoping that the story is enjoyable.



err yeah hate to say it but I've left another one.............

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The overall story is a huge improvement, I would just change a few lines of dialouge to make them sound a less hackneyed, and I would shorten the bar scene at the end, it came off as a little saccharine.

Still, as is, it is 100000 times better than what we paid for. I'd pay cash money for this ending.

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redcarpet26 wrote...

The overall story is a huge improvement, I would just change a few lines of dialouge to make them sound a less hackneyed, and I would shorten the bar scene at the end, it came off as a little saccharine.

Still, as is, it is 100000 times better than what we paid for. I'd pay cash money for this ending.


The bar scene was an homage to Jerremy Jahns an extremely popular movie critic on Youtube and his video on the ending of ME3.

Yeah, I'd change some of the dialogue too, but I'm busy with new stuff (like the novel) that and some people like it just the way it is. 

Otherwise thanks for the glowing review!

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Rache123 wrote...

DemonRisingSun wrote...

So no uh, feedback other than Rache123. I'm hoping that the story is enjoyable.



err yeah hate to say it but I've left another one.............


Thank you, I'll take as many as I can get. Oh and *whispers under my breath extra quietly* chapter 4 is up. http://collegeage.wo...ke-and-shadows/ 

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Pitiful Repost. 
http://collegeage.wo...ke-and-shadows/

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So what are your thoughts? Like the reading so far?

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DemonRisingSun wrote...

Rache123 wrote...

DemonRisingSun wrote...

So no uh, feedback other than Rache123. I'm hoping that the story is enjoyable.



err yeah hate to say it but I've left another one.............


Thank you, I'll take as many as I can get. Oh and *whispers under my breath extra quietly* chapter 4 is up. http://collegeage.wo...ke-and-shadows/ 


kewl but it's half one in the morning here and I have to get up for work in a few hours, so will have to wait until tomorrow.....................Image IPB

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No problem, whenever you get around to it.

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Keeping you up to date with the latest trends... in the war with the Reapers: Studies show Dragon's Teeth impale you. Who knew?! Am I right. people! Ah, bad premises for jokes. Really I swear the rest of my writing is better. Boy was this counter productive.