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[Stalker]

Welcome!

We are proud to present our new FanFiction "The Secrets of the mysterious Relic"!

This story takes place between the events of Mass Effect 2 and 3. The Normandy is grounded on Earth for 3 months already, with the Reaper threat coming closer and closer. The well known bounty-hounter "Faust" contacts Miranda Lawson for a mission unlike any other: They are about to discover the world of an ancient civilization with yet unknown dangers...


This thread will contain further links, updates and of course new episodes, so stay tuned!

Every weekend we will release a new episode and a "Data Entry"!

Made by:
Project Lead / Art: Ali Qaiser (deviantart)
Writer: MrMassakka (deviantart)
Composer: adammkhuevrr

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Data Entries:
#1 Quarian Probe Intel
#2 The Prigarri



Act 1



Episodes:

04/06/2012
Episode 1: "A new dimension"
Soundtrack

Part A


11/06/2012
Episode 2: "At Hell's Gate"
Soundtrack

Part A

Part B



27/06/2012
Episode 3: "Ijur-17"
Soundtrack

Part A

Part B



Act 2

08/07/2012
Episode 4: "Deadly Silence"
Soundtrack

Part A


23/07/2012
Soundtrack

Part B



03/08/2012
Episode 5: "Loose Ends"
Soundtrack

Part A


18/08/2012

Soundtrack

Part B



02/09/2012
Episode 6: "Reckoning"
Soundtrack

Part A


24/09/2012

Soundtrack

Part B

Modifié par Mr Massakka, 24 septembre 2012 - 08:49 .

[Ieldra]

A promising start. Seems like exactly the kind of story I like, featuring exactly the character I like. I'll certainly keep my eye on this.

I think I already said how much I like your style, Aliqaiser. Your pictures ooze mystery and the allure of the unknown. And the premise of the story promises to deliver. Great!

[Aliqaiser]

@Ieldra2 Trust me you won't be disappointed.

Modifié par Aliqaiser, 05 juin 2012 - 11:34 .

[n0l4n]

I love it ! that's some excellent art right there, very nice style. I'm looking forward to the next episodes

[lillitheris]

Can’t say much about the story yet, but I really like the artwork The OST is a fun idea, too!

[Sil]

That's some nice work, good job!

[Edolix]

Good stuff!

Looking forward to future episodes.

[flemm]

Very cool teaser.

Art does a great job of capturing the "mysterious" feel.

Looking forward to future installments.

[Stalker]

Episode 2 is up!

Let us know what you think!

[_FLANDERS]

Love it just need help getting more,

[Ieldra]

Commented on DA. Nice work, not without some minor flaws, though. Love the story and the general style of the art. Please continue.

[Stalker]

We really appreciate constructive feedback. Thanks!

[MrStoob]

We'll see where it's going, but for me, the dialogue is a bit stilted.

[Stalker]

Criticism noted. Thanks.

[scotty1234]

OH OH OH! So favoriting this, mostly because it has Miranda in it. I can't wait for more and the art is amazing. I just hope you can make sense of the team following Miranda of all people.

[Stalker]

Thank you!
Yes, we have a backstory for each one on why they are on this mission.

[Stalker]

After some delay, we are now back again with Episode 3!

We appreciate every feedback!

[TullyAckland]

Very nice! Good job with this, looking forward to more updates from you!

[ChrisRudson]

Looking forward for more! Thanks for messaging
I'll re-read this comic when I get home from college, I'm pretty much in a rush right now(exams).
Also, keep up the good work!

[lillitheris]

The character notation in the speech bubbles is a little distracting, but no complaints otherwise. Have you tried different colors for characters, maybe?

[ripslip]

Well done!

[Vierna-Drottingu]

really great job on comic, the story seems interesting so far, the art is awesome, and OST is cool too

looking forward for what happens next ^^

[Thracecius]

I like the story concept, the artwork (the people could use a little refinement), and the chosen cast of characters, but in all fairness the writing could use editing for word-choice (character voice mainly), grammar, and overall clarity. I really don't want to sound discouraging, because I understand how much effort goes into a project this big and I think it's going quite well so far, but I did want to provide honest, constructive feedback. If you'd like any assistance with editing please feel free to PM me. It's the least I can offer considering my feedback. 

[Ieldra]

Just read episode 3. Great story. Can't comment on DA atm due to technical difficulties.

However, I recommend taking Thracecius' advice.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 28 juin 2012 - 12:18 .