Efvie wrote...
Why meh? Things happen, it’s life!
Concrit: to me, it seems there’s significant risk of just falling to cliché with either of those two options. How many times have you seen one or the other? The grateful affected, the vendetta… it seems like you might have done it just fine the first time. The story part, anyway:
Perhaps the sense of failure with this character has more to do with the execution than the actual story point? You may and probably have tried that approach already.
I’m personally not a fan of the ‘everything and everyone in a story must serve the story’ doctrine (if I’m an adherent, it’s by accident). I also love defusing or skipping dramatic tension, because that, too, happens in life. I (like to think I) know my characters well enough to know how they’ll react to events—and how events themselves unfold—that I can get it right just on that basis. They do what they do.
And that said, I’ll repeat that these are just my personal views… I may well be a very insignificant minority, and others have no qualms at all with reading such a revised version.
Haha, I inadvertetly ****** off some of the people in my pen and paper RP group by creating a big living town for them to operate within that's filled with all sorts of junk and dead ends. Thankfully, I'm good at improv, because they always chase dead ends and meaningless stuff, so I usually try to give some some opportunities to chase real stuff along the way
It's just good to not have everything link up, otherwise it's a small world situation, and on a settign with a galactic scale, that simply doesn't make a lot of sense. It wouldn't keep me from suspending disbelief but it's not something I particularly enjoy.
And it's also good to skip past conversations that readers might assume would happen, or simply skipping tension, because you're right, it could happen depending on how the character would react to a situation. The only important part is for every main arc, event, or conversation to have a point. So long as that's adhered to, it's all good in my books.

In terms of revising a story...I'm of the mind that if someone publishes something, they should own that and commit to it, at least on a narrative level. Fix grammar and spelling, along with formatting if need be, but events? IMO keep it minor. I'm not going to look back a few chapters to see what was changed, and if that makes the story unreadable going forward, I'll very likely stop reading. It's one of the things I'm pretty inflexible about. I see so many authors bullied by readers who lash out at them over some event in one of their chapters that they re-write it, and that's just bull. Tell your story, tell it well, and if you think up something later, work it into the story somehow, but don't rewrite it. Or, well, go ahead, but as a reader, I won't care. If it's a change while a story is being written (on-going), I'll stop if what I read doesn't line up well with new chapters andimportant ongoing content, and if I'm re-reading and there's important new content, I'll probably stop reading, because I don't have the energy to read a moderately modified version of a story I already know anymore (I've tried before, it's tiresome and frustrating...I can endure only very minor edits). I mean, I love my prequel fic, but if I had the heart to, I'd revise it by another 6 or 7 additional chapters of into and character development, but I can't do it. I wrote it, and was too impatient to cover things I wanted to, and it made for a weaker story. So next time, I wrote a better one. But some people like revising their stories, and some readers don't mind re-reading stories to learn the author's new vision. I'm just not a member of either group
I mean, I just don't really get it, but that's just me. I've had people PM me about how X character should have done this or that, and at times I've agreed with them and thought "Huh...I messed up there." And if it was a major mix-up, I worked a fix into my next chapter. If it was minor, I just moved on. If it revolved around the quality of how I wrote a character, I'd spend extra time getting to know the character better so it wouldn't happen before I wrote more of the story. Some of my stories got hundreds of views within the initial time day or two, and I'm not about to change the story under the noses of my readers. I'm not going to force them to re-read a chapter to catch-up or anything because I missed something or made a mistake. Hell, I'm dealing with that exact situation right now with my major ME fic, where I forgot an entire plot line that I was supposed to introduce between Ch25 and Ch 32. if I want to do an ME2 arc, I need that stuff in my story, and I'm dealing with the problem of working it in now. But I'm not going to re-write the last 10 chapters to fix my mistake and have my readers endure that. Lots of people read on their lunch breaks, or on their sparse periods of free time, and I feel that making someone re-read something for it to make sense or to adhere to some revision you added is kind of disrespectful. Just release the chapter when you're happy with it, and move onto the next one. And if you screw stuff up, make it right later on.
At least, that's my take. Like Efvie said, I may be in a tiny minority, and I'm certainly not representative.
Modifié par fluffywalrus, 26 août 2013 - 05:47 .