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[DemonRisingSun]

 The Sentinel class has been posted Today 
http://collegeage.wo...sentinel-class/ I hope you enjoy it.

[DemonRisingSun]

So I guess if no-one comments or bumps I'll just let this thread die a natural death.

[DemonRisingSun]

 Here's a sample from the story:

Anderson – “Shepard! Shepard!”
Garrus – “I found him”
Anderson – “Thank god you’re all right son. Wrex come help us get this off of him.”
Wrex – “You mean to say Hey Krogan lift this half ton wreck of a Mako off the hero.”
Garrus – “You mean the Mako was a wreck before it got hit with a giant laser cannon?”
Wrex – “You’d know, cause you spent all that time . . . calibrating it. There its off of ya.”
Shepard – “Thanks Wrex.”
Wrex – “My pleasure.”
Anderson – “Wreck or not that Mako just saved your life. Here, I found your gun. Let’s get moving.”
Shepard – “Thanks. Let’s get to the conduit.”
Wrex – “Marauder!”
Wrex fires his Crusader X at its head.
Garrus – “Headshot! That’s all of them.”
Wrex – “I love this gun. Pierced right through that Marauder’s Shields.”
Anderson – “One lone hero isn’t the last of the fight to be had. All right everybody stay alert. On three we jump in the beam. One . . . Two . . . THREE.”

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 06 avril 2012 - 11:39 .

[DemonRisingSun]

 Updated the Photo Gallery

http://collegeage.wo.../photo-gallery/ 

[DemonRisingSun]

Rewrote the Miranda Lawson romance due to fan feedback. Check it out.

[DemonRisingSun]

Martin Baughman
April 6, 2012 at 10:25 PM edit
Love this more than the ending I experienced. I wish we all had something like this that Bioware had promised in the beginning when they stated “they would be 16 different endings”

[Rache123]

Thank you so much for this,it's the first time I've smiled over ME in a while. I read the shep/garrus/LI kaidan thread and love it. In my head this is what actually happened and that makes me very happy! Oh bioware......if only..........

I did post a comment on the website as well.

[DemonRisingSun]

Rache123 wrote...

Thank you so much for this,it's the first time I've smiled over ME in a while. I read the shep/garrus/LI kaidan thread and love it. In my head this is what actually happened and that makes me very happy! Oh bioware......if only..........

I did post a comment on the website as well.

I replied to your comment. Thanks you very much! You can print it.

[DemonRisingSun]

  It's been a long road to this point but now all classes are available to have a better ending. Just uploaded the Engineer class today.  http://collegeage.wo...engineer-class/

[DemonRisingSun]

 New Indoctrination Prologue.

http://collegeage.wo...ation-prologue/ 

[DemonRisingSun]

1 hour bump.

[DemonRisingSun]

 Yesterday and Today's updates in a full bulletin:
1. Added the Sentinel class:
http://collegeage.wo...sentinel-class/

2. Added more photos to the gallery:
http://collegeage.wo.../photo-gallery/

3. Added more music to the music page:
http://collegeage.wo...t-music-page-2/

4. Added the Engineer class (yay all classes up!)
http://collegeage.wo...engineer-class/

5. Wrote a prologue.
http://collegeage.wo...ation-prologue/http://external.ak.f...jpg?w=300&h=300Sentinel classcollegeage.wordpress.comClick the links to finish your story (First Draft): Male Shepard. class: Soldier, Vanguard, Infiltrator, Adept, Sentinel. Choose your squad-mates: Garrus and Wrex Ashley and Wrex / Ashley and G...

[Darth Asriel]

Loved this!! Thank you so much OP.

[DemonRisingSun]

Darth Asriel wrote...

Loved this!! Thank you so much OP.

What did you think of the Prologue?

[DemonRisingSun]

 Just put up two polls 
http://collegeage.wo...ds-your-help-9/

[Byronic-Knight]

Two thumbs way up.

[SuperVulcan]

I like it. Thanks for sharing.

[DemonRisingSun]

Thanks for looking.

[zennyrpg]

Pretty good. I wasn't huge on all the vega stuff in the end. I did like the various choices sprinkled in though, much better than the "real" ending.

[DemonRisingSun]

 
Somehow site views exploded, The rough number is 507 views in the last few minutes. Get in while it's hot.

http://collegeage.wo.../soldier-class/

Modifié par DemonRisingSun, 08 avril 2012 - 05:56 .

[blitzburgher92]

Thank you very much RisingSun. As much as I want to continue holding the line for an official fix, devoted fans like this truly make it hard. Really, all any of these people are missing is access to a cinematic creator (and of course the resources to complete one), and we'd have more than enough consolation. But, for now, these will do. I hope the author continues to update this, because while it's already quite thorough (moreso than the current ending), there's still some things that need added in.

But long story short, loved this, especially with the music on the same page.

[DannyGloverfromPredator2_]

Awesome effort. Color me significantly more impressed with this than the in-game ending.

[DemonRisingSun]

blitzburgher92 wrote...

Thank you very much RisingSun. As much as I want to continue holding the line for an official fix, devoted fans like this truly make it hard. Really, all any of these people are missing is access to a cinematic creator (and of course the resources to complete one), and we'd have more than enough consolation. But, for now, these will do. I hope the author continues to update this, because while it's already quite thorough (moreso than the current ending), there's still some things that need added in.

But long story short, loved this, especially with the music on the same page.

You have no idea how much I want to make an Action Comic out of this. Or a Cartoon Animation. Or if a really talanted team of animators want to do 3d that too. Or if a bunch of amazing modders can rally up some amazing voice actors. Or if bioware calls me up tomorrow and say they want to use my endings in the extended cut. Any of those would be awesome!

[DemonRisingSun]

I hate bumping, but since the site needs 50 more views to break 2k in 40 minutes left. Bump.

[reeot]

@DemonRisingSun:

Thank you for this Project. I'll greatly support you if i can.