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[ravynwriter]

Jedisolo: See, if I did two chapters then it'd start a precedent and next thing you know, there'd be chapters appearing all over the place and people would be hanging out on street corners trying to give chapters to children and...I just can't have that on my conscience.

Prizzma: I think Liara would have a thing or two to say about it, yes. Those things may involve large arms fire and possibly some fire ants.

CG: thank you

Lucius Vulpi: I love the volus. I always thought that they, the hanar, and the elcor got a bad deal in ME.

[Prizzma]

*sigh*   "Love that remains longest in your heart is the one that is not returned"

I am going to go find Sam and we can cry on each others sholders

[jedisolo]

All I know is I am loving Dark Energy 3. I was a bit sad at the end of Chapter 26 but it was a good chapter. Your right if you release two chapters everyday than nothing would get done because everyone would reading your fantastic take on the Mass Effect Universe.

Modifié par jedisolo, 21 juin 2012 - 02:48 .

[Yuqi]

I I really like DE, but I felt the doctor being killed by Liara was a little bit, lazy. That's my only issue really.

[Prizzma]

Yuqi wrote...

I I really like DE, but I felt the doctor being killed by Liara was a little bit, lazy. That's my only issue really.

I dont know, I think it is a good way to show how much Liara has changed and that she is willing to do anything for Del. 

It also opens a whole new can of worms.  Since Del is still feeling the effects of what he did and they dont truly undersand what is going on, whats going to happen to her now?  How are they going to fix it with the only person who knew, now dead?  And imagine how Del will feel when she finds out that Liara had someone killed because of her? THE DRAMA! 

I am practically salivating at the possibilities! 

[FlashMonkey]

 Hello again
I’ve been enjoying the Dark Energy stories so much, I went and bought a Kindle. Now I can read everywhere!

I just got to chapter 6 of DE 3 and I had to stop and see what Del looks like (thanks for the
code.)

I tweaked her mouth a bit as ME3 tends to have Shepards lips slightly down-turned,
(intentionally by Bioware I guess).

So here’s a pick of Del minus scar, tat and streak ( although I am working on them!)




although you can't tell in this picture, I swear she has a scarier scowl than my FemShep 

Modifié par FlashMonkey, 21 juin 2012 - 07:45 .

[lillitheris]

In my head, Del looks like Beth Gibbons even though there’s very little native american there. I think it’s the singing…plus, well, Beth is awesome.

[ravynwriter]

FlashMonkey: I'd LOVE to see it when you're done I can never get enough Del pics. I was pleased at the expressions that she got in ME3...you're right, she scowls like an ace and some of her glares **swoon**

It's not weird to swoon at that, is it? Hmm.

lilitheris: Yes. Yes she is

[s17tabris]

I love your DE series. 

I just read Chapter 28 and I kinda got confused because the events happened in Noveria.  I was wondering if the change from Gellix (Ex-Cerberus Scientist mission) to Noveria was intentional.

[ravynwriter]

Yes, it was. I decided to combine the ex-Cerberus science mission in with the N7 Cerberus fighter base mission which takes place on Noveria. I wanted the fighters (for reasons you will see in the next few chapters **evil grin**) but wanted to tie the two together and I like Noveria better as a setting. It has recognizability.

Like usual, I decided all this on the fly this morning as I was writing Shep's scene with Javik and thinking 'ok, what next? I want fighters! Ooh, have to do Jacob. Oooh!'

Yeah, something like that anyway

[lillitheris]

Finally, time to read.

…

Edit: aww, not enough, but a few chapters further at least. Left a few notes.

Much <3, forgive minor complaints.

Modifié par lillitheris, 24 juin 2012 - 11:43 .

[lillitheris]

And finally fully caught up! Even managed to leave reviews. Overall wonderful stuff, but that goes without saying.

[AtlAggie]

 Really enjoyed your latest chapter (31).  As much as I love your scenes between Del & Liara (and I love them very, very, VERY much :-), I feel that the quality and quantity of your scenes between either of them and a 3rd/4th/5th party is one of the main things that sets your series apart from all of the other Shep/Liara fics out there. I mean, all Shep/Liara fics obviously have interaction between the two primary characters. Many to the exclusion of most or all other relationships. The scenes you have between Del/Li and another character add a wonderful depth to your universe and really give the story much of its impact. At least for me.  And I think this chapter was a good example of that.

Thanks so much for sharing your creation with us!

[lillitheris]

^ I’ll agree with that. The balance of action and drama/relationships/etc. is excellent. My personal goal is to get anywhere close to as good…

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<3<3 for the last few chapters despite nitpicky reviews — sorry, I mean ‘comments’ That new system is weird.

[ravynwriter]

Yeah, I've heard a lot of people don't like the new comment system.

[lillitheris]

ravynwriter wrote...

Yeah, I've heard a lot of people don't like the new comment system.

I mainly don’t like that I can’t scroll the page below it…it really cramps my nitpicking-style!

But at least you personally “would like to thank you for my continued support” :happy:  when I submit a comment. You’d think the message would be configurable…what if I’m a really ornery and ungrateful author?

[CmdrSlander]

I, Commander Slander, of the Slanderian Armada, Thrice Ordained Potentate of Slanderland, Prince of the Slanderish Isles, and Magistrate of the Slandokian colonies hereby bestow upon you, Ravynwriter, our highest civilian honor. Awarded on this day, Friday the 29th of June 2012, for excellence in Fan Fiction:



So say we all.


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Also, click the annoyingly tiny image in my sig for own fic about the Fall of Thessia. Yes, shameless plug, what did you think the award is free 

Modifié par CmdrSlander, 30 juin 2012 - 12:06 .

[jedisolo]

How long is Dark Energy 3 going to be? Will it be longer than Dark Energy 2?  I am up to the latest chapter and I am loving it.  I can't wait to read Chapter 33 tomorrow.

Modifié par jedisolo, 30 juin 2012 - 04:36 .

[CmdrSlander]

jedisolo wrote...

How long is Dark Energy 3 going to be? Will it be longer than Dark Energy 2?  I am up to the latest chapter and I am loving it.  I can't wait to read Chapter 33 tomorrow.

At the current rate, at least 145 Chapters by my estimation. 

[CmdrSlander]

I don't know if you have any use for an image such as this but maybe you do. No fanfic is complete without a title card:



I think I'm officially a Dark Energy fanboy.

Modifié par CmdrSlander, 30 juin 2012 - 11:06 .

[jedisolo]

I just read Chapter 33, now that was an excellent chapter. Now I have to wait till Tuesday to read chapter 34, oh well. Also are you going to post a chapter on Wednesday?

[ravynwriter]

CmdrSlander: thank you so much for the ribbon and the title card! You are officially awesome Not that you weren't before, now it's just officially official.

Jedisolo: DE3 is going to be much much longer than DE2. 145 chapters is probably not a bad estimate. As for whether or not I'm posting a chapter on Wednesday, I'm not entirely sure. Work has gotten a bit busier and as that is my normal writing time, that means writing's gotten a tad bit slower. So it all depends on if I have the current chapter up to a fitting stop point or not on a given day whether or not I post it. I'm trying to get at least three or four chapters up a week still, the days they go up just won't be as consistant.

Modifié par ravynwriter, 02 juillet 2012 - 03:15 .

[jedisolo]

Ravynwriter, that's OK I just get excited when a a new chapter shows up and I am reading Dark Energy 2 again. Also you are my favorite writer, I just love your writing. Did you like the extended cut?

[ravynwriter]

Did I like the extended cut...well, that's a tricky answer. I think the only thing I can say that I LIKED was Femshep and Liara's goodbye. Other than that, I liked it better than the original ending. But that's like saying, I like this turd that's been sitting out a while and doesn't smell any more, better than the fresh one that's still steaming.

[jedisolo]

Well I liked it and I thought it was better than the original, it doesn't take much to keep me entertained lol. I do know that your ending will be 1000 times better than Bioware's ending. I can't wait for chapter 34. I just hope Nan, Dr. Chakwas and Liara can help Del.