@Kita,
Enjoyed the story immensely, but before I comment I should share a couple of things. I am usually averse to first person narratives unless they are centred on an unreliable narrator or self-depreciating in style. Fortunately noir is also fine by me, as it usually (or seems) to involve a character with flawed or limited perceptions.
That is an interesting one – why I cannot relate to first person narratives but enjoy first person games immensely – topic for another day maybe.
Also – my guilty secret – I hate gangsters and gangster stories. Never watched Sopranos, loathed everyone in Goodfellas and gain no pleasure from such tales. Poor old de Niro has never been high on my list of great actors as a result, in spite of some of his fine performances.
This meant that I started reading Sam’s tale with dread, as I cannot relate to hitmen or their world. While enjoying the writing, I was totally alienated from the character. However, as the story progressed my thoughts changed. The moments with Laura were well done, and as it moved towards the redemptive climax I really got into it, as it transformed from gangster story to something I could identify with.
The ending was both apt and uplifting for me as it was how such a story should end. With the realignment of the universe in which Sam’s story was set, my whole interpretation changed from gangster glorification to a redemptive tale of friendship and the nature of relationships – true friendship and love vs. the poisoned hierarchies of criminal organisations.
Hope I read that right, but it meant I really enjoyed the story. Can’t offer much more than my personal observations as I am not the literary expert. Thanks though, for writing a tale I can identify with in spite of my preconceptions of the genre, I just love a good redemptive story!
And now – the EC. Uugh, looks like I have to admit defeat. They might pull it off, but sounds like some of my major issues ie Shepherd dead pretty much no matter what, will still be there.
From the sounds of the interview, it seems they addressed the initial outrage but then stopped addressing the criticism. They’ll look at the fallout of what they wrote rather than whether what was written was worth it, Such a shame but understandable given the timeframe they finished it in. The moment I saw the announcement I figured as much – just not enough time for major changes.
As a victim of the Black Screen of Death, I’m not tempted to create a new gamertag just to run through and see the result. Looks like I’ll be relying on Youtube and fellow posters. So sad, I had some fine speculations brewing away and was hoping for more time to chew the fat before the EC came out.
EDIT: What's this - they've fixed the EMS issue? So Shepherd can possibly live? (Single tear of joy rolls down this jaded gamer's cheek) I think I can live with that, always wanted my puppies and rainbows.
Modifié par frypan, 22 juin 2012 - 10:30 .