KitaSaturnyne wrote...
@Fapmaster
Sounds awesome! Just, um, reign it in a bit?
I don't think that the renegade character developments encapsulate shooting innocent people. Even when confronted with Conrad Verner, the worst Shepard can do is shoot him in the foot. It just seems so far outside the realm of the character, even if they're played with the renegade mesquite sauce of justice. Shepard is a warrior and a politician, despite any reluctance to the latter.
It just seems like too much to me. Perhaps I'm being too myopic about this.
Well, it wouldn't be just "What, disagree? Answer to the Carnifex of Justice!" BLAM!
Basically, it would play out like such:
Some time in the game, Shepard would be called back to the Citadel by the council with a very formal letter. (Very formal, as remarked on by NPC #3.) Upon arrival, Shepard would be informed that priority docking was denied, and he'd have to hoof it to the scheduled meeting (making him late). Any attempt for clarification would be denied, and if he pulled the Spectre card, it would be refused as "suspended pending investigation". Attempts to clarify this would be denied as well, for the same reasons as before.
On the Citadel, Shepard would be greeted by a crowd of anti-Shep protestors rallying people in the refugee camps, talking up his crimes (or "crimes") and demanding a new, better face for the war effort. Shepard can't get ahold of anybody, and has to push through some infuriating people, even while being smeared, in real time, on the television walls.
Upon arrival in the Presidium embassies, he would find the meeting cancelled, with a low level functionary informing him that the council can't be seen with him right now due to prevailing opinion. They must retain the support of their people in this war, after all, and right now, he's a liability. Shepard can argue his point, emphasize how much he's done to save the galaxy, but gets the bureacratic run around, informed that he's a tool (and no longer a useful one), and eventually given a complimentary "escort" out of the Presidium, to some ward.
In the ward, the new Spectre "taking over" meets with Shep, and explains that she's the only person willing to touch his current toxic persona, and that he's "made a lot of hard calls" and that "a lot of people don't agree". If Shepard argues, she agrees, and even states that she respects him, but that it would probably be better if he just hand over any active plans for the Crucible missions and step back and help "from the sidelines" for a while.
At this point, Shepard leaves (or storms out) and tries to get with the Council, being rebuffed in more and more infuriating ways (unless he succeeds in eating crow and playing up the charm options). Simultaneously, the Council releases a statement that starts to throw him under the bus, and when he tries to leave the ward, he gets TMZ-ambushed by an angry crowd of people whom he had wronged and a camera. If Shepard throws a punch (which Renegade Shepard has done) the crowd goes wild and attacks him (someone produces a knife). If Shepard uses lethal force (justified), he's still killing civilians on the Citadel in a fight
he started, and now has to clear his name with a side-mission.
Anywho, while working on this, I did come up with some good lines (since Renegade Shep is a badass, so should his people be, too):
Hackett: "Damn it, Commander, we can't afford this kind of mess. You need to cool your temper, check your head, and get back in this fight. We need you on this, but we can't afford your baggage."
Garrus: "Do you ever get tired of it, Shepard? You pull them out of the fire, time and again, and they complain about the bruises. I say next time, you should let them cook a little longer. It might change their opinion."
Javik: "In my cycle, such people were conscripted into Shock Infantry and used as cannon fodder."
VS (If Loyal): "Did I ever sound like that, Commander? I'm sorry." *pause* "Well, sorry, and glad you never shot me. Never again, sir. I have your back."
Shepard (to Council, when asked why Cerberus would set him up): "Because I worked with the Illusive Man. He knows who I am, and what I can do. I'm the only thing in this galaxy - not you, not the Reapers - that he is scared of. He knows I can beat him, and so he's trying to get me out of the game. Apparently, he has more faith that
you do."
Shepard (to Council, after producing proof): "I am so very sick of this. You politic and posture, and protect your interests, and the galaxy burns down around you. Well, if I'm toxic, fine, I'll take a walk. I'll walk right back to my ship, and go fight my stupid pointless battle right next to your stupid pointless battle. Otherwise, shut this down and back my calls. I've stopped the Reapers twice, I've gutted Cerberus, I've stopped the Rachni, I've fixed/ended the genophage, I've saved your asses twice, I've been killed and clawed my way back from hell, and all I've ever asked is the resources to keep fighting your war. I'm the best you have. I'm all you have. You said you wanted me out in front of this, and I am, so get behind me!"
And finally, as an ambient conversation on the Normandy:
Garrus: "... I was waiting for the Commander to tell the Council that if they didn't sit down and play nice, he was going to turn the Citadel around and take it home. And you know what? He/she would have."
James: "The Commander is the hardest piece of work ever to come out of the N7 program. I've heard that he/she can eat a handfull of sand and **** out a diamond. No joke."
Tali: "When I was back on the fleet, there was a story going around about a 'Shepard Drive'-"
Garrus: "Oh, this is going to be good."
Tali: "Apparently, the Normandy has a second stealth drive, powered by incompetant crewmembers that the Commander ejects from the rear airlock."
James: "Please tell me you didn't correct them, Sparks. That kind of story needs to be told."
Tali: "No, I did. I told them it that it only happened once, and that Crewman Preston was not ejected from the airlock to propel the ship, but because the Commander was out of ammunition."
Garrus: "Oh, that's
too good. Airlock fired, relativistic kill vehicles made out of incompetant crewmen? No one tell Javik about this, or he might just act happy for once."
Modifié par Fapmaster5000, 08 juin 2012 - 05:03 .