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[vinwarrior]

Ok so I am sure some of you read my forum about my idea for a recruitment DLC for a Geth named Zues and now here is his reassuarance mission dialogue starting with a fight between him and Javik below.

(Link to original Forum: http://social.biowar.../index/12270789)

(It starts as Shepard is told by Garrus that Zues and Javik are at it)

Garrus: Shepard can you please go down to the Shuttle Bay their is a... um disturbance.

Shepard: On it, Garrus.

--Shepard heads down to the Shuttle Bay, Javik is their fighting with Zues--

Javik: Are you sure we can trust you, machine? I don't want you turning!

Zues: Javik Crewman we don't understand your anger, we do not want to hurt you please let us continue building a concensus.

Javik: Are you threatening me, Machine? Because I can turn you into a piece of scrap!

--Shepard can Paragon Interrupt to stop the fight or let it continue--
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Paragon Interrupt

Shepard: Enough Javik! Zues has access to limited info and besides this is a full-scale war if he transmits info what can the people who recieve it do with it? The Reapers are killing everything and if we don't stop fighting they will take advantage of us.

Javik: Commander, you are right I am sorry Zues.

Zues: It is alright... Javik we forgive you and wish to have a contest sometime after the war.

Javik: Hmm what kind?

Zues: A Marksmanship Contest.

Javik: You're on.

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Let it Play

Javik: Why do I argue with a machine!

(Javik pulls out a Phalanx and fires on Zues' leg it falls to the floor injured and Shepard helps it up, it thanks Shepard and asks for help with an issue)

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Zues: Shepard Commander thank you. We may need to ask for a favor.

Shepard: What do you need help with?

Zues: You remeber Artemis, Matrix, Hades, Poseidon, Tartarus one of Legion's rebel teams.

Shepard: Yes why what happened?

Zues: They have been captured by Geth Loyalists.

Shepard: You need help getting them out right.

Zues: Yes Commander.

Shepard: Where do we need to go?

Zues: Well Commander, it is on Virmire.

Shepard: Virmire?

Zues: Yes Shepard, the Loyalists are hiding in the ruins of Saren's Cloning Facility.

Shepard: Sure we will go.

Zues: Thank You.

--Shepard travels to Virmire with now vivid Grasslands and beautiful Streams, with no sign of any battle to be found accept a facility still destroyed in the center of it all with mosses and grasses already overtaking the facility, inside Varren feast on the pyjak bodies and scar the walls with their mark, inside it is very clear and colorful not showing the gruesome experiments that took place here. Shepard exits the Kodiak Shuttle and enters through a broken down door--

Zues: Be careful Shepard.

Shepard: What's happened here?

Zues: Over the years of mistreatment and poor care it has been consumed by native mosses, accept the lower bunker near where you spoke with Sovereign.

Shepard: Oh wait what was that?

Zues: likely a native species of Varren, althoug myths say of a Krogan who was left here, he is in the form of a ghost.

Garrus: Unlikey but still the Thorian was unlikely and, well...

--A Cutscene comes up showing Zues's view and a radar showing a Black Target on his map while Shepard and his other squadmember[which is Garrus for this one] is green and enemies are red, black is unidentified just then an M-37 Falcon Shot goes out and a Krogan Emerges, he is wearing Black and Orange armor with pieces of cloths and hardware attached along with a omni-case--

Krogan: What are you doing here.

Garrus: Our friend here Zues' squad went missing we are here to find them.

Krogan: Hmm darn Scavengers. Go ahead!

Shepard: What's wrong? Who are you?

Idhark Natara: My name is Natara from clan Idhark, and I have been stuck here for 2 years my wife died in the rebellions and my son joined Clan Naktar. Saren promised me a future but left me here to die my life is worthless.

Zues: Natara why can you not leave?

Idhark Natara: No ship, no fuel. If only I could see my son again.

Zues: Natara help us find the bunker below and we promise we will take you back to you son.

Idhark Natara: Really? That is all I want. Alright I think I know a bunker below that has been having some strange tech readings follow me.

--You and your crew follow him and enter a room their are geth in chains and Geth Shock Troopers from ME1 in there you kill the shock troopers and rescue the Geth then enter back in the Kodiak Shuttle and boards the Nromandy, Mission Success and an Epilouge comes showing Natara meeting his son now the Ambassator of Clan Naktar, they hug as the screen goes to black--

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What do you guys think a great kind-of loyalty mission right? Or no? Give me some feedback and I will see you later.