Gigamantis wrote...
The catalyst was only introduced in the final game and didn't need to be hinted at previously to work in this context. What your argument here boils down to is "I don't like surprises!" That's not literary critique, that's just personal taste. There are a lot of ways to introduce a plot-twist; not just the "everyone can see it coming" method
You're making excuses for what is plainly and simply bad writing. Surprises are fine; asspulls are not.
I guess you're earning your EA paycheck by defending the indefensible.
Gigamantis wrote...
First, you don't know that was earth. Second, the scene cut to the crashed Normandy after the relay caught them; the rest was implied and you have no idea how much time passed. Joker thought Shepard was dead/gone and wanted to get the rest of the team to safety. Not out of character at all.
Regarding the Normandy:
01) My crew were with me on Earth. They would not leave me or abandon the mission.
02) Opening the Citadel was the last hope. It wouldn't be abandoned.
03) The area around the conduit was very hostile territory, not suitable for insertion or extraction by air.
04) Last I heard shuttles were still getting shot out of the sky; how wouold they have left Earth?
05) Joker was engaged with Sword in the space battle. He would not have left.
06) Even if Joker could have picked them up, my crew were more useful on the ground.
07) Joker still wouldn't have been leaving the last-hope battle, he'd have rammed the Normandy into Harbinger if he had to.
08) Why was Joker running?
09) Why did the space magic destroy the Normandy's engines?
10) Did the engines of every other spacecraft get destroyed?
11) What other technology was destroyed? Why?
12) Where did the Normandy crash?
13) Did the Normandy make it to the end of their relay jump, or were they knocked out of FTL during transit?
14) Is the food on the garden world suitable for humans? If not, they all die.
15) If the food is nutritous to humans, then Garrus and Tali are going to starve to death.
16) Interstellar travel is ruined. No hope of rescue for several years, if ever.