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[DemonRisingSun]

 
I counted them, I made 4 shifts in pov between Anderson and Jack's stories in this chapter. Big question: Do you think it's working or is each scene being cut off too soon?

http://collegeage.me...pt/#comment-321

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 21 avril 2012 - 01:43 .

[DoomRaiden]

I was reading quite a bit of this ... story/ fanfic. He really is boasting of his work and i have to admit ... he's bad :\\ I dont get where people are calling this great ... it really sucks to me lol better than the ending, don't get me wrong ... but it still sucks :\\

just my opinion

[DoomRaiden]

I'll also admit I didn't read everything ... so please don't bite my head off as people love doing :\\

[DemonRisingSun]

DoomRaiden wrote...

I was reading quite a bit of this ... story/ fanfic. He really is boasting of his work and i have to admit ... he's bad : I dont get where people are calling this great ... it really sucks to me lol better than the ending, don't get me wrong ... but it still sucks :

just my opinion

Did you read the chapters in the book yet? The New endings are one thing, but don't judge me as a writer until you've read a real sample of my work.

[DemonRisingSun]

 StarhazeApril 20, 2012 at 8:00 AM   editJust PM’d you on Mass Effect but I want to say it again here.I just finished the Sentinel ending with Tali and I have to say not only did you capture each characters personality but it was the PERFECT ending. It actually brought tears to my eyes. Your attention to detail with Serrice Brandy and Doctor Chakwa, to Anderson & Sanders to even Turian Brandy with the straw, it was just very very well done. I also enjoyed how well you kept to Garrus being comedy relief. Kudos man, Kudos. I’m actually a rapper and secretly a nerd haha. I have over 70,000 followers on my twitter @ http://www.twitter.com/jaymzj If you don’t mind at some point I’m gonna have to post your fan fiction because I think it’s incredibly well done and honestly no matter WHAT epilogues Bioware comes up with unless the script comes from your work I’m considering your work my Canon and again I greatly appreciate you for creating it.

[DemonRisingSun]

DoomRaiden wrote...

I'll also admit I didn't read everything ... so please don't bite my head off as people love doing :

Bit mine off. Just sayin Raiden.

[DemonRisingSun]

DoomRaiden wrote...

I was reading quite a bit of this ... story/ fanfic. He really is boasting of his work and i have to admit ... he's bad : I dont get where people are calling this great ... it really sucks to me lol better than the ending, don't get me wrong ... but it still sucks :

just my opinion

Correction, I'm not boasting. Not a lot, not by a long shot as much as other people are. The endings are writen as scripts with little description. The endings are one thing, still I worked hard to create each one for each scenario and there are 190 pages on the site with links through to every decision and alternate. I've spent more than 20 hours just correcting typos. And more than 150 hours on creating the endings alone. So what if it's bad. I worked insanely hard to do it. And for the most part, people think it's quality work. How could I not be proud of that?

That said I am far more proud (as it better represents my talents) of the ME Novel I'm writing.

[DemonRisingSun]

DoomRaiden wrote...

I was reading quite a bit of this ... story/ fanfic. He really is boasting of his work and i have to admit ... he's bad : I dont get where people are calling this great ... it really sucks to me lol better than the ending, don't get me wrong ... but it still sucks :

just my opinion

Thank you for your opinion. I mean that in the sincerest way possible. In my opinion they're not as good as they could be. Nothing I ever do is ever "as good as it could be" I drive myself incredibly hard. I'll admit, the new endings may be "bad" I say maybe because, well you and I are outvoted by 361 votes so far. That's 78.65% in favor of the new endings. According to this poll: http://collegeage.me/#pd_a_6118187

So that's the gist of it. I'm busy writing the novel which will take about a month to finish (That's making pretty good time). There are 6 chapters so far, chapter 6 is in progress but everything visable is pretty much in its solid draft state. So go check that out.

And uh, I'm really not here to bite anyones head off, but every time I bump the page 50 people click through to the site. So I'm actually in your debt. Really, thank you. 

[DemonRisingSun]

DemonRisingSun wrote...

 
I counted them, I made 4 shifts in pov between Anderson and Jack's stories in this chapter. Big question: Do you think it's working or is each scene being cut off too soon?

http://collegeage.me...pt/#comment-321

At the risk of painting myself as a bad host, I'd like to turn the discussion back to my original question.

[DemonRisingSun]

So the world is a dichotomy, the stories either suck or are awesome. Any helpful criticism out there?

[DemonRisingSun]

 I'm back this morning with another addition to the 
http://collegeage.me...6-london-crypt/ chapter 6 of the book. Already this chapter is poised to be one of the longest chapters so far. That is why it is taking 2 days to finish.

[Bufardo74]

Subbed to this thread. Bumped for support.

[DemonRisingSun]

 
Chapter 6 the freshly finished chapter is now available. I'll get busy to write chapter 7 immediately.

http://collegeage.me...6-london-crypt/

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 21 avril 2012 - 09:41 .

[DemonRisingSun]

 
If you just can't get enough, the first 700 words of chapter 7 is available. 

http://collegeage.me...m-shadows-past/

[DoomRaiden]

wow, so many replies to my comment ... by the same guy xD so i did bite your head off i see (as you said) but now that you replied SO much to it, I don't actually feel guilty about having a negative approach to it, you clearly haven't had one yet and it looks like your taking it ... badly lol

please don't misunderstand or think I'm "trolling", I do applaud you for writing a fanfic to Mass Effect. It shows how much you love it. but I have problems with people who think they are the all-mighty lol by all means keep writing, many others are too, but don't expect that all of us are going to LOVE it simply because it could be better than the official ending. personally i had to stop reading it because it was so awful to me :\\ and let me clarify, "TO ME" ... as in my opinion ... i'm sure there are people out there who share your ideas
I'm clarifying because there are sooo so many out there that mistake opinions with trolling ... ugh

Viel Spaß!

Modifié par DoomRaiden, 22 avril 2012 - 01:19 .

[DemonRisingSun]

DoomRaiden wrote...

wow, so many replies to my comment ... by the same guy xD so i did bite your head off i see (as you said) but now that you replied SO much to it, I don't actually feel guilty about having a negative approach to it, you clearly haven't had one yet and it looks like your taking it ... badly lol

please don't misunderstand or think I'm "trolling", I do applaud you for writing a fanfic to Mass Effect. It shows how much you love it. but I have problems with people who think they are the all-mighty lol by all means keep writing, many others are too, but don't expect that all of us are going to LOVE it simply because it could be better than the official ending. personally i had to stop reading it because it was so awful to me : and let me clarify, "TO ME" ... as in my opinion ... i'm sure there are people out there who share your ideas
I'm clarifying because there are sooo so many out there that mistake opinions with trolling ... ugh

Viel Spaß!

Yeah no I take criticism badly from people who call me a "Bad writer". DUDE I PANNICKED, I'm sorry. Haven't you ever had a similar human moment. :innocent:

[DemonRisingSun]

  The first 1,500 words of chapter 7 is up. It's the first full segment following Jack's story. http://collegeage.me...m-shadows-past/

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 22 avril 2012 - 02:11 .

[DemonRisingSun]

Rache123 wrote...

ummm not quite sure how to put this…………..but if Jack and Chester don’t get it on I’m gonna be really disappointed. Yeah…. I know, “they have better things on their mind like saving the galaxy” blah blah.  Anyway eagerly awaiting chapt 8

Not sure how Jack romancers will react but it can be arranged.I’m toying with it in my head. Chapter 7 isn’t done yet. There’s a lot to go, and you haven’t met the ghosts yet.

[DemonRisingSun]

 More of chapter 7 is available 
http://collegeage.me...m-shadows-past/

[SCJ90]

Im reading the Dark energy fanfic right now but I am going to have a look at your story! I support those people who take time off to write fanfic without pay or compensation, It is commendable to say the least!

Modifié par SCJ90, 22 avril 2012 - 07:29 .

[DemonRisingSun]

SCJ90 wrote...

Im reading the Dark energy fanfic right now but I am going to have a look at your story! I support those people who take time off to write fanfic without pay or compensation, It is commendable to say the least!

Thank you. I commend people who take the time to read my work. If you want a good story read the Novel. If you want a good ending you can read those too. But the novel is far better.

[DemonRisingSun]

 
Section by section the chapter is going up. Only 1 more section to write. Could be a long one. Find out what happens to Jack later today.

http://collegeage.me...m-shadows-past/

[DemonRisingSun]

 
In an odd turn of events Estonia (the country) leads today's views over the U.S. with 122 views. Thank you Estonia. 

http://collegeage.me/

[DemonRisingSun]

 
Chapter 7 has been finished. The big prestige has been made. You're not gonna believe what happens next.

http://collegeage.me...m-shadows-past/

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 22 avril 2012 - 11:38 .

[DemonRisingSun]

 The first 700 words, the first segment that is, is available for reading 

http://collegeage.me...pter-8-skyfall/