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[pyroboy2290]

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Kel Riever wrote...

At top of ladder
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

I was going to submit the first haiku dang it!

a flash of purple
shows the phantom barriers
pew pew palm gun dead

Technically, neither are haiku.

They're both 5-7-5:bandit:...

[whothehellstolemyname]

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Kel Riever wrote...

At top of ladder
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

I was going to submit the first haiku dang it!

a flash of purple
shows the phantom barriers
pew pew palm gun dead

Technically, neither are haiku.

do elaborate, I'd like to learn

[Carne Diablo]

Cerberus Phantoms
Trying to stab a Krogan?
Fools! I should eat them!

[Ibn_Shisha]

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Kel Riever wrote...

At top of ladder
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

I was going to submit the first haiku dang it!

a flash of purple
shows the phantom barriers
pew pew palm gun dead

Technically, neither are haiku.

do elaborate, I'd like to learn

Traditional haiku (though I do have to admit, this is not always observed in modern works) have to include a word indicating the season. 

[Kel Riever]

At top of ladder
In snow. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

[pyroboy2290]

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

Traditional haiku (though I do have to admit, this is not always observed in modern works) have to include a word indicating the season. 

Huh, I never knew that....
The More You Know

Modifié par pyroboy2290, 16 mai 2012 - 03:39 .

[NM_Che56]

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Kel Riever wrote...

At top of ladder
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

I was going to submit the first haiku dang it!

a flash of purple
shows the phantom barriers
pew pew palm gun dead

Technically, neither are haiku.

do elaborate, I'd like to learn

Traditional haiku (though I do have to admit, this is not always observed in modern works) have to include a word indicating the season. 

how's this?

It's a nice spring day
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

[MetalHeadDev]

Travis2310 wrote...

I hate Phantoms. I f***ing hate Phantoms. Here is a poem I wrote to express my feelings:

Hearing the sound of their stupid hand cannon thing gives me goosebumps
Their cheap insta-kill ability has pissed me off since day one
Countless medi-gels I have wasted, only to be stabbed immediately upon revival

Even while cloaked, the Phantom easily spots me
Moving desperately to find cover
Phantoms have to the ability to ****** me off
Like no other

How can I win? A lucky Widow headshot?
I wonder if using my cloak would work or not...
Maybe if I use Stasis I'll be fine
But I doubt it, because it only works 20% of the time...

Go to hell Phantom, I hate you so much
If I see Kai Leng, I'll kick him in the nuts
When I play against Cerberus on Gold, I curse with all my breath
And as a result, I choose to fight the Geth

Sincerely,

Angry Infiltrator     

dude lmao.  thats funny

[Sinaqui]

Sword covered in red
Spring air shimmers where she goes
The phantom, my foe

Modifié par Sinaqui, 16 mai 2012 - 03:49 .

[Kel Riever]

Master Che wrote...

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Ibn_Shisha wrote...

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

Kel Riever wrote...

At top of ladder
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

I was going to submit the first haiku dang it!

a flash of purple
shows the phantom barriers
pew pew palm gun dead

Technically, neither are haiku.

do elaborate, I'd like to learn

Traditional haiku (though I do have to admit, this is not always observed in modern works) have to include a word indicating the season. 

how's this?

It's a nice spring day
I'm alone. Last datalink.
Phantom finds me. Chop.

Victory is yours.

I think all Phantom poetry should be haiku.

[Ibn_Shisha]

en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kigo

We currently are in the traditional early summer, for which they only give one real example, wisteria.

Sexy miss phantom
Your barrier is purple
Like wisteria

Not exactly a hate poem though.

Maybe this?

I see a phantom
Like the burning of the sun
Incinerate her

[NM_Che56]

I'm on Firebase White
Winter's chill is in the air
Phantom! ...blood melts ice

[Carne Diablo]

Rage! Claymore! Melee!
Tuchanka Autumn rains blood
More Phantoms are dead!

[Sinaqui]

Air swimming 'round her
Winter's chill biting my soul
We embrace. I fall.

[NM_Che56]

Hot sun scortches sky
A phantom is here. YOU DIE
Eat hot lead, you b____!

[pyroboy2290]

Man, the last few haiku's have been REALLY good!

[whothehellstolemyname]

stabbed through chest with sword
is it cold or is it me
winter is coming

[NM_Che56]

Overload your a**!
Hit you with incinerate!
Tech Burst! Ashes pollinate...

Modifié par Master Che, 16 mai 2012 - 04:08 .

[Ibn_Shisha]

One hot summer night
Phantom across street on Ghost
Black Widow ends wave

[Kel Riever]

Summer noon blood bath.
Krogan keeps hacking Phantoms.
I'm hungry. Snack time.

Modifié par Kel Riever, 16 mai 2012 - 04:03 .

[Sinaqui]

whothehellstolemyname wrote...

stabbed through chest with sword
is it cold or is it me
winter is coming

Her sword impales me
Darkness coming, I am lost
Winter has arrived

Modifié par Sinaqui, 16 mai 2012 - 04:04 .

[rmccowen]

The hand-cannon noise
echoes from bleak Condor rock.
Suddenly: shieldless.

[NM_Che56]

You think you're so slick
Hiding in spring's long shadows
Pardon my cobra

[Carne Diablo]

Barriers are down
Carnage burns like hot summer
Dinner is ready!

[Ibn_Shisha]

Pretty sure baseball counts:

Phantom sneaks in cloak
Near oblivious squadmate
Frag grenade fastball