Guglio08 wrote...
I'm currently on my fourth playthrough of Mass Effect 3. Even now, I'm still discovering cool little things that I missed the first time. Which is why I love ME2 and ME3. Yet every time I play this game, from my very first playthrough on midnight release to right now, I always run into this little problem.
Seriously, what the hell is wrong with Specialist Traynor?
I'm an amateur writer, so I take issue with a lot of things that show up in entertainment. There's a popular phrase, "show, don't tell." It means that if you want to convey a specific quality about a character, you should integrate it into their personality and their actions. If you want a character to be reckless, you have them do reckless things, instead of someone saying "yeah, he's a reckless dude." It's a very simple and common writing technique, and in the case of Traynor, someone at BioWare forgot how to use it.
Specialist Traynor is purportedly a valuable asset on the Normandy. Yet almost immediately into her introduction, we are told that she's brilliant and really, really useful. EDI says she's been "extremely helpful." EDI will later heap praise on Traynor's abilities. Traynor has a likeable personality and is a good Alliance replacement for Kelly Chambers. But Traynor also does nothing else of consequence. Everything about her supposedly amazing abilities are completely absent until she's used to bring missions to our attention. Her two defining moments are Grissom Academy and Horizon, and she basically does nothing else.
Let's contrast this to Steve Cortez, who, in my opinion, is both written far better as a character, and is also much more integral to the story. Cortez is a remorseful character with a very positive layer underneath. He's an exemplar shuttle pilot, but we don't learn this because EDI says so. We learn this through actually seeing him in action. The way he talks about keeping Shepard safe during missions, his love for tinkering with the shuttle, and his passion for anything with an engine are clearly displayed for the player. But his talents are never exposited to us.
Traynor is just a smug, pointless character. Her character could have easily been rolled into EDI. She exists purely as a love interest for FemShep. And it's a shame.
Why did the make her purely a carpet .........., and she's British, she just needs a Miranda suit and she's perfect