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#1
ravynwriter

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Been kind of waffling on doing this...finally figured, what the hell. I know its been mentioned (to much blushing on my part) in the gathering of fanfics in another thread but...yeah.

Dark Energy is an ongoing series dealing with a renegade Femshep that drinks too much, swears too much, smokes cigars, and really likes a certain blue archaeologist. DE1 and DE2 cover the events from the first two games, respectively. DE3 is in progress and covers the third game (obviously).

The ending will be changed.

Also, I have a DE4 and a DE5 planned. DE4 will show what happens directly after the Reaper War. DE5 will take place a few centuries later, when the full reprecussions of the Reaper War and the cause of it are finally starting to be known.

So yeah. Links below :)

Dark Energy

Dark Energy 2: Trail of Shadows

Dark Energy 3: End of Days

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lillitheris

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Yay, now I can leave a nice comment in one place and complain in the other!

In fact… I always feel a little bad that it’s hard to show appreciation along with the along with the critique, so here you go:

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ravynwriter

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I think that's the biggest heart I've gotten...like, EVER. :)

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I am up to date reading your series and I liked it so much I am reading it again.

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lillitheris

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Oh my goodness, miss! I look away for a week, and there’re 8 new chapters to read :blink::happy:

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We have to wait till Tuesday to find out what happened to Del. If you download Fanfictiondownloader you can combine all the chapters into one and convert them to the file format of your choice. Out of all the Mass Effect fanfiction the Dark Energy series is favorite.

Modifié par jedisolo, 10 juin 2012 - 11:19 .


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Brill writing - really enjoying... but another cliff hanger! What are you trying to do to us? ;)

Modifié par CG Drum, 10 juin 2012 - 05:58 .


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ravynwriter

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**lol** Glad you guys are enjoying, even despite the cliffhanger :D

Someone mentioned, as a joke, a potential Javik mind-baby. Got me thinking...what if the Protheans are like the asari, but an all male race that can impregnate a female of any other race with their mind-freak? And the babies born are always male Protheans. **ponders**

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ravynwriter wrote...

**lol** Glad you guys are enjoying, even despite the cliffhanger :D

Someone mentioned, as a joke, a potential Javik mind-baby. Got me thinking...what if the Protheans are like the asari, but an all male race that can impregnate a female of any other race with their mind-freak? And the babies born are always male Protheans. **ponders**


Javik’s a female.



It’s actually a fairly reasonable idea given the ME/ME2-contradicting superpowers BioWare for no discernible reason decided to give the protheans, but I’m afraid it might come off as little too on the nose? However, an elaboration in which the protheans are monogendered but restricted to their own species (plus they’re insectoidal), it could have caused them to ‘help’ the asari by enabling them to co-opt other species‘ DNA too…and the reason they can’t do this themselves is because they’re…insectoid?



I haven’t even gotten to the cliffhanger yet :( My own writing and good weather conspire against me…but on the upside, more to read when I get to it! <3

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ravynwriter

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Own writing and good weather always come first :D And interesting additional thoughts on the Protheans **ponder**

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Just wanted to pop in and say that I really love your fanfic!

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ravynwriter

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Why thank you :)

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TrulyInnovative

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I feel like the addition of Javik has produced a nice dynamic to your fic and kind of gotten everyone out of their comfort zone. I certainly haven't known what to expect these last few chapters, which I've liked a lot.

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I'm glad :) That's the idea...keep people guessing, keep people interested, keep a story that everyone reading it already more or less knows unique and captivating while at the same time, not making it an entirely different story.

^ did all that make it sound like I know what I'm doing? **ROFL**

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IliyaMoroumetz

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As someone who speaks to the author on a regular basis, I can say with certainty that she is a shameless tease.

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jedisolo

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I loved Chapter 23 of Dark Energy 3. I can't wait for next chapter.

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ravynwriter

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I am NOT a shameless tease!! ........

Ok, couldn't even say that with a straight face :) And thank you, jedisolo :)

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jedisolo

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Your welcome, looking forward to chapter 24.

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I started reading Dark Energy last week, I'm now reading the second one. :)

Del Shepard is so different to my FemShep and its great to see how life events have shaped her and how much her character grows with different experiences.  

I have to admit the title put me off as i was expecting very dark but Dels sarcasm won me over!

I highly recommend this as compulsary reading for anyone who has played FemShep with Liara LI, dong ma?

thanks for sharing :D

Modifié par FlashMonkey, 15 juin 2012 - 01:15 .


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jedisolo

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Chapter 24 was a well written and excellent chapter. I loved the proposal.

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ravynwriter

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FlashMonkey, you are very welcome :) I'm happy you're enjoying it!

Jedisolo: **teeheehee** thankee :)

#22
jedisolo

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Your welcome ravynwriter. Now if you release 2 chapters on Saturday that would be awesome.

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Poor SamanthaImage IPB    I felt soooo bad for her!  

Oh by the way I am in love with your take on Mass Effect!  Left of canon for the win!! 
 And ever since the opening scene in DE when you intorduced Del I have been in love with her as well! Image IPB    Think Liara would get mad if I stole Del from her?

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I agree couldn't help but feel for Sam! Was class.

Loving your ME world.

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First time poster - avid reader. ravynwriter, your series has been a fantastic read. I stumbled onto the work whilst catching up on another post ending fic and ended up reading DE 1 and 2 in 3 days. I could not 'put them down'. Del is a legend - of this I have absolutely no doubt. I am truely looking forward to more chapters. Oh - and Volus supporting characters for the win!!!!