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MASS EFFECT 3: ALTERNATE EARTH ENDING with FINAL BOSS FIGHT w/ Harbinger & TIM (Ultimate Paragon Path)

Débuté par Guest_Clark Davis_* , juin 14 2012 04:46

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 04:46

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Hey everyone,

A while back I wrote up my own alternate ending for ME3 and I thought I'd finally share it with you guys. The entire ending takes place in London. Shepard never goes up to the citadel. The final confrontation with the Illusive Man takes place in Big Ben Tower. THERE IS NO STAR CHILD! There are 3 DIFFERENT endings all soley based on your EMS rating.
 
Here's the link to the full google doc:
 
https://docs.google....IFA0/edit?pli=1
 
If anyone has any suggestions or ideas on what to add or change to this ending to make it better, please share!

Here's my Shepard's Profile:
Name: Grant Shepard
Sex: Male
Origin: Spacer
Psych Profile: War Hero
class: Soldier

Choices
 
Romanced Ashley Williams in ME1 (stayed loyal)
Spared the Rachni queen on Noveria
Saved Urdnot Wrex on Virmire
Sacrificed Kaiden Alenko on Virmire
Saved the citadel counsil from Sovereign’s attack
Destroyed the Collector base
All 12 squad mates and crew members survived suicide mission in ME2
Mordin Solis died curing the genophage on Tuchanka
Thane Krios died protecting the Salarian Counselor
Quarian/Geth war ended in peace, Legion sacrificed himself on Rannoch

 
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Seracen
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 04:53

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Nice one there, never considered turning Cerberus into a War Asset, but it makes sense in hindsight.

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Posté 14 juin 2012 - 05:21

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I thought it would make sense to make that war asset optional.

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Generalbanker
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 05:46

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why bioware don´t hire you, it was good, especially the crucible ruse

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Taalar
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 06:50

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nice!

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 03:47

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Taalar wrote...

nice!


Thanks!

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TOBY FLENDERSON
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 05:41

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That was really good. The last bit was a little too Michael Bay for me though. Would have liked it if we boarded Harbinger and killed him from within, and while doing it found out he was one fo the first reapers and created from the creator race.

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PhazeDelta1
Posté 14 juin 2012 - 09:20

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I really liked that.

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 15 juin 2012 - 06:22

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TOBY FLENDERSON wrote...

That was really good. The last bit was a little too Michael Bay for me though. Would have liked it if we boarded Harbinger and killed him from within, and while doing it found out he was one fo the first reapers and created from the creator race.


Funny, my roommate made the same suggestion. Thinking of writing a second version of the ending where instead of taking out Habinger on the Normandy, Shepard and crew board it and bring it down from within and escape, just like the collector base.

Thanks!

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Kenjison7
Posté 15 juin 2012 - 01:27

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Y u no renegade?

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 18 juin 2012 - 04:02

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Anyone think I should write the dark energy plotline into the ending?

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Coreniro
Posté 19 juin 2012 - 08:32

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Atrocious

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 20 juin 2012 - 06:01

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Coreniro wrote...

Atrocious


Finally! Someone who didn't like it  Posted Image

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survivor_686
Posté 20 juin 2012 - 09:31

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Interesting. Like the fact that you included a boss fight with TIM.

Not too happy with the way the Crucible was tossed aside as a Reaper trap, kinda makes all our efforts and engineering work on its useless.

Still a respectable work and kudos on writing it down.

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Guest_Clark Davis_*
Posté 21 juin 2012 - 11:07

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survivor_686 wrote...

Interesting. Like the fact that you included a boss fight with TIM.

Not too happy with the way the Crucible was tossed aside as a Reaper trap, kinda makes all our efforts and engineering work on its useless.

Still a respectable work and kudos on writing it down.


Thanks! Yeah, get your point on the Cruscible Reaper trap twist. But you got to admit that it's not as big a kick in the balls as the current twist Posted Image Been debating to write up a second version that includes the dark energy twist as well as using the crucible as an actual functional super weapon at the very end.
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