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Tali should be taught as an example of how NOT to write a character


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Arlionis wrote...

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Tali and Liara both fall into the catagory for me, but Tali is more bearable than Liara. At least Tali doesn't constantly try to get in my Shep's pants when he's already taken.


I guess your Shepard isn't a male, because Tali thews herself at male Shepard "the dashing commander" in a very tasteless, cheap way during ME2. 


Let me rephrase. I politely tell her I'm not interested once. She drops it. Liara doesn't... -.- She contiually tries even though my Shepard's with Ash.

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Well, dude she is product of her society - I don´t like her as much as other alien squadmates but I like her much more than VS and Jacob... LoL

Otherwise she never mentioned that in the morning war there was two sides in quarians society, as was said in consensus Quarian people forget about these peoples or simply rejected the fact that they maybe did mistake, also she changed her mind after speaking with Legion - about hating the geth.
If you pushed her with paragon action in ME2 betwen her and Legion she even agreed with Sheppard point of view same as Legion understand that information could bring another war betwen both species....



I'm not arguing against her racism and blatant xenophobia, as I said, that would add depth to her character if it weren't for the fact that she's constantly "changing" her opinions and perspective regarding the Geth to the point her behaviour is erratic. That's poor writing. 

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Now my beef is with ME3. I mean, considering that she talked to Legion like you have, considering  she knows the motivations of the Geth like you do, considering that all the Quarians know exactly what happened during the Morning War, etc. her prejudice against the Geth "you cannot choose the Geth over my people" (as if the Quarians were in some capacity innately superior to the Geth) is just 100% indefensible.

I agree with all but this.
It's not about the quarians being innately superior to the geth. She is a quarian, they are her people and they were faced with extinction. Obviously, a quarian is always going to place other quarians above any other species, it's only natural.

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Aurora313 wrote...

Arlionis wrote...

Aurora313 wrote...

Tali and Liara both fall into the catagory for me, but Tali is more bearable than Liara. At least Tali doesn't constantly try to get in my Shep's pants when he's already taken.


I guess your Shepard isn't a male, because Tali thews herself at male Shepard "the dashing commander" in a very tasteless, cheap way during ME2. 


Let me rephrase. I politely tell her I'm not interested once. She drops it. Liara doesn't... -.- She contiually tries even though my Shepard's with Ash.



Yep, I agree with you on that. 

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I disagree.
I might have never romanced her or specially cared about her, but she's a fine character.

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MisterJB wrote...

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Now my beef is with ME3. I mean, considering that she talked to Legion like you have, considering  she knows the motivations of the Geth like you do, considering that all the Quarians know exactly what happened during the Morning War, etc. her prejudice against the Geth "you cannot choose the Geth over my people" (as if the Quarians were in some capacity innately superior to the Geth) is just 100% indefensible.

I agree with all but this.
It's not about the quarians being innately superior to the geth. She is a quarian, they are her people and they were faced with extinction. Obviously, a quarian is always going to place other quarians above any other species, it's only natural.


I guess what struck me is the way in which she utters these words, not only very infantile and child like way, to the point it sounded like whining (which in turn makes the fact that she was chosen  as an "admiral" even more ridiculous) , but also it had a heavily implied sense of innate superiority in it, as if being an "organic" made them somehow superior. 

Modifié par Arlionis, 04 juin 2012 - 01:36 .


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Sounds like people are mad that a character they dont like is popular. THERES A SHOCKER. You know, I dont like Miranda but I dont go making threads about it.


I don't know about making threads, but you have no problem bringing up another character that has nothing to do with the original discussion just so that you can try to act superior? "Oh, I don't make threads thrashing another character, but since I'm here I might as well write my thoughts on Liara or Miranda". It's always like this, we say we don't like Tali and the Talimancers instead of trying to point out her good qualities attack us or different characters.

And your logic doesn't make sense. Garrus is way more popular than Tali and Liara I don't know if she's just as popular as Tali but she's certainly popular enough and I really like both of them.

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 @Applepie_svk o really I didn't know it was shiala, and your picture is eww :sick:

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I disagree. I really like her development and by far one of the best character development in the Mass Effect series.

I really like the fact that she is flawed and overwhelmed with negative views on the Geth. With alittle desperation she builds up an interesting character.


Great character in my books.

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Babi_Siha wrote...

Olueq wrote...

Sounds like people are mad that a character they dont like is popular. THERES A SHOCKER. You know, I dont like Miranda but I dont go making threads about it.


I don't know about making threads, but you have no problem bringing up another character that has nothing to do with the original discussion just so that you can try to act superior? "Oh, I don't make threads thrashing another character, but since I'm here I might as well write my thoughts on Liara or Miranda". It's always like this, we say we don't like Tali and the Talimancers instead of trying to point out her good qualities attack us or different characters.

And your logic doesn't make sense. Garrus is way more popular than Tali and Liara I don't know if she's just as popular as Tali but she's certainly popular enough and I really like both of them.


Well if you take a look at this thread you'll find a correlation between the level of argumentation and the character in their avatar. I'm not surprised the ones 'debating' with "you mad", "haters gonna hate", "your profile picture sucks" and such inane diatribe chose Tali, maybe I'm wrong and she isn't just poor writing but a very complex social engineering experiment. :P

Modifié par Arlionis, 04 juin 2012 - 01:42 .


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Rickets wrote...

I disagree. I really like her development and by far one of the best character development in the Mass Effect series.

I really like the fact that she is flawed and overwhelmed with negative views on the Geth. With alittle desperation she builds up an interesting character.


Great character in my books.


And that's how a normal person argues instead of attacking everyone the in way.

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Arlionis wrote...

Babi_Siha wrote...

Olueq wrote...

Sounds like people are mad that a character they dont like is popular. THERES A SHOCKER. You know, I dont like Miranda but I dont go making threads about it.


I don't know about making threads, but you have no problem bringing up another character that has nothing to do with the original discussion just so that you can try to act superior? "Oh, I don't make threads thrashing another character, but since I'm here I might as well write my thoughts on Liara or Miranda". It's always like this, we say we don't like Tali and the Talimancers instead of trying to point out her good qualities attack us or different characters.

And your logic doesn't make sense. Garrus is way more popular than Tali and Liara I don't know if she's just as popular as Tali but she's certainly popular enough and I really like both of them.


Well if you take a look at this thread you'll find a correlation between the level of argumentation and the character in their avatar. I'm not surprised the ones 'debating' with "you mad", "haters gonna hate", "your profile picture sucks" and such inane diatribe chose Tali, maybe I'm wrong and she isn't just poor writing but a very complex social engineering experiment. :P


You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"

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For a character that was shoved down our throats in all the Mass Effect games it's frustrating to see how not only her progression (if there's any) is almost non-existent but also so and erratic in nature. 

In the first game she's a talking codex entry, nothing else. In the second game she was inserted as the "virginal romance option" for male Shepard (which, to be honest, is as creepy as it gets because the whole thing just feels like a reenactment of a middle aged high-school professor taking advantage of some confused, dumb student) and the "development" attempt with her was to shown she was a Geth hating racist even after meeting Legion and finding out not all Geth were the same and, oh, and her whole "daddy issues" complex. 

Now my beef is with ME3. I mean, considering that she talked to Legion like you have, considering  she knows the motivations of the Geth like you do, considering that all the Quarians know exactly what happened during the Morning War, etc. her prejudice against the Geth "you cannot choose the Geth over my people" (as if the Quarians were in some capacity innately superior to the Geth) is just 100% indefensible.

Now, you can say: "but her racism makes her flawed,  and that adds deep to her!" that would be true if that racism/xenophobia were consistent, if during the first part of ME3 she hadn't shown signs of "befriending" Legion or gaining a "new understanding" of the Geth. The emotional and personality "flip-flopping" and that constant and unpredictable shifting of positions show how poorly constructed as a character she is. One example of this would be her voting stance regarding going to war against the Geth in ME3, she votes in favour or against it depending what you said to the admirals during her ME2 loyalty mission, zero personality of her own. 

In short, it's a shame that so many development resources were wasted in such a bland character when Miranda, Jack, Samara, and well, any of ME2 cast, would have been more interesting for ME3 as a squad member. 



Reading that, it sort of gives me the feeling that you, very early, decided that Tali wasn't a character of your taste, which is fine of course. I'm not a Tali fan myself but I still like her and I think that she is very well written.
In the first game she was very young. She even says that herself on different occasions, both in ME1 and ME3. In ME3 she says to Shepard when talking about "the old days" how young and naive she was and how she's gone from this teenager to a successful Quarian (no matter if she was exciled or not during your gameplay).
She was indeed a "racist" in ME1 and ME2, just like every other single Quarian out there. Quarians don't see the Geth as a proper race until in ME3, if you choose the "happy" option (the Geth and Quarians cooperating). However, if you had spent some time getting to know Tali, you would find out that in late ME2 and in ME3, she actually not only develops a friendship with Legion, but she even admit that she was wrong and the Quarian way of thinking was an outdated way of thinking. This development alone makes Tali a highly interesting character and one of the most "shapeable" characters in the whole series. You can let her be a racist hating machine, or you can help her find peace, or you can even let her die. Shepard has a huge influence on Tali, and that's awesome!
The Quarians do not think they are "superior" to the Geth without a reason. Imagine yourself if humanity was overthrown by technology we created. Imagine everything and more or less everyone you love getting killed or destroyed because of these machines. I don't think you would feel very merciful in those shoes. If Tali was NOT a "racist", her character wouldn't make any sense.
You say "One example of this would be her voting stance regarding going to war
against the Geth in ME3, she votes in favour or against it depending
what you said to the admirals during her ME2 loyalty mission, zero
personality of her own.". I fail to see your point here. Of course Tali's personality is shaped depending on your previous options. That is what Mass Effect is all about.

Modifié par Cataya, 04 juin 2012 - 01:50 .


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 @Applepie_svk o really I didn't know it was shiala, and your picture is eww :sick:


My pic is tasty ... yumm yumm :kissing:

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Terrorize69 wrote...

You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"


Maybe making this thread was unecessary, but the OP gave good arguments as to why he/she doesn't like the character. It wasn't like "I don't like Tali because she sucks". If you don't agree about what the OP said then tell him/her why or at the very least something like "yeah, she may be flawed, but she's a good character because of this and that".

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Applepie_Svk wrote...

Ponei wrote...

 @Applepie_svk o really I didn't know it was shiala, and your picture is eww :sick:


My pic is tasty ... yumm yumm :kissing:

Y u no like applepie Ponei?

Still I have to say that must be like Thread #150 with this title or intention...
What's the matter with you guys?

Modifié par JustOneGuy, 04 juin 2012 - 01:55 .


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Terrorize69 wrote...

Arlionis wrote...

Babi_Siha wrote...

Olueq wrote...

Sounds like people are mad that a character they dont like is popular. THERES A SHOCKER. You know, I dont like Miranda but I dont go making threads about it.


I don't know about making threads, but you have no problem bringing up another character that has nothing to do with the original discussion just so that you can try to act superior? "Oh, I don't make threads thrashing another character, but since I'm here I might as well write my thoughts on Liara or Miranda". It's always like this, we say we don't like Tali and the Talimancers instead of trying to point out her good qualities attack us or different characters.

And your logic doesn't make sense. Garrus is way more popular than Tali and Liara I don't know if she's just as popular as Tali but she's certainly popular enough and I really like both of them.


Well if you take a look at this thread you'll find a correlation between the level of argumentation and the character in their avatar. I'm not surprised the ones 'debating' with "you mad", "haters gonna hate", "your profile picture sucks" and such inane diatribe chose Tali, maybe I'm wrong and she isn't just poor writing but a very complex social engineering experiment. :P


You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"


You seem to not understand what "flame" is and just think that someone having a different opinion can be considered to be "flaming". I gave my arguments and reasoning about why I don't like her character and why I see her as a poorly written piece. That isn't "flame" that's having a different opinion and I have the right to express my opinion just like you also have that right. 

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Babi_Siha wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"


Maybe making this thread was unecessary, but the OP gave good arguments as to why he/she doesn't like the character. It wasn't like "I don't like Tali because she sucks". If you don't agree about what the OP said then tell him/her why or at the very least something like "yeah, she may be flawed, but she's a good character because of this and that".


The finishing conclusion gives a strong hint that op is like "i dont like tali becuase she sucks". OP puts arguments, but it seems like it was just an excuse to be able to have excuse to right the conclusion part. It sound almost like direct insult to tali fan really.

Modifié par ryder500, 04 juin 2012 - 01:57 .


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*Facepalm*

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ryder500 wrote...

Babi_Siha wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"


Maybe making this thread was unecessary, but the OP gave good arguments as to why he/she doesn't like the character. It wasn't like "I don't like Tali because she sucks". If you don't agree about what the OP said then tell him/her why or at the very least something like "yeah, she may be flawed, but she's a good character because of this and that".


The finishing conclusion gives a strong hint that op is like "i dont like tali becuase she sucks". OP puts arguments, but it seems like it was just an excuse to be able to have excuse to right the conclusion part. It sound almost like direct insult to tali fan really.


No, I don't like her because of all the points I mentioned. Do you disagree with my points? then you're free to create and share your own opinions and arguments about why I'm wrong rather than just lowering yourself to ad hominem fallacies by calling me a "flamer"

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Also, I will say again, first part of op post is very funny and shows that op has no real argument as obviously know nothing about Tali. Forced down throat? Lol, we do not get Tali until half way through me2 and me3 and she isnt even a romance option in me1. Hell, she don't really even talk to shepard if you do not actively talk to her.

Meanwhile, liara is always desperate to try and get in shepards pants and always has main plot line conversations with shepard in each game, more than once in each one.

Only main storyline talk with Tali is rannoch in me3?

So, this is why I think it is just flame bait, op argument is very unfounded it seems.

Sorry for my bad english ._.

Modifié par ryder500, 04 juin 2012 - 02:03 .


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Arlionis wrote...

Terrorize69 wrote...

Arlionis wrote...

Babi_Siha wrote...

Olueq wrote...

Sounds like people are mad that a character they dont like is popular. THERES A SHOCKER. You know, I dont like Miranda but I dont go making threads about it.


I don't know about making threads, but you have no problem bringing up another character that has nothing to do with the original discussion just so that you can try to act superior? "Oh, I don't make threads thrashing another character, but since I'm here I might as well write my thoughts on Liara or Miranda". It's always like this, we say we don't like Tali and the Talimancers instead of trying to point out her good qualities attack us or different characters.

And your logic doesn't make sense. Garrus is way more popular than Tali and Liara I don't know if she's just as popular as Tali but she's certainly popular enough and I really like both of them.


Well if you take a look at this thread you'll find a correlation between the level of argumentation and the character in their avatar. I'm not surprised the ones 'debating' with "you mad", "haters gonna hate", "your profile picture sucks" and such inane diatribe chose Tali, maybe I'm wrong and she isn't just poor writing but a very complex social engineering experiment. :P


You would of got a more logical debate if the OP wasn't filled with flaming on said char. You may aswell called the thread "I'm going to flame Tali, come at me bro"


You seem to not understand what "flame" is and just think that someone having a different opinion can be considered to be "flaming". I gave my arguments and reasoning about why I don't like her character and why I see her as a poorly written piece. That isn't "flame" that's having a different opinion and I have the right to express my opinion just like you also have that right. 


Theres a difference between "different opinions" backed with reasoning and "petty/cheap jabs" back with reasoning. If you cannot see how or why your OP is viewed as flaming or flame bait, and the reaction people gave you didn't give you a hunt then I doubt I can explain it. But maybe I can flip your logic to give you an example.

"I think Liara is the worst char in the game, she spent the whole time acting the interspecies galatic space wh*re, who never took no for an answer and spent nearly 3 years trying to get into Shepards pants."

Flaming with reasoning is still flaming.

Modifié par Terrorize69, 04 juin 2012 - 02:08 .


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ryder500 wrote...

Also, I will say again, first part of op post is very funny and show that op has on real argument as obviously know nothing about Tali. Forced down throat? Lol, we do not get Tali until half way through me2 and me3 and she isnt even a romance option in me1. Hell, she don't really even talk to shepard if you do not actively talk to her.

Meanwhile, liara is always desperate to try and get in shepards pants and always has main plot line conversations with shepard in each game, more than once in each one.

Only main storyline talk with Tali is rannoch in me3?

So, this is why I think it is just flame bait, op argument is very unfounded it seems.

Sorry for my bad english ._.


I will show you how poor that reasoning is. Let's suppose for the sake of argument that Liara/Miranda or any of the other character attacked in this thread to defend Tali are "badly written", would that redeem Tali? no, Tali will still be a horribly written character, only that now she'd have some company. 

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JustOneGuy wrote...

Applepie_Svk wrote...

Ponei wrote...

 @Applepie_svk o really I didn't know it was shiala, and your picture is eww :sick:


My pic is tasty ... yumm yumm :kissing:

Y u no like applepie Ponei?

Still I have to say that must be like Thread #150 with this title or intention...
What's the matter with you guys?


O love pie yooooooo but I dunno that pic feels :sick: for sum reasun lol :P 

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Obvious troll bait is obvious. Tali is far better written than Liara, and far less forced than Liara.

ME1 she is quite a bit of a codex, but so is Wrex and Liara. They are there to explain their alien cultures. Underneath they have characters though, which become more obvious if you bring them along for missions.