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#4151
Posté 17 août 2012 - 10:43
Shield deflecting throw? I'll go with that. Lift/Pull/Lash? I'll go with that too. I think it can make sense that a barrier that can deflect a bullet/explosive blast might interfere with a biotic field's ability to get a grip on the protected individual, but I think it would drain the shields a bit. On the other hand, I would accept it if an author chose to counter the game logic too. There are some valid arguments why it might not as well.
A shield defending against Singularity/Stasis/Warp/Reave? No. Biotic Charge? Yup, but the shields will suffer one hell of a blow. And so forth.
I'd have to look it up somewhere, but I believe that shields were based on mass effect technology too. Isn't that how they deflected things? In which case it makes sense that a shield would interfere with other mass effect fields that interact with it. But in any case, I think it's all up to the writer's interpretation.
#4152
Posté 17 août 2012 - 10:46
#4153
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:11
Didn't know if the civilizations beyond the Reapers would know how to properly move it, and even if they did if they would. I sorta thought the humans being the front line force saving the universe might earn some cool points.
Also is anyone really awesome at creating characters? I have one with little/no backstory and I have zero skill build characters unless I have a foundation. Said character would be antagonist/ new heir apparent of Cerberus, so being must be a strong character.
#4154
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:18
#4155
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:43
Sorry, yeah, should've clarified on that. Since Miranda 'has' Warp herself. I was thinking in terms of whether she'd be able to throw Kai Leng about or not.Drussius wrote...
In the game, some biotic powers do affect shielded enemies.
I did think the codex mentioned something about shields having a repulsive property, so was going to go with that anyway. Thanks for confirming it
And cheers for all the input, guys. Certainly helps me gauge what people might be used t.
#4156
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:46
Putting that aside, I think most races in the galaxy would object to it remaining in orbit of earth, whether humanity was considered the driving force in defeating the Reapers or not (personally, while Shepard did all the gathering, I think it was a collaborative effort). Most races already object to how fast humans became a force in galactic politics, and leaving the Citadel in orbit of our home world would probably only breed even more resentment.
Edit: hot_heart ninjaed a response in on me!
Modifié par Drussius, 17 août 2012 - 11:47 .
#4157
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:51
#4158
Posté 17 août 2012 - 12:05
#4159
Posté 17 août 2012 - 12:09
Like the odd possible team formations, such as three quarian infiltrators, with a krogan soldier who keeps charging in, headbutting everything while simultaneously blocking all their shots.
...I imagine those three guys were pretty annoyed with me.
#4160
Posté 17 août 2012 - 12:15
"What is your mission here?"
"No mission. The geth appear. We kill them."
"How long have you been here?"
"Two months, nine days, three hours, seven minutes, forty-one seconds, and counting."
There are a fair number of grammatical errors and misspellings, but considering it's just supposed to be a humorous series of inside jokes, it's amusing enough.
#4161
Posté 17 août 2012 - 12:19
Drussius wrote...
^ I'm pretty sure the massive explosion that disabled the citadel when the crucible fired would have disengaged the conduit beam.
The epilogue slides showed the beam functioning in rebuilt Earth though it was off when the VF returned to the citadel. I don't think they turned it on themselves but probably it went online once repairs were made.
And I never heard of the sad Salariian.
#4162
Posté 17 août 2012 - 02:33
Modifié par Spiritwolf1, 17 août 2012 - 02:39 .
#4163
Posté 17 août 2012 - 03:33
“It could be good, it could be bad, who’s to say?”
#4164
Posté 17 août 2012 - 03:51
Cmdr. Ken Shepard wrote...
I have a content question for what I'm currently working on. Would you find it unrealistic for the Citadel to still in the Sol System/ just outside Earth's atmosphere in the same place as it was during the retaking of Earth?
Didn't know if the civilizations beyond the Reapers would know how to properly move it, and even if they did if they would. I sorta thought the humans being the front line force saving the universe might earn some cool points.
Also is anyone really awesome at creating characters? I have one with little/no backstory and I have zero skill build characters unless I have a foundation. Said character would be antagonist/ new heir apparent of Cerberus, so being must be a strong character.
Unrealistic? Not at all. In fact I say leave it in high Earth orbit. Then you can play around with the idea of humanity having a large ego over the fact that the hub of galactic goverment is right on their doorstep and what that means for relations with the other races.
#4165
Posté 17 août 2012 - 04:08
Cmdr. Ken Shepard wrote...
Also is anyone really awesome at creating characters? I have one with little/no backstory and I have zero skill build characters unless I have a foundation. Said character would be antagonist/ new heir apparent of Cerberus, so being must be a strong character.
You do seem to have a foundation. This would make a good exercise.
He (or she?) is 1. opposed to Shepardians and 2. raising to power in Cerberus. So:
– What is the path they came up through the ranks in Cerberus? Which cells did they operate in, which cells did they lead, who are their friends/enemies within Cerberus? Any mentors? Bullies? What is the power plan to solidify the control? Does that require eliminating someone? Is that a problem emotionally?
– Why did they join Cerberus to begin with? When? If young, why was Cerberus interested? If older, what were they doing before?
– Are they involved with someone? Were they? How does that person feel about Cerberus?
– Do they wish to continue Cerberus as it was in ME3, or ME1 (and ME2, unbeknownst to Shepard)? Why do they (or don’t they?) If they’re xenophobic, why? If not, why (and why are they in Cerberus)?
– Do they dislike Shepard (or someone else we know) in particular? If so, why? Have they met? When? How?
And so on. You can branch out of those into ever-further details! I suppose we could do this as a group exercise…you come up with answers, we come up with more questions!
#4166
Posté 17 août 2012 - 06:20
hot_heart wrote...
I'd be interested to hear how everyone deals with the shields and biotic stuff. As in, gameplay-wise, biotic powers don't affect a target if they still have shields/barriers.
Do you ignore it because it is just a gameplay thing or do you like to think there's a plausible explanation for why that might be the case?
On top of that, I need to figure out the course of events with Miranda at Sanctuary. Eek.
BW don't stick to their own canon on this kind of stuff, so why should we? Any cutscene where someone is shot dead, their armour and shields suddenly become ineffective.
#4167
Posté 17 août 2012 - 11:30
lillitheris wrote...
Cmdr. Ken Shepard wrote...
Also is anyone really awesome at creating characters? I have one with little/no backstory and I have zero skill build characters unless I have a foundation. Said character would be antagonist/ new heir apparent of Cerberus, so being must be a strong character.
You do seem to have a foundation. This would make a good exercise.
He (or she?) is 1. opposed to Shepardians and 2. raising to power in Cerberus. So:
– What is the path they came up through the ranks in Cerberus? Which cells did they operate in, which cells did they lead, who are their friends/enemies within Cerberus? Any mentors? Bullies? What is the power plan to solidify the control? Does that require eliminating someone? Is that a problem emotionally?
– Why did they join Cerberus to begin with? When? If young, why was Cerberus interested? If older, what were they doing before?
– Are they involved with someone? Were they? How does that person feel about Cerberus?
– Do they wish to continue Cerberus as it was in ME3, or ME1 (and ME2, unbeknownst to Shepard)? Why do they (or don’t they?) If they’re xenophobic, why? If not, why (and why are they in Cerberus)?
– Do they dislike Shepard (or someone else we know) in particular? If so, why? Have they met? When? How?
And so on. You can branch out of those into ever-further details! I suppose we could do this as a group exercise…you come up with answers, we come up with more questions!
I'm slowly working Cerberus in. Starting a war between the Krogan and Salarian's is proving more difficult than I'd hoped when trying to channel the council. Luckily Cerberus is my ace in the hole.
#4168
Guest_alleyd_*
Posté 18 août 2012 - 12:41
Guest_alleyd_*
My question regards a key story point I want to develop, Sensual Healing. Inspired by Shepard and Jacks LI in ME2, how he starts Jack's healing by loving her and supporting her. I want to extend that to the crew and Shepard himself.
I have Shepard suffering from the loneliness and stress of command and he's beaten down after arrival. He's about to crack but can't stop and can't open up to the crew in case of morale failure. One of the female crew decides to take matters into her hands and arranges a little downtime for the commander and tries to help him relax innocantly but lust takes over and then the sex begins.
I don't know the rules. Is it a step too far to start straight in with an extended sex scene that seems out of place when the storyline kicks off but is essential for the later storyline?
#4169
Posté 18 août 2012 - 01:07
alleyd wrote...
I don't know the rules. Is it a step too far to start straight in with an extended sex scene that seems out of place when the storyline kicks off but is essential for the later storyline?
Just to make sure I'm understanding correctly, are you asking if the story can start off with a sex scene that isn't explained until later in the plot?
#4170
Posté 18 août 2012 - 02:57
#4171
Posté 18 août 2012 - 03:03
I used to write chapters that were like under 1000 words and maybe a little over. Now I think my chapters would be to short if it wasn't over 2000
#4172
Posté 18 août 2012 - 03:16
MacNasty wrote...
I was looking at my prologue on fanfiction... And I was surprised to see it just under 2,000 words. I had thought it was so much more... Do you often know around how much you right, or do you generally just wait to see what the word count is. (Unless you have a word counter on the program you use.)
When I started, I didn't much care how many words I threw out. I was in a hurry to get the ideas out, just a few chapters and that's it. But now I've going farther and farther. And the chapters seem to get longer and longer. I'm mostly afraid I'm making the chapters too long. Now, I usually check how much space a chapter takes up (29k means I'm hitting close to 5k words) and I'll try to end it there.
#4173
Posté 18 août 2012 - 03:17
#4174
Guest_alleyd_*
Posté 18 août 2012 - 04:01
Guest_alleyd_*
Anaki86 wrote...
alleyd wrote...
I don't know the rules. Is it a step too far to start straight in with an extended sex scene that seems out of place when the storyline kicks off but is essential for the later storyline?
Just to make sure I'm understanding correctly, are you asking if the story can start off with a sex scene that isn't explained until later in the plot?
Apologies I should have been clearer I hope I do better this time.
I'm writing him as a human with human needs and failings. He talks to his pets and he's kind to his crew. Kelly loves him because he saved her from the collectors She's still damaged and their bonding is meant to heal them both.
The events are Shepard mind is failing because of exhaustion and stress and he can't share the burden of command even for a second. he needs to be taken out of himself in order to start to heal. The only way I could think to do that is for him to allow a lover the sharing of roles in a love scene. He briefly but willingly let's her have a commanding role because he likes to please his lover and wants to fullfill her desires. In doing so he starts to heal. Its relevence and importance is crucial at that stage
The main adventure starts with Shepard being condemmned to death by the council in chapter 2. The ME2 crew have to hear about this, the normandy is on lockdown and someone has to get the word out about Shepards fate.
#4175
Posté 18 août 2012 - 06:00





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