Spiritwolf1 wrote...
heh Yeah , my second story is doing much better in the other place then it is in FF
A pain having to dump all the chapts into threads... just spent time doing that and ended up with an extra chapter? Not sure if it was the numbering or if I split a chapter without realising, but it seems to read okay. Go figure.
I'm not trying to set a precedent, but...
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Rila and Felere run down the beach back towards their sister and mother.
“You'll never beat me!” shouts Rila.
Rila arrives back at the family first, falling dead tired onto the sand, closely followed by Felere with sand spraying all over the area.
Mirata lowers her sunglasses to look over them with a little disgust, “Tsk, watch it!”, then returns to reading.
“Will you come swimming, mother?” Felere asks.
“Please, mother!”
Samara rises from her beach towel and straightens her swimming costume around her athletic body, the result of years training and exercising.
“Are you coming to swim with your sisters, Mirata?”
“I wouldn't be seen dead.” Mirata says without looking up from her datapad.
“A simple 'no' would suffice. But very well.”
The two girls always feel proud walking with their elegant mother along the beach. She is quite the local celebrity due to her prowess on the skyball team. Mirata thinks she seeks more from life, always searching for new ideas and philosophies. She is rarely to be found without some new tome of art and literature, essays and debate. She certainly likes to think she is a cut above her simple siblings. Her maiden stage cannot come soon enough so she can get out on her own and explore all the mysteries of the galaxy.
As she reaches the water's edge, Samara wades in to hip height then dives forward with barely a splash as her
body cuts into the water. The two younger sisters run into the water, splashing and laughing then swim to try and catch up with their mother who is already powerfully moving through the water.
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i play on 360
I couldn't join Spiritwolf1 anyway though I did find the nick. Have to be in friends listing in order to join in.
I think I happened to have a game with you once. That was back when the new maps were introduced. I remembered because of your nick, or a nick that looked like yours. It was the London map and there were only 3 of us. We wiped on wave 10, I think, getting 4 nodes. The 3rd node was stuck out in the open and we were not able to hold back the mobs (Cerberus). None of us were playing a class with grenades which would have helped, 
but I think a bunch of Asari walking around naked sounds more like a fanatasy then what Asari were really meant to be like. I don't think I have read anywhere that the Asari walk around thier home world naked. Maybe in a dorm they are more relax and go from their rooms to shower naked, but I bet that would never be all of them, just a few bold ones
