That's.....very elegant. I think the outcome is very appropriate. I see one possible problem: the rationale for why your version of Synthesis gives immunity to indoctrination. As the main effect I find it a little difficult to connect it to "the" problem as a solution. It could be a side effect, though, then it would work with no further elaboration.
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