Shallyah wrote...
I've missed much of this thread, but since the kid is the hot topic today, there's something that unsettles me about him the first time Shepard encounters him and offers him help. The kid doesn't only run away through the vents after refusing Shepard's aid. He says "You can't help me".
It sounds like a message, perhaps an omen. How old is possibly taht child, 7? maybe 9? What kind of kid of that age would say "You can't help me". Really, a kid would either be too scared to talk or if refusing aid he would just scream "No!" or "Leave me alone!" or even "Where is my mom?".
"You can't help me" in that context sounds way too mature for a kid of that age. Shows a total absence of fear or doubt unappropriate for a child and even most adults.
There was a non-IT discussion thread a few days about the writing surrounding the child. Many chalk it up to bad writing of a child in trauma. Most dismiss it as general bad writing.
I, on the other hand, feel that you'd have to deliberately write lines of dialogue like that for a child, instead of just defaulting to a tear-factory huddled in the corner of a vent. There are many other blunt-headed ways of writing the child if BioWare just wanted to make them a symbol of needless suffering on Earth: have him cry and squirm in terror, have Shepard "save" him from the vent, then see him die anyway in the crash after leading him to relative safety.
This, to me, feels
deliberate. Add in the fact that he just vanishes and Shepard looks confused afterwards, and ... well, given the thread we're in, I don't think I have to go any further.
Modifié par dreamgazer, 29 mai 2012 - 06:50 .