Certainly 'gravelly' I'd say. 'Gravelly layers'? I think it's difficult to describe because it's actual audio effects, rather than anything organic (apart from Brendan's(?) original recordings ofc). That's why us guitarists have ended up with pedals named things like 'flanger', 'wah-wah', and more boringly, 'envelope filter' lol.
Friend: "What's the flanger do?"
Guitarist: "Well... it flanges!"
*hits chord*
neeeeeeeeeoooooooowwwwwwwwnnnnnnnnnngnnnnnnnwwwwwwwwwooooon
Friend: "Oh, I see!"
Guitarist: "Yea. Flange."
*grins* that totally reminded me of a scene from my favorite anime where two guitarists were talking and the one goes "how do you make that 'myooon'! sound?"
I asked about the voices because I get stuck on certain bits of text that I just refuse to let go of. I got as far in the sentence as: She knew before she even turned that she would be facing a drell because of the...
and there I got stuck because I couldn't figure out how to describe that distinctive drell voice sound that they all seem to have, and I refused to leave it as simple as "the distinctive tone of a drell voice". I want description and I still haven't managed to figure it out in a way I like. you all gave some good suggestions but I just haven't been able to settle on one yet or make it fit in a way I like.
*sigh* I don't have this problem with bigger bits like scenes, or even entire chapters (obviously, given the number of times I rewrote the first four chapters of my ME story entirely), but when I want to describe something it totally hangs me up. because I cannot let it go. and I mean that literally. if I want a description of something and I try to skip it, it completely kills my enthusiasm for what I'm writing. like to the point where just opening the file makes me mad. I have a few stories I stopped writing completely because I got hung up on putting one thing or another into words and just lost all interest after that.





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