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Jenonax wrote...

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Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


Name one example where a chronological jump that has no context and no reason to be happening in the final moments of a trilogy or series where it has never happened before has ever, ever worked.


Dark Tower by Stephen King.

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This is the giant plot hole of death for the ending.

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Yes, the sense of denial has lead to the IT. That results from bad writing. They aren't lazy, they are in denial.

This is a fault of the narrative. Walters writing is so terrible people actually think it's good. That's an AMAZING feat to accomplish.

I however, believe it is not just simply bad. In fact it's the worst writing execution I've ever seen. I'm not even thirty yet and I doubt I'll ever seen a pile of crap this big ever again.

Walters comic book writing is suited for just that. Comic books.

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Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...


Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


Name one example where a chronological jump that has no context and no reason to be happening in the final moments of a trilogy or series where it has never happened before has ever, ever worked.


Dark Tower by Stephen King.


Are you actually comparing Walters to Stephen King?

Mass Effect to Dark Tower?

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Taboo-XX wrote...

Walters comic book writing is suited for just that. Comic books.


Hey, man, don't drag comics into Walters' circle of fail.  

Not all of them are terrible.  

Snyder's doing a great job with the Caped Crusader.

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Jenonax wrote...

Taboo-XX wrote...

Walters comic book writing is suited for just that. Comic books.


Hey, man, don't drag comics into Walters' circle of fail.  

Not all of them are terrible.  

Snyder's doing a great job with the Caped Crusader.


Walters will never be Alan Moore.

You have to actually apply logic to your story for people to become enamored with it.

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o Ventus wrote...

Seival wrote...

Vox Draco wrote...

Seival wrote...
Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


You are aware that this hiding from the surface and subtext forcing readers to think has directly lead to the birth of IT? But of course it is stupid because you don't believe it might be true...and rather come up with a theory of your own that is...well...more based on assumptions than that dream-trees from IT...?

Yeah...I like that...Image IPB


No, I think that readers' laziness leaded to the birth of "IT" actually.


Reader laziness?

If digging back through the 1st and 2nd (and into the 3rd) games for any evidence or implications of Shepard maybe-possibly being indoctrinated by the end of the 3rd game is lazy, then I have no faith for the future of our species.

Really. The IT is the antithesis of a lazy audience. Hell, the outlandishness of the idea defeats the meaning of the word "lazy". For people to go through ALL THAT WORK to find evidence is NOT lazy.


THIS! I know some people don't like IT for various reasons, and I resepect but don't understand it. But saying that IT is lazy...*laughs* No other theory, not even the justifications for Shepard's betrayal *coughs* (aka control/synthesis) are based on so much research and dedication from fans looking at the ending, and they try hard to actually base the theory on the GAMES and what happened before, and the lore, and trying to fit it into the narrative...

Lazy? It is lazy to simply accept what the starchild throws at you and ignoring everything you have seen and witness hundreds of hours prior....or just making something up from nowhere, as you did with your "theory" here

*chuckles again*...

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Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...


Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


Name one example where a chronological jump that has no context and no reason to be happening in the final moments of a trilogy or series where it has never happened before has ever, ever worked.


Dark Tower by Stephen King.


Are you actually comparing Walters to Stephen King?

Mass Effect to Dark Tower?


Both stories have completely unpredictable endings. Both stories' endings shock the reader in the very similar ways...

...And Dark Tower has a lot of fans, actually.

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This theory is utter nonsense.

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Taboo-XX wrote...


Walters will never be Alan Moore.

You have to actually apply logic to your story for people to become enamored with it.


Oh Alan Moore, you delightful, mega-bearded weirdo.  How I love you.  

Hmm.... Alan Moore does Mass Effect???

No, NO!  I take it back, I take it back!  

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Seival wrote...

Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.

Oh god, are you gonna try arguing that a Deus Ex Machina is a good plot device again and that a DEM is better if it's unexpected?

And what does IT have to do with lazyness? There's a lot more effort put into it than your theory. Good luck trying to get somebody to do a one-and-a-half hour long documentary about the "it was a Mass Relay test jump" theory. You can say those people live in denial, but you can't say they are lazy.

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Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...


Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


Name one example where a chronological jump that has no context and no reason to be happening in the final moments of a trilogy or series where it has never happened before has ever, ever worked.


Dark Tower by Stephen King.


Are you actually comparing Walters to Stephen King?

Mass Effect to Dark Tower?


Both stories have completely unpredictable endings. Both stories' endings shock the reader in the very similar ways...

...And Dark Tower has a lot of fans, actually.


It also doesn't make unexplained, pointless chronological jumps that in no way have ANY relevance to the story whatsoever, like your inane, idiotic theory.

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Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...

Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...


Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


Name one example where a chronological jump that has no context and no reason to be happening in the final moments of a trilogy or series where it has never happened before has ever, ever worked.


Dark Tower by Stephen King.


Are you actually comparing Walters to Stephen King?

Mass Effect to Dark Tower?


Both stories have completely unpredictable endings. Both stories' endings shock the reader in the very similar ways...

...And Dark Tower has a lot of fans, actually.


I know, I am one.

There's unpredictable done well, ala Stephen King, which fits in with the Universe he created.

Then there's Walters who just made it up as he went along, retconning and assassinating the plot as he went along his merry way!

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Sauruz wrote...

Seival wrote...

Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.

Oh god, are you gonna try arguing that a Deus Ex Machina is a good plot device again and that a DEM is better if it's unexpected?

And what does IT have to do with lazyness? There's a lot more effort put into it than your theory. Good luck trying to get somebody to do a one-and-a-half hour long documentary about the "it was a Mass Relay test jump" theory. You can say those people live in denial, but you can't say they are lazy.


A DEM, by virtue of the meaning behind the trope, is unexpected. With that, the Catalyst is a literal Deus Ex Machina.

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o Ventus wrote...

Sauruz wrote...

Seival wrote...

Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.

Oh god, are you gonna try arguing that a Deus Ex Machina is a good plot device again and that a DEM is better if it's unexpected?

And what does IT have to do with lazyness? There's a lot more effort put into it than your theory. Good luck trying to get somebody to do a one-and-a-half hour long documentary about the "it was a Mass Relay test jump" theory. You can say those people live in denial, but you can't say they are lazy.


A DEM, by virtue of the meaning behind the trope, is unexpected. With that, the Catalyst is a literal Deus Ex Machina.

Don't tell him that.
He'll say a DEM you can expect to happen just isn't a proper DEM and therefore has less literary worth. Seriously, that's what he said when he tried to prove that Deus Ex Human Revolution had a DEM.

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Vox Draco wrote...

o Ventus wrote...

Seival wrote...

Vox Draco wrote...

Seival wrote...
Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.


You are aware that this hiding from the surface and subtext forcing readers to think has directly lead to the birth of IT? But of course it is stupid because you don't believe it might be true...and rather come up with a theory of your own that is...well...more based on assumptions than that dream-trees from IT...?

Yeah...I like that...Image IPB


No, I think that readers' laziness leaded to the birth of "IT" actually.


Reader laziness?

If digging back through the 1st and 2nd (and into the 3rd) games for any evidence or implications of Shepard maybe-possibly being indoctrinated by the end of the 3rd game is lazy, then I have no faith for the future of our species.

Really. The IT is the antithesis of a lazy audience. Hell, the outlandishness of the idea defeats the meaning of the word "lazy". For people to go through ALL THAT WORK to find evidence is NOT lazy.


THIS! I know some people don't like IT for various reasons, and I resepect but don't understand it. But saying that IT is lazy...*laughs* No other theory, not even the justifications for Shepard's betrayal *coughs* (aka control/synthesis) are based on so much research and dedication from fans looking at the ending, and they try hard to actually base the theory on the GAMES and what happened before, and the lore, and trying to fit it into the narrative...

Lazy? It is lazy to simply accept what the starchild throws at you and ignoring everything you have seen and witness hundreds of hours prior....or just making something up from nowhere, as you did with your "theory" here

*chuckles again*...


Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.

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Sauruz wrote...

o Ventus wrote...

Sauruz wrote...

Seival wrote...

Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.

Oh god, are you gonna try arguing that a Deus Ex Machina is a good plot device again and that a DEM is better if it's unexpected?

And what does IT have to do with lazyness? There's a lot more effort put into it than your theory. Good luck trying to get somebody to do a one-and-a-half hour long documentary about the "it was a Mass Relay test jump" theory. You can say those people live in denial, but you can't say they are lazy.


A DEM, by virtue of the meaning behind the trope, is unexpected. With that, the Catalyst is a literal Deus Ex Machina.

Don't tell him that.
He'll say a DEM you can expect to happen just isn't a proper DEM and therefore has less literary worth. Seriously, that's what he said when he tried to prove that Deus Ex Human Revolution had a DEM.


Actually, a "DEM waiting to happen" exists. Sort of. It's the MacGuffin. The Crucible is one of these.

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Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.


You say that the IT doesn't involve research, then fail to actually explain what you're talking about.

Good to see you bothered to elaborate on your original point, instead of rambling off about something else entirely.

Wait...

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Seival wrote...

Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.


Suck on that, IT supporters. Seival's speculations are better than yours, deal with it. Image IPB

This thread is comedy gold.

Modifié par ArikadOdakirA, 06 juin 2012 - 10:50 .


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Seival wrote...

Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.

Wow. You seriously have no idea what you're talking about.
I think I'm gonna go back to spouting Sheogorath quotes.

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Seival wrote...


Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.


And I thought my jokes were bad.

Sorry, dude, but your theory is nothing but wishful thinking.   Its nothing but your personal headcannon and if, if, if its the truth then somehow the ending has been made even worse with years worth of content hacked and slashed out of it.

Sorry, man.

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Sauruz wrote...

o Ventus wrote...

Sauruz wrote...

Seival wrote...

Actually quite opposite... If you hide something moving it from the "surface" deep into the "subtext", forcing readers to think, then you are excellent writer.

...BioWare has excellent writers team.

Oh god, are you gonna try arguing that a Deus Ex Machina is a good plot device again and that a DEM is better if it's unexpected?

And what does IT have to do with lazyness? There's a lot more effort put into it than your theory. Good luck trying to get somebody to do a one-and-a-half hour long documentary about the "it was a Mass Relay test jump" theory. You can say those people live in denial, but you can't say they are lazy.


A DEM, by virtue of the meaning behind the trope, is unexpected. With that, the Catalyst is a literal Deus Ex Machina.

Don't tell him that.
He'll say a DEM you can expect to happen just isn't a proper DEM and therefore has less literary worth. Seriously, that's what he said when he tried to prove that Deus Ex Human Revolution had a DEM.


Too late... Image IPB

Indeed... ME Trilogy has perfect DEM, while DE:HR's DEM is just a powerfull outer intervention without something unpredictible. ME DEM > DE:HR DEM.

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You can call me Ann Marie. But only if you're partial to being flayed alive and having an angry immortal skip rope with your entrails.

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Jenonax wrote...

Seival wrote...


Research? No real research was involved in "IT". Some people are just too lazy to think, but not too lazy to talk about it. And when the topic becomes very popular in masses, it leads to some side work, that has nothing to do with attempts to understand... They just want to keep talking about it. Even through BioWare already stated that "IT" is not an option.


And I thought my jokes were bad.

Sorry, dude, but your theory is nothing but wishful thinking.   Its nothing but your personal headcannon and if, if, if its the truth then somehow the ending has been made even worse with years worth of content hacked and slashed out of it.

Sorry, man.


My theory is just a theory. We will see if it's true or not in EC Image IPB

...But right now I prefer to support Normandy crash scene.

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Seival wrote...

My theory is just a theory. We will see if it's true or not in EC


Believe me, no we won't.

...But right now I prefer to support Normandy crash scene.


You must be lonely.