Mechler wrote...
lyle: I'm back from university, so let's do this.
1.Yes, the architect could be dead(along with half of the cast) but I did not cover all the outcomes. Oh and is there even one sane man who imported the death of the Architect? It's like importing a mass effect 2 save where someone died a the suicide mission.
Well you still have to respect people's decisions - some people don't trust the Architect - I personally liked him but you should know how pissed off people get when you enjoy their choices.
2. The Seekerrs are not working FOR anyone. They employ the player who can be a mage(excluding a mage class would cause a massive ****storm). I wanted the players to be completely unbiased about the conflict, so the mage origin story would need to explain why that particular mage is not in the conflict. yet. Imperial INtelligence is jsut a nod to SWTOR you know, another Bioware game. Since I think they do the same for the Sith EMpire as what the Seekers do for the Chantry.
Calling them Imperial Intelligence makes no sense and it's totally stupid as a nod to TOR - I had no idea there was a faction in TOR called Impreial Intelligence, so I'm just left there asking questions like "Who is this empire they work for?". I'd assume they'd work for Tervinter since that's the only Empire left in Thedas. It's such a stupid, unneeded and confusing thing to do simply to reference another Bioware game.
3. The loot we are given is just a little something given to us by the Seekers to help us on our way. The cool Seeker armor a weapon or anything. Does not have to be included. Raven is simply what I chose, because I like ravens. Can be anything. BUt is better to refer to than DA3 protagonist. They are so violent because because Leliana is/was kidnapped interrogated and tortured. But yeah you can probably resolve it peacefully, but I wanted a display of power for the Warden. The Revan of Dragon Age. They are not cooking asses. They are kicking. You know, the kidnappers's. Yes the two sides are the mages and the templars, since at this point Thedas is all about the mage-templar war. DUH. Well, no. Blights come when the darkspawn find an archdemon. This is not ther cycle of extinction. It does not have a pre tdetermined time. Oh and if you did not kill the Architect, you learn the the last Blight came when his experiment on Urthemiel backfired. So, it can be done artificiall at any time. Yes this is aconvenient excuse but it fit with Flemeth's plot. Oh and BTW I read that Bioware wolud really like to unite Hawk and Alistair for a Blight. And they plan to use Leliana to do it.
Okay fair enough by why would Raven and Hawke be so angry that Leliana was kidnapped and tortured? As far as I know, Hawke doesn't care for Leliana, and Raven has only met her like once...so why would they be all violent? Makes no sense.
4. Well, the dailish do worship Flemeth as Flemerth, so it might be possible, but I chose an Old God since this made the most sense for me. It explains her dragon form, her apparent immortality nad her motivation throughout the whole franchise. If you can work the dailish into it do it. You are obviously very into them. I can also name three real religions coming from the same source so there's no reason why Flemeth cant be both. You know the Dailish worshiping this original old god for their own reason. Hawk has to be founded because a) The Warden had nothing to do with the mage-templar war
He may not be found and may need to be killed c) most players want both Hawk AND the Warden back.
There Dalish worship 9 elven gods (5 male, 4 female), and there are the Forgotten Ones who are the evil Elven gods, and Fen'harel who can walk freely between either - but Fen'harel is the Dread Wolf, not a Dragon, and the Dalish gods don't add up perfectly with the numbers of the Old Gods, so I have no reason for me to believe that the Dalish gods worship the Old Gods. Tervinter worshipped the Old Gods, but the elven Empire was before Terveinter, so it makes no sense. PLOT HOLES.
I personally don't wnat Hawke back. Anyway the mage-templar war seems like such a aside in your story so far abotu double Blights, old Gods and Flemeth...so why do we even need Hawke? Why would we want to kill him? Can't we let him live out his life? Your characters have NO motivations or driving force in the story apart from "oh the plot needs it" and that is NOT good writing style.
All in all I think you are either a bad troll or not into this whole reading thing.
Of course there is no meat and substance. I will leave that part to Bioware. You know, the professionals, whose job it is. This is just the basic skeleton I want them to fill. Did you honestly thought I would do all the damned journal entries as well?
No I'm not a troll, definitely not, and even if I was you're replying to me so I wouldn't say I'm a bad one. And your writing is very bad and hard to read anyway - apoligies if English is not your first language but aside from that the story sounds like something a 12 year old would write. Too much fanservice, as I've said before it sounds like a terrible fan faction - people are doing things because the plot NEEDS them to do things, not because they are acting in character and working to fufill their personal goals.
Modifié par lyleoffmyspace, 15 mai 2012 - 06:21 .