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How London Should Have Played Out [Script] + [New] Ending Rewrite
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CmdrSlander
, avril 15 2012 02:43
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#28
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:17
wantedman dan
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This was a damn good read.
Well done, OP.
Well done, OP.
#30
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:23
sniper1250
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I like that this ending would have had more representation of the war assets beyond just "Oh you have above a set threshold of EMS? Big Ben is not destroyed. Congratulations! Isn't that rewarding and fulfilling?"
It could do with a part about the other Spectres, but the quest to acquire them as a war asset is glitched and most people probably wouldn't see it anyway since they almost never patch those kind of glitches.
It could do with a part about the other Spectres, but the quest to acquire them as a war asset is glitched and most people probably wouldn't see it anyway since they almost never patch those kind of glitches.
#31
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:25
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@sniper1250 You would see them in the final battle part, it goes through all your allied ground troops.
#33
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:32
Crazyjeffy
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Very very good read. Sucks to see Hackett go though 
But that's the point of sacrificing.
One problem I had with it though:
[Cutscene: If Shepard has a love interest, the pair find themselves behind the same piece of cover, as the squad fights off more Reaper troops in the background, the two share a brief kiss]
The fine young woman to the left would like a word.
But that's the point of sacrificing. One problem I had with it though:
[Cutscene: If Shepard has a love interest, the pair find themselves behind the same piece of cover, as the squad fights off more Reaper troops in the background, the two share a brief kiss]
The fine young woman to the left would like a word.
#34
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:36
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They hug? Forehead to visor contact? Stupid frakking enviro-suits....
They hug? Forehead to visor contact? Stupid frakking enviro-suits....
#35
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:38
FBI-Azzurri
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Definitely write more! You did good son, you did good.
Modifié par FBI-Azzurri, 15 avril 2012 - 04:43 .
#37
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 04:48
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CmdrSlander wrote...
@Crazyjeffy
They hug? Forehead to visor contact? Stupid frakking enviro-suits....
I dig the visor forehead kiss idea... then Tali could joke about having an obstruction of view
#40
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:11
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This was awesome!! I love the Galactica like moment of the dreadnoughts entering Earth's atmosphere. Just epic all around.
Please at least give us an epilogue.
Please at least give us an epilogue.
#42
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:20
FBI-Azzurri
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BioWare what are you waiting for? Hire this op to write your games for you.
#43
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:25
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Have you read my ME4 concept?
Have you read my ME4 concept?
#44
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:26
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Playing this out in my head was awesome and actually got harbinger involved, please re write the cidatel part, mainly how the game ends tbh. but yeah your write up was awesome especially with your LI XD
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Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:27
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Much better than the original. Well Done
#46
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:28
FBI-Azzurri
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CmdrSlander wrote...
@FBI-Azzuri
Have you read my ME4 concept?
No not yet. I'll go check it out now. What did you think of mine?
#47
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:35
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@FBI-Azzuri I like it. Though I would prefer to let Shepard rest after ME3. The "smoking ruins" left to us by BioWare in the wake of the current endings actually gives us a lot of possible new story lines to play with.
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#49
Posté 15 avril 2012 - 05:41
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CmdrSlander wrote...
@FBI-Azzuri I like it. Though I would prefer to let Shepard rest after ME3. The "smoking ruins" left to us by BioWare in the wake of the current endings actually gives us a lot possible new story lines to play with.
I like your idea too, if Shepard is no longer the main protagonist. Love how you included at the end, why you'll love my version of ME4 lol, so true. But, you should also see my other post of why Shepard's story may not be over yet. Let me know what you think. social.bioware.com/forum/1/topic/355/index/11193774
