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[CmdrSlander]

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[Desteron]

Sweet! I would like to say you should have Harbinger within the Citadel with Shepard in some form. (Harbinger is my favorite besides Sovereign lol)

[CmdrSlander]

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[me again 21]

Great piece of writing so far, but I was a little confused with the dreadnought strike. I think you got the EMS scores messed up (2000+ = weakened while 4000+ = collapsing), and the dreadnought strike itself seems a little strange. I mean, if they were to be jumping in and getting destroyed depending on how close they are to the Reapers (i took it as they were jumping into their faces in order to actually hit them) if they were shot down the blasts would disorient a lot of Hammer and the falling debris and resulting explosions could even wipe some of them out.

[CmdrSlander]

@me again 21 The Reaper's orbital defenses, not yours. The higher the score the more buggered the Reaper's defensive line.

The Dreadnoughts are jumping in kilometers away from the Reapers, which is basically point blank range given the power of the main cannons. The problem with striking from space is the fact that the projectiles have to enter the atmosphere and avoid the massive amount of space debris generated by the battle and decades of human space development. It is not really an issue of proximity, but what lies between the Dreadnought and the target.

[CmdrSlander]

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[CmdrSlander]

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[TookYoCookies]

the M92-cain should work, kinetic barrier doesnt stop heat. M92-cain round appears to be a small/concentrated thermo-nuclear blast, soo yea... Would vaporize that reaper b*tch. 

Edit: other than that though, pretty good! 

Modifié par TookYoCookies, 15 avril 2012 - 06:35 .

[CmdrSlander]

The M920 CAIN is a rail gun, look it up. BioWare space magics away the mushroom cloud somehow.

[CmdrSlander]

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[TeaCokeProphet]

Goooooooooooooooood. I liked the Harbinger bits, and the last bit with everyone holding the line.

[lil_lene]

Crazyjeffy wrote...

CmdrSlander wrote...

@Crazyjeffy

They hug? Forehead to visor contact? Stupid frakking enviro-suits....

I dig the visor forehead kiss idea... then Tali could joke about having an obstruction of view

This I like. Sounds exactly like something she would say.

To the OP this is really good your posts usually are though. I love the WA coming in to play, continue with the way the Citadel plays out.

It is so sad when FanFic is what we need to sustain what should have been one of the greatest gaming trilogies of all time.

[CmdrSlander]

@lil_lene agreed

[KingWrex]

Another great piece of fan fiction proves to be better than what Bioware provides us, the London mission wasn't terrible it was pretty intense but could have been handled much better case and point the OP

[legion999]

That was much better than what we got.

[Baihu1983]

Its good but you dont need to keep bumping it

[l7986]

Great read.

[IElitePredatorI]

Why is there btt about 5 times on each page?

[lil_lene]

I think it means Bump To Top. Trying to keep it relevant I guess. But it is a great read so I can understand it.

[lil_lene]

Edit: Sorry double post.

Modifié par lil_lene, 15 avril 2012 - 12:34 .

[Dormin]

CmdrSlander wrote...

@Dormin

No, the space battle was adequate, and which Harbinger scene are your referring to?

I feel it could have been slightly longer and shown all of the fleets you collected (Batarians, Terminus, Etc.)
I ment I would love to read a final confrontation with Harbinger if you are planning it?

[CmdrSlander]

Yes, I am planning a final confrontation with Harby, the question is where. There really isn't any space on the Citadel to contain all of him.

[bearded prodigy]

in me1 they busted out of the elevator window with there sealed suits and magnetic boots and fought the geth in the last stage before saren. so you could do the same and fight him outside the citadel living area.
you could have it when you get to the citadel and open the arms, he flys up and has a 1 v 1 fight with you. it means you could use all the defences you acquired for the citadel to be put to use.

[Trentest0]

You didn't need to blow Big Ben up I love that bell...

[bearded prodigy]

your script so far is really good. it makes all your assets matter which the current ending failed to do.