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[lillitheris]

“ME4: Unity”

Thought it was over? Peace and unity after defeating the Reapers? Think again.

Eevy Shepard & Liara, their friends, comrades, and the fate of the galaxy. From the battle for Earth and its aftermath into a new era. Gritty, fun, will go M/MA on occasion. Fixed ending, the history and starting will be mostly canon, with small deviations.

The game’s confines are escaped by Chapter 3. Includes most of the ME main cast in prominent roles.

Modifié par lillitheris, 19 juin 2012 - 02:21 .

[lillitheris]

Chapter 7 is now online.

[lillitheris]

I shuffled things a bit by adding an Intro/Glossary/Character list chapter in the beginning, to avoid having to add long A/N’s about glossary stuff, and to avoid the possibility of people not knowing who a particular character is (although that’s probably not going to be an issue for quite a while still).

Also did some light copyediting of the earlier chapters. No story changes, just stylistic.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 8 is up.

[wolfman391]

That was a Good read, keep up the good work

[Aimi]

I'm enjoying it. The first few chapters were a little confusing before you added that dramatis personae, and I'm still not totally sure about everything that's going on, but I get the gist of it and I'm being entertained.

[lillitheris]

daqs wrote...

I'm enjoying it. The first few chapters were a little confusing before you added that dramatis personae, and I'm still not totally sure about everything that's going on, but I get the gist of it and I'm being entertained.

Thanks! I’m glad the d.p. helps. I realized it might be useful when editing the first chapters…I don’t want to rely on the same five people all the time but unless you’re the type to just jump over unfamiliar names, there’s a few to keep track of.

Modifié par lillitheris, 13 mai 2012 - 10:49 .

[lillitheris]

And Chapter 9 is online.

A tad shorter, but it was a good spot for a break… The badassery quotient is a little higher than average today.

Modifié par lillitheris, 15 mai 2012 - 09:48 .

[lillitheris]

Chapter 10 is up.

[lillitheris]

And chapter 11.

I think chapter 12 will be set at least a day or two after these events, but I need to go through my timelines to verify.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 12 is online.

If you really hated the Stargazer, this one may be for you.

[Mandalore313]

I was going to go "tl:dr" but then I saw that you're using the metric system.
Finally, a person with some sense.
I had to read after that you see

[lillitheris]

Mandalore313 wrote...

I was going to go "tl:dr" but then I saw that you're using the metric system.
Finally, a person with some sense.
I had to read after that you see

Teehee, I figured that in the 22nd century even the last imperial bastions have been overrun :happy: especially with the SA being military-based. I briefly thought about using Kelvin for temperatures but figured Celsius would be bad enough

I must admit that the metric system is only in a side role in the story, but hopefully you’ll enjoy it nonetheless!

Modifié par lillitheris, 20 mai 2012 - 07:00 .

[lillitheris]

Chapter 13 is up.

Also enabled anon reviews in case someone doesn’t have a FFN account.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 14 yay!

[zyntifox]

Just started reading chapter 1 and im hooked! I just had to find this one week before my thesis is due, damn you!

[lillitheris]

Cstaf wrote...

Just started reading chapter 1 and im hooked! I just had to find this one week before my thesis is due, damn you!

Muhahaaa! :happy: Hope it stays interesting! Toss any critique/comments/yays you have either here, in a PM, or you can post anonymous reviews on FFN.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 15 is online.

Ended up making a little change, leaving this one a bit short…next one tomorrow, I hope.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 16.

[oldharryold]

Thanks lilli, I am enjoying your thought thru and well written story. Your hard work is appreciated. Hope you keep at it.

[lillitheris]

oldharryold wrote...

Thanks lilli, I am enjoying your thought thru and well written story. Your hard work is appreciated. Hope you keep at it.

I will! Thank you

[lillitheris]

Chapter 17 is online.

[lillitheris]

And here’s Chapter 18!.

[lillitheris]

Chapter 19 is online.

[Taalar]

just found and going to read