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[HelpingFR]

  Hello everyone ! 
First, I want to say there could be many SPOILERS about ME3


I have read not so long ago what should have been the original script of Mass Effect 3, which normally had the Dark Energy theory. Sad by the sacrifice of this plot by a less interesting one, I found the way to add this plot without modifying the game : a DLC

I'd like to send it to Bioware, but I'd also like to have your opinion on this plot in the operation : "Save Dark Energy"
You can find here the translated script :

http://social.biowar...00/blog/213817/

Or the original french version :

http://social.biowar...00/blog/213821/ 

Also, a little poll to know if you'd like to have this script.
http://social.biowar...0&poll_id=35118

Thank you. And don't forget to vote, it could be very important.

EDIT : Don't hesitate to post an opinion on the poll or here or just discuss about my creation 

Modifié par HelpingFR, 22 juin 2012 - 10:37 .

[CommanderShep]

Good job!

Modifié par Kazar Keren, 12 juin 2012 - 06:24 .

[MTF Tr1pE]

You are our prophet!

[vladimirurss]

You have all my support! Congratulation !

[Dass_Jennir]

Marauder shields chose you to save mass effect's end...

[CommanderShep]

We need more people see this!

[Redbelle]

I like the concept but there is one thing I think should be considered. Sovereign described the Reapers as without beginning or end. To create a point whereby we can establish the 'creation' of the Reapers would fly in the face of that statement. However you could get around this by taking something that existed, be it an idea, or a life form (maybe something cuttle fishy), that preceded the Keepers or something that was there before them and incorporate that into the Reaper. Trying to keep an uncertain element that can potentially lead to mystery behind the Reapers would be key even in a story behind how they came to be what they are.

I like the idea of a Rise of the Reaper story that could go onto become a DLC. After ME3 doing data dives into the Geth consensus and Javiks little memory totem it is not inconcievable to tie this into the main story of ME3.

If BW decide not to substantially alter the ending it would even serve to foreshadow the Catalysts appearence while changing how we have view Harby and the Citadel.

In summary, I like the idea. It'll need polish and stress testing in the form of peer review and some of the dialogue seems out of character but the premise seems solid and the structure is there.

Modifié par Redbelle, 12 juin 2012 - 10:23 .

[HelpingFR]

 In the original script of ME3, which inspired this idea, the first Reapers were A.I. When they harvested their creators, the Alpha-Keepers, they created news Reapers who (or which) didn't know what are their origins.But they knew they were born thanks to Harbi, Citadel and Alpha. We can think they are convinced they hasn"t got a beginning.

And like Alpha said in my script : Sovereign was an idiot (But  I don't think some people would like that^^ ) and was a arrogant Reaper.

[Aravius]

Very simply, if this ending was what I would have played, instead fo RED,BLUE,GREEN, I think I would have been satisfied. Thank you for your time and effort.

[Dass_Jennir]

How can bioware see this survey?

[CommanderShep]

If the survey is satisfactory, HelpingFR will send the script to Bioware with the survey 

Modifié par Kazar Keren, 14 juin 2012 - 09:02 .

[Dass_Jennir]

So, vote!

[HelpingFR]

 Thank you all for your support :happy:

[Kareaux]

Bump.
I really like your idea, though as someone said, the dialogues are a bit out of character.
Still, I'd like it if could inspire Bioware to create some new content for ME3.

I hope this gets the attention it deserves.

(de la part de -Zatanna- sur le forum ME3 de JVC )

Modifié par Kareaux, 17 juin 2012 - 11:48 .

[HelpingFR]

We need more votes.

[Lasien]

This is a good idea, actually, I like it. It does need some work though.

I would probably meld the human and reaper consciousness, which would explain memory losses, and I like the reaper corpse tie - in.

I would probably make the keepers the second race, and leave the original creator shrouded in mystery.

[HelpingFR]

Thank you.

About the consciousness of the Reaper and the human, i agree, it would be better.
But I'm keeping the Keepers (hem), I think it's obvious they are the Reaper's creators^^

[HelpingFR]

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[HelpingFR]

Thank you.

[lillitheris]

HelpingFR wrote...

  Hello lads ! 

Aww, only boys get to participate?

[HelpingFR]

lillitheris wrote...

HelpingFR wrote...

  Hello lads ! 

Aww, only boys get to participate?

No, everyone ^^

*go change "Hello lads" to "Hello" *

[HelpingFR]

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[HelpingFR]

Bump