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#5726
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Ignis Mors wrote...

Those are interesting questions. And they have me thinking about parts of the characters past that I haven't before. (Rubs hands together while laughing like a stereotypical villain.)

It can lead to fun writing exercises. I ran some of the canon characters (Tali, Garrus, Anderson) through, and filled in blanks where I felt appropriate, reasonable, or when I was feeling creative. Helps me approach the characters easier, and lets me extrapolate from what the game lets us know about them, and gives me the opportunity to add y personal interpretation a little. :)

Like i said before, it helps fill characters with attributes and experiences that bring them to life, that are much like what we go through.

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fluffywalrus wrote...

Ignis Mors wrote...

Those are interesting questions. And they have me thinking about parts of the characters past that I haven't before. (Rubs hands together while laughing like a stereotypical villain.)

It can lead to fun writing exercises. I ran some of the canon characters (Tali, Garrus, Anderson) through, and filled in blanks where I felt appropriate, reasonable, or when I was feeling creative. Helps me approach the characters easier, and lets me extrapolate from what the game lets us know about them, and gives me the opportunity to add y personal interpretation a little. :)

Like i said before, it helps fill characters with attributes and experiences that bring them to life, that are much like what we go through.


You know, I just started writing an original novel this week and I was having a bit of a crisis with the main protagonist that sounds similar to what you're going through.  Fluffywalrus has given some great advice here and I suggest if you're struggling for long-term character development, simply grab a pencil and scrap of paper and draw a 'character map'.  It's a logical, maybe even clinical approach but it works.  The exercise is as follows:


Step 1:  Divide your story up into stages, depending on the narrative.  This can be something as simple as beginning, middle and end, or you can do it by major events.  In ME1, for example, I would divide it by major location, i.e Eden Prime, Citadel, Therum, Feros, etc etc.  

Step 2:  Take three defining traits of your character and put them in the first box.  Then, go to the next box and consider how much this character has changed, if at all.

Step 3:  Next, pick two characteristics from the first box and transfer them to the second box and pick a new one to add.

Step 4:  Rinse and repeat until you have a fully planned development arc spanning the entire story.  This can be relatively subtle or severe as befits your story but I can't stress how clear this will make things in your mind.


In my experience, writing can be a very organic and fluid process but don't rely on that frame of mind - it's temperamental, unreliable and very inconsistent.  RPing can be a great way to get 'into their heads' but it won't guarantee an even and smooth character development.  Some element of careful planning is required for that.

My advice is to look at your characters (and your story as a whole) with a good degree of logical thinking.  Your story construction will only improve and the results may surprise you.

Modifié par mothbanquet, 08 décembre 2012 - 10:31 .


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thanks for the suggestion, mothbanquet. And this may be a weird question, but how do you put a link to your fics in the signature box,and have it just show the name? (How to put in a link at all would be appreciated. Not sure on how it works.)

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Ignis Mors wrote...

thanks for the suggestion, mothbanquet. And this may be a weird question, but how do you put a link to your fics in the signature box,and have it just show the name? (How to put in a link at all would be appreciated. Not sure on how it works.)

 You type the name of your fic in your signature box, then you highlight it and click on the "isert/edit link" button. Then add the url there.^_^

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thanks! Been bothering me for a while.

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I've come to a sad realization. I finished my newest Chapter on Friday, and I've had two whole days to try to widen my buffer of finished Chapters before I'm scheduled to publish my next one on schedule. And yet I've wasted the last two days without doing any writing. It's the first time in months that I literally haven't written anything for a day, let alone two in a row. Just had to share my sorrows.

And also, bump.

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Drussius wrote...

I've come to a sad realization. I finished my newest Chapter on Friday, and I've had two whole days to try to widen my buffer of finished Chapters before I'm scheduled to publish my next one on schedule. And yet I've wasted the last two days without doing any writing. It's the first time in months that I literally haven't written anything for a day, let alone two in a row. Just had to share my sorrows.

And also, bump.

Aye. I've had time to write my chapters on Feros, but I've spent too much of it worrying about my upcoming paper that's due and my exams to really be able to focus. The stress from November kept me really productive, and the bundlle of fluffy material I wrote certainly helped, but now that the fluff is over and the end of the term is coming to a head...I'm just too exhausted to write serious material right now.

I've been working on material three chapters ahead just so I can feel productive and get back in the swing of things, and i've done some of my paper, but...I can't will myself to do the writing my next chapter needs me to do.

Your buffer's still big, I wouldn't worry too much right now. It's Christmas season and there's a lot of stress involved, and people get busy (or feel busy/overwhelmed) pretty easily.

We can do this...together! :wizard:

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Hugs all around

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fluffywalrus wrote...

Drussius wrote...

I've come to a sad realization. I finished my newest Chapter on Friday, and I've had two whole days to try to widen my buffer of finished Chapters before I'm scheduled to publish my next one on schedule. And yet I've wasted the last two days without doing any writing. It's the first time in months that I literally haven't written anything for a day, let alone two in a row. Just had to share my sorrows.

And also, bump.

Aye. I've had time to write my chapters on Feros, but I've spent too much of it worrying about my upcoming paper that's due and my exams to really be able to focus. The stress from November kept me really productive, and the bundlle of fluffy material I wrote certainly helped, but now that the fluff is over and the end of the term is coming to a head...I'm just too exhausted to write serious material right now.

I've been working on material three chapters ahead just so I can feel productive and get back in the swing of things, and i've done some of my paper, but...I can't will myself to do the writing my next chapter needs me to do.

Your buffer's still big, I wouldn't worry too much right now. It's Christmas season and there's a lot of stress involved, and people get busy (or feel busy/overwhelmed) pretty easily.

We can do this...together! :wizard:


Well, you have a lot going on it seems, and I think anyone would understand. As far as I go, I have no such excuses. I spent a good portion of Saturday playing Silver games on multiplayer solo in an attempt to get extractions for the Solo challenges. My kids were with their mom, so I can't even claim they were distracting me. I just plain got lazy this weekend.

But you're right about one thing. I do have a decent buffer, and I suppose it's a bit petty of me to complain that I got nothing done for a couple days when I have a four-Chapter lead. That's my bad. Image IPB

But still, thanks to both you and spirit for the support! Now I suppose I'd better get to writing my author's note for today's Chapter of my story. It's almost time to put it up!

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An additional observation I just made... My last three Chapters of my story (today's and the previous two) were all in the high 8,000 word count range. But apparently I am getting wordy in my author's notes in the end, as the A/N on all three catapulted them into the 9,000 word range when I look at the final word counts.

Apparently I talk too much. Image IPB

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Drussius wrote...

I've come to a sad realization. I finished my newest Chapter on Friday, and I've had two whole days to try to widen my buffer of finished Chapters before I'm scheduled to publish my next one on schedule. And yet I've wasted the last two days without doing any writing. It's the first time in months that I literally haven't written anything for a day, let alone two in a row. Just had to share my sorrows.

And also, bump.


Don't feel too bad about it.  While it's great that you've managed to maintain consistency over the past few months (arguably the most important thing for any writer), a break always does you some good.  By all means, cultivate that desire to plunge back into your usual productivity but don't beat yourself up for having a couple of days off.

Regarding the author's notes, I personally don't go for author's notes in every chapter, opting for a larger body of notes at the very end of the story.  Most people don't actually read them and they can end up being something of a mood-killer, breaking the immersion, especially when reading chapters back-to-back.  Having them at the end doesn't force them on people, and for those that are interested it makes a nice read in of itself.

Just a thought.

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Ha, the latest Dexter featured a similar style of scene to one I have planned...and it would have to feature Yvonne Strahovski, aka. Miranda Lawson.

It's a film noir trope, I'm not copying that show!

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Yeah poor MIranda, her days are numbered on Dexter...

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Ha, well, since she's a guest star I never expected anything beyond the one season. I'm just hoping her character isn't as boldly stupid as the last episode may suggest. Not that I'd put it past the writers...

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mothbanquet wrote...

Drussius wrote...

I've come to a sad realization. I finished my newest Chapter on Friday, and I've had two whole days to try to widen my buffer of finished Chapters before I'm scheduled to publish my next one on schedule. And yet I've wasted the last two days without doing any writing. It's the first time in months that I literally haven't written anything for a day, let alone two in a row. Just had to share my sorrows.

And also, bump.


Don't feel too bad about it.  While it's great that you've managed to maintain consistency over the past few months (arguably the most important thing for any writer), a break always does you some good.  By all means, cultivate that desire to plunge back into your usual productivity but don't beat yourself up for having a couple of days off.

Regarding the author's notes, I personally don't go for author's notes in every chapter, opting for a larger body of notes at the very end of the story.  Most people don't actually read them and they can end up being something of a mood-killer, breaking the immersion, especially when reading chapters back-to-back.  Having them at the end doesn't force them on people, and for those that are interested it makes a nice read in of itself.

Just a thought.


I know there's nothing wrong with a couple days off. I was just sad to break my streak, as I've written at least one little section every day for months now. Even on my birthday I wrote something, and I was incredibly hung over that morning, since my brother's b-day party was the night before...

As for the Author's Notes, I put one in every Chapter, just to at least thank people for reading, fav/following and whatnot. And occasionally to comment on the thought process behind this or that, as well as to give an estimate of the next update. I like to have the estimates in there so people know the story is regularly being updated. But I figure since I put a few line breaks beforehand and precede that section with "Author's Note:" , there's no harm in including them. Anyone who doesn't want to read it or who is worried about losing immersion in the story can skip it, as you said. I just thought it was funny that I've been wordy on them of late.

I couldn't really put them all at the end of the story, since the end is still quite a ways off and I think some things need to be addressed prior to some random day months from now. If I were publishing the entire story all at once, I'd definitely include them as an addendum at the end of the whole story. But this is working for the time being.

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Author's Notes are not my thing so my chapters are mostly squeaky clean, except for a couple in which I flapped my tongue a bit.

P.S. Just watched the ending of Halo 4. The Diaduct, wow, reminds me of Harbinger but then it's the same VA, it just didn't have that heavy synthetic overtones.

Though I've only gone through the first game, Cortana did leave an impression. How not to when the A.I.'s the only thing guiding the Master Chief through that lonely struggle. So I'm rather sorry she finally met her end but not before she saved MC.

Watching that video only brought home all the misses and lacks of ME. I really find it a great pity. After 9 months, I do not think of the fine stuff about it, I think of the failures of the trilogy. I don't think I'm the only one.

Through my years of gaming, I've never come across a game that left so sour an aftertaste. Kudos, BW, in this, you have achieved a first.

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Yeah the hungover thing. I have conducted a personal experiment and found that the older I get the longer it takes me to get over a hangover. On Halloween, our big neighbour party, which for some reason I don't really remember a lot of, it took me a good three days to completely get over it. This prompted the promise to not ever drink like that ever again, until maybe New Years Eve.

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I was wondering about something in the latest chapter for Meus Mundus. It starts out like a typical chapter, starting where the previous one left off. Then it goes through a few different things with no big issues. But then, at the end of it, Shepard does something I had somewhat expected as I had to take a break to get some rest, and when she did it, I didn't like it, so I tried to change it,  but it didn't work. She did it anyways. What do you guys think? Should I cut that content because I don't like it, or keep it? Thanks a ton.:)

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Nothing more to say, just bump...

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ok if I need to bump a second time, Im going to use it to advertise: Just finished chapter 14 of Hallowed Truth.... if anyone reads it let me know if you think I wimped out or if I should have stopped where I did...

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Spiritwolf1 wrote...

ok if I need to bump a second time, Im going to use it to advertise: Just finished chapter 14 of Hallowed Truth.... if anyone reads it let me know if you think I wimped out or if I should have stopped where I did...

Like i've said before in this thread: If you feel confident you can pull it off, and that it would fit within the tone of the chapter, then I'd say go for it if you want to. Even if those two conditions are true, though, it doesn't mean you have to, and it's certainly not a bad idea to refrain. I thought the chapter went quite well :)

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*blushes* Why thank you Fluffy, but I had the full scene played out, just if I decide to write it later Ill make it like a easter egg

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 FYI guys, if any of you are interested in spreading your creative wings I've recently come across a wonderful collaboration group on deviantART.  If any of you are interested in writing for comics in particular in addition to/after your fan work, this could be a fantastic opportunity!

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Drussius wrote...

I couldn't really put them all at the end of the story, since the end is still quite a ways off and I think some things need to be addressed prior to some random day months from now. If I were publishing the entire story all at once, I'd definitely include them as an addendum at the end of the whole story. But this is working for the time being.


To each his own, right? :D

That's one advantage of submitting on deviantART; you can work in notes separately to the main text and still have them read by everyone who visits.

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Greetings everyone! :)

I'd like to ask a few things, I hope you know the answer to better than I do.

Can the Normandy's shuttle go FTL?
What is its maximum travel distance?
Is there any detailed lore on asari physiology that details their physical properties, regarding organs, and their skin?

Thank you for your help!

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