As per Visii's request, I'm putting this up here as an example of what they'd like for the project. Hope it helps people understand what's needed.
Dear BioWare,
My character Jane Shepard was born on Mindoir in an average family and had a good, average life. She had brothers and parents and friends and a high school and did normal things until they were all slaughtered by batarian slavers. Then she joined the Alliance and a new family formed up around her- her brothers and sisters in arms, and she finally found herself managing to patch herself up a bit. And then the Thresher Maw killed all of them as well.
Jane Shepard was never what you would call a ‘happy’ type of person, but she tried to be friendly and remain optimistic. Doing this was the only way she felt that she could survive and not go insane, because if she accepted that her life was nothing but death and that at the end of the day she was more likely to be staring into the barrel of a gun than at a friendly face, she’d just lose it and kill herself. She was a paragon because if she didn’t at least try to help others, she’d feel like she failed everyone that had died in her life before. Helping others was the only way she could get over being alive while her family and friends were in graves. She loved Kaiden, but he couldn’t understand her, not really. She had just a half-life, and did nothing for herself because deep down she was afraid of stopping, afraid of taking a breath anddoing something that she wanted to, because she wouldn’t be helping someone else. She was afraid because whenever she had stopped before, and enjoyed and loved people before, they all died. But she tried it anyway with Kaiden- and then
she died.
To say that the psychological damage done to her at this point was taking a serious toll would be an understatement. She had support from others- especially Garrus- but only Thane, who was actually dying and had been around death his entire life, could really talk to her. Thane and Jane were so similar, especially with the trauma they had both experienced. Both had loved ones killed and had killed many others, but Thane had managed to develop a way of coping with it all that he shared with Shepard.
They supported each other in ways that their other companions couldn’t begin to, and although Thane said that she awoke him from his battle sleep, he did the same for her. Thane was perfect for Shepard because he accepted her and didn’t judge her for what she had done and what she was going to do. For the first time, someone wanted to be there just for her and asked for nothing in return, and Shepard began to lose her fear of dying and death thanks to his peace and resolution. When he came to her and cried because he was no longer at peace himself, they realized for the first time in many years that it wasn’t death they had been running from, it was life. And when they had survived the supposed Suicide Run and all their companions came out alive and they had succeeded despite the odds… That was when the curse of fear lifted from both of them.
My Jane Shepard would never have accepted the way that Thane was butchered in Mass Effect 3, and neither can I, because there is no way such a fantastic and amazing character could be treated so horribly. Thane was the only thing that Jane Shepard wanted, and the only thing she dared to ask for. There was nothing else she hadn’t given to the rest of the galaxy, including her own life. Thane shouldn’t have died the way he did. Even if there never had been a cure planned for him, surely there must have been some sort of greater departure for him. Why is it that none of the crew members who knew him and were friends with him
didn’t even acknowledge his death? Why is it that Shepard, who loved him and wanted to be with him, didn’t so much as blink back tears as
he was dying in front of her? Why didn’t she tell Kaiden when he accused her of cheating on him that she chose Thane over him because
he abandoned her when she needed him the most? Jane Shepard, and really,
every Shepard who romanced him would never have been so passive and calm about this. Thane was a LOVE interest. Shepard was supposed to fall IN LOVE with him. Thane was not a casual fling, was not designed that way, but yet if Shepard chooses him, he dies and then she’s shoved right back into Kaiden’s arms. Except that Kaiden left her. There’s no way in hell that Jane Shepard would accept being called a cheater by the person who left her without even trying to understand.
Why are the Shepards who decided to either move on from heartbreak or did not have a lover from ME1 being punished for choosing him as an LI? Why were the ME2 romances forgotten about when all the romances from ME1 were treated like they were the ones Shepard was supposed to pick? Why did you even create Thane in the first place if you were just going to tear him away in such an awfully painful manner? Jane Shepard would not understand, nor accept either the ‘dropped ball’ or ‘limited resource’ excuse, and neither do I. Nor would any other Shepard who would have romanced him, and it goes without saying that their players share this dissatisfaction. You did a remarkably wonderful job with Thane in ME2. Please, don’t do yourselves and Thane this injustice by pretending this romance didn’t happen in ME3.
Give Thane back to Shepard. Don’t make her be alone because she chose someone that you placed in front of her and then took away. If every other romance can receive an “I love you,” then so should Thane. It’s the leastthat Shepard deserves after saving the galaxy twice and dying for every person in it.
-An earnest and sadly disappointed fan,
Yermogi
I was also really, really tempted to add “Not to mention we deserve it for paying 70 dollars for a game that we consider to be incomplete", but I decided that wouldn't really help the matter any. Still think it's a valid point though.
That 70 bucks was my spending cash for the month... <_<
Modifié par Yermogi, 13 avril 2012 - 03:45 .