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#5176
Posté 12 octobre 2012 - 07:14
and Fluffy I took no offence it was fun talking and I really do think our views are the same on this, but IM still not taking a shower with my sister thanks
#5177
Posté 12 octobre 2012 - 09:19
well, welcome back then (although i didn't know you beforedpMeggers wrote...
Hello again to all my fellow ficcers! I'm recovering from a 3 month bout of real life during which time I've been neglecting you (and your lovely fics) horribly. Many apologies. A no less enthusiastic hello to those who have popped in since my last appearance, I can't wait to read your words.
As Sam said to Rosie at the end of The Return of the King: "Well, I'm back." And just in time for a discussion of asari cultural mores surrounding nudity. My thoughts - asari clothing are probably chosen for aesthetics. I always thought traditional asari clothing was crafted more from really floaty fabrics like silks and chiffons than the weird plastic-y looking stuff we see in game. (Think Padme's rainbow dress in Attack of the Clones).
Also: Happy birthday Drussius.
A note about birthdays - Late September/Early October have a fairly heavy concentration of birthdays in my family/group of friends. I worked out once that it's about 9 months after New Year's Eve/Valentine's day.
Re: Character takeover.
Have I experienced it? Yes. Conversation was supposed to be Damon Shepard's origin story and all about how he went from being an orphaned street rat gang member to being part of a unit that got wiped out by thresher maws and a particular friend that he made and lost along the way. Thanks to the introduction of that friend (Robbie/R.J.), suddenly the fic becomes less about Shepard and more about Shepard, R.J., their families and how the galaxy reacted to the tragedy of Akuze. And even then family members who were supposed to be minor characters elbowed their way into prominence (I'm looking at you Tess). I think part of it was just the fact that a lot of R.J.'s character was defined by the way he grew up and how close it made him and his sister. I also needed Tess to be a bit more fleshed out for the Blitz scenes - otherwise no one would have sympathized with R.J. and Damon when they didn't know if she was safe. If I let myself, I could probably just spend the rest of my time writing backstories for my various minor characters and ignore the main plot entirely. (Unlike what I've been doing up until now - that is...not writing at all).
It's good to be back.
and to the rest of you, i will not be posting anything to do with aformentioned asari conversation, as i have been doing (avoiding the thread somewhat) as it make me *slightly* uncomfortable, and i wouldn't know anything to help anyways
#5178
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 12:17
And Dark Satris, no worries
#5179
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 12:45
@dpMeggers, hello!
#5180
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 12:53
and slight update; i worked (and am about to more) on chapter 9 for SE, should be coming out next week at the latest.
#5181
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 09:20
#5182
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 12:28
But with my tiny rant out of the way, welcome back to Meggers!
#5183
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 01:21
#5184
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 01:41
I was going to ask a question...now I've forgotten what it was...getting old....and grouchy....really.
#5185
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 02:01
Modifié par Dark Satris, 13 octobre 2012 - 02:02 .
#5186
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 02:52
#5187
Posté 13 octobre 2012 - 04:31
unfortunately, i cant help you there
#5188
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 03:46
Writing a chapter where nothing really important happens, it's just there to move the story along. The creativity has run its course, it's editing this chapter that's the tedious part.
Modifié par HYR 2.0, 14 octobre 2012 - 03:46 .
#5189
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 03:49
i know the feeling; im experiencing it right now for Chapter 9, i know what to wright, but i get bored in 1/2 a second when i doHYR 2.0 wrote...
I'm getting a case of something I've now dubbed "Boring Chapter Syndrome."
Writing a chapter where nothing really important happens, it's just there to move the story along. The creativity has run its course, it's editing this chapter that's the tedious part.
*sigh*
#5190
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 04:44
HYR 2.0 wrote...
I'm getting a case of something I've now dubbed "Boring Chapter Syndrome."
Writing a chapter where nothing really important happens, it's just there to move the story along. The creativity has run its course, it's editing this chapter that's the tedious part.
For me, that includes action scenes, where i'm currently at right now in my fic. Storming Chora's Den...*yawn*. Action scenes are so...I don't know, limited, and I always feel trapped by lack of details, and over-usage of certain descriptors and actions.
But yeah, I know the feeling. Where you have a chapter ahead of you that doesn't really go anywhere, but it's necessary for what comes afterward. They're always a chore, so I hope you can get it over with asap^_^
#5191
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 11:40
#5192
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 01:48
Modifié par Dark Satris, 14 octobre 2012 - 01:49 .
#5193
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:05
An implant and amp can help augment these abilities (as in, Liara makes use of them in ME1), but I don't believe they are necessary for asari to control them, as it is for humans.
Modifié par hot_heart, 14 octobre 2012 - 02:05 .
#5194
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:12
I know there are fallback ones for certain races and characters ("Keelah!", "(By the) Goddess!") but I assume some of you are a little more diverse and creative.
Personally, I don't really have much scope for it, and I tend to stick to the game's own language usage both in severity and style. As in, Miranda won't be swearing up a storm, but she'd use damn/damnit/bloody.
#5195
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:14
#5196
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:16
#5197
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:17
hot_heart wrote...
While I'm here...does anyone put much thought into how their characters curse?
I know there are fallback ones for certain races and characters ("Keelah!", "(By the) Goddess!") but I assume some of you are a little more diverse and creative.
Personally, I don't really have much scope for it, and I tend to stick to the game's own language usage both in severity and style. As in, Miranda won't be swearing up a storm, but she'd use damn/damnit/bloody.
Yea, the worst I've had Miranda say is that 'this is a ****ty mess'. My Liara 'goddess'es a fair bit. I try to stick with what's been set in the universe. Occasional strong language in situations that warrant it. Except Jack, who effs and jeffs all over the shop haha.
#5198
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 02:51
S.R.
#5199
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 03:09
I have to say though, I'm having a really good
#5200
Posté 14 octobre 2012 - 04:29
Obsidian Gryphon wrote...
I've no idea how to write conforntations between political groups so I've to look into the BSN forums to get an idea. The key word here is "political". I'm a ignoramus where this is concerned but decided it's just a duke out between different ideas.
I have to say though, I'm having a really good:lol:
:lol:
at some of the weird logic/arguments presented in the forums.
I'd say it depends on the context. If two factions are part of the same political system they may 'duke it out' in the political forum of that system. If one is an 'underdog' faction, they may resort to terrorist activity. Two great powers may resort to war.
A policital stance is based on concepts and ideas, so setting those premises for the two factions would be important, and particularly what points cause the difference or 'conflict'. The classic right wing VS left wing is a good example. In its most crude form, it could be descibed that right wing is about the self, left wing is about the many, I wouldn't use BSN as a bench mark though :happy:
Modifié par MrStoob, 14 octobre 2012 - 04:29 .





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