Having an older woman offer advice is fine, but why not more helpful and perceptive (and possibly entertaining) advice? I'll grant that her comments on the pitfalls of romance with Alistair provide useful foreshadowing (although somewhat less useful when your character has just said to her, "You know about me and Zevran?"), but having her whine about the noise you and Zev are making and having someone who has spent her life guiding apprentices be unable to see that Zev might have more than one thing on his mind, just places her too neatly in a box. Unless wicked, old ladies advocate doing one's duty and avoiding sex.
And why so many references to old bones and spring chickens? Seriously, do the writers' older female acquaintances talk like that? And do they speak in ... such ... a ... measured ... way? You established early on that Wynne's white hair and slightly lined face were the products of age. Other than when necessary in establishing her nature as a spirit vessel, why keeping hammering on the age key when you could have introduced more individual qualities?
P.S. Flemeth was great.





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