While she could do a good story, that isn't as important as not making your character too important. If you do that, it just makes it seem to be an, "I'm so awesome." story.BansheeOwnage wrote...
You have my attentionJade8aby88 wrote...
hmm.... I reckon I could do a good self-insert story...
Edit: Wow @ above. I'm sure you could do a great story Jade. You've already invested so much into the narrative.
The Puzzle Theory [successful refuse]
#2176
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:41
#2177
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:42
Or she could do whatever the hell she wants. That's what I do.Ignis Mors wrote...
You have to be veeeeery careful. You HAVE to leave the 'you' character to a minimum of importance. The optimum would be just intel, or nothing at all on the battlefield. Be someone who does menial tasks that no one else would want to. You do not want to have that one be someone who takes the spotlight. You want it to still focus on Shepard, you're just an extra in a good SI.
#2178
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:43
@BBN, really? Because my self-insert was going to be *so* big.... It was going to fill every single plot hole of ME3.
#2179
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:43
Which might be good. She is pretty awesome, after all.Ignis Mors wrote...
While she could do a good story, that isn't as important as not making your character too important. If you do that, it just makes it seem to be an, "I'm so awesome." story.BansheeOwnage wrote...
You have my attentionJade8aby88 wrote...
hmm.... I reckon I could do a good self-insert story...
Edit: Wow @ above. I'm sure you could do a great story Jade. You've already invested so much into the narrative.
Goodnight PT thread, it's been fun.
#2180
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:43
BringBackNihlus wrote...
"Self-Insert"
LOL
I'm sorry. I'll skulk away now.
http://replygif.net/i/172
Why BBN?
Why?
#2181
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:44
*cough* almost chokes on nothing *cough* Oh, man this cold.Jade8aby88 wrote...
Well in the self-insert story I was thinking of I was going to be the main character. But at the same time, I wasn't going to be the hero. Shepard and crew would be the hero. I would just be that girl that came across them etc...
@BBN, really? Because my self-insert was going to be *so* big.... It was going to fill every single plot hole of ME3.
#2182
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:46
What's cold about that though?
#2183
Guest_BringBackNihlus_*
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:46
Guest_BringBackNihlus_*
I would also have several children with her.
Modifié par BringBackNihlus, 04 janvier 2013 - 08:55 .
#2184
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 08:50
#2185
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:00
Ignis Mors wrote...
While she could do a good story, that isn't as important as not making your character too important. If you do that, it just makes it seem to be an, "I'm so awesome." story.BansheeOwnage wrote...
You have my attentionJade8aby88 wrote...
hmm.... I reckon I could do a good self-insert story...
Edit: Wow @ above. I'm sure you could do a great story Jade. You've already invested so much into the narrative.
Well in the self-insert story I was thinking of I was going to be the main character. But at the same time, I wasn't going to be the hero. Shepard and crew would be the hero. I would just be that girl that came across them etc...
So would that work?
#2186
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:07
I have a cold. I was kidding a little but I do actually have one.Jade8aby88 wrote...
goodnight Banshee! It has been fun!
What's cold about that though?
Edit: My advice is to write whatever you want with whatever confined you want.
Modifié par BansheeOwnage, 04 janvier 2013 - 09:08 .
#2187
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:13
BBN! Very nice edit there... lol
#2188
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:49
Jade8aby88 wrote...
Well in the self-insert story I was thinking of I was going to be the main character. But at the same time, I wasn't going to be the hero. Shepard and crew would be the hero. I would just be that girl that came across them etc...
@BBN, really? Because my self-insert was going to be *so* big.... It was going to fill every single plot hole of ME3.
#2189
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:53
DESTROY!
Humanity is utterly destroyed.
CONTROL!
Humanity is turned into a Human Reaper.
SYNTHESIS!
Humanity is made into a collector species.
Well done Commander Shepard. Boned we are. Unless you Refuse.
#2190
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 11:31
#2191
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 11:54
dorktainian wrote...
Jade What if Shepard is indoctrinated. That part of the Indoctrination theory follows through…making everything you see a lie. What if everything that happens…..happens. BUT instead of picking a way of tackling the reapers you are instead picking the way the reapers will deal with humanity? They assume Shepard is the best humanity has to offer, so they indoctrinate him, then leave the choice up to him. In that way Mankind chooses it’s own destiny.
DESTROY!
Humanity is utterly destroyed.
CONTROL!
Humanity is turned into a Human Reaper.
SYNTHESIS!
Humanity is made into a collector species.
Well done Commander Shepard. Boned we are. Unless you Refuse.
OMG I LOVE IT!
But it could also work as Synthesis making humanity into a Reaper and control is turning humanity into a collector race because they would have more control over them as a collector race as their minds would all be gone! I LOVE THIS INTERPRETATION!
Oh, I also posted this for you a couple of pages ago...
Jade8aby88 wrote...
One for people who want a successful refuse ending.
It's pretty good, especially when they talk about the races uniting, Turian and Human, Krogan and Salarian, Quarian and Geth.
It's soo true.
And one for the IT/refusers
More specifically the 2nd one...
Pascal219 wrote...
Wow, this thread has moved fast in one night. What are you all doing up so late??
Yea, a lot of great people stopped by to speculate
#2192
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 12:52
Jade8aby88 wrote...
Jade8aby88 wrote...
One for people who want a successful refuse ending.
It's pretty good, especially when they talk about the races uniting, Turian and Human, Krogan and Salarian, Quarian and Geth.
It's soo true.
And one for the IT/refusers
More specifically the 2nd one...Pascal219 wrote...
Wow, this thread has moved fast in one night. What are you all doing up so late??
Yea, a lot of great people stopped by to speculate
Yeah, that second one is nice indeed! And I noticed once again that Refuse is the other ending where we see Shepard standing tall after his speech (well, technically he isn't standing in Destroy, but he eventually walks with a straight back again).
Hell yeah this thread is good!
Modifié par MaximizedAction, 04 janvier 2013 - 12:53 .
#2193
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 01:24
Good to see another IT supporter in here
#2194
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 01:45
Jade8aby88 wrote...
Pascal219 wrote...
Wow, this thread has moved fast in one night. What are you all doing up so late??
Yea, a lot of great people stopped by to speculate
Really? I guess I got something to read then.
#2195
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 04:35
Sorry, I've been gone most of the day, so I don't understand what you're talking about. What happened?lex0r11 wrote...
Nooooooo Jade. I was the one to take the beating in the other thread!
What about my destiny?!
Sorry for the offtopic.
#2196
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:51
#2197
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 09:56
...and they ridiculed him for it?Ignis Mors wrote...
I think it was lexOr11 got on people's cases in the IT thread because they were bickering amongst themselves and weren't stopping. Something along those lines anyways.
That is why I don't want to visit that thread anymore.
#2198
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 10:30
That's what it sounded like to me. Seems kinda lame of them in my opinion.estebanus wrote...
...and they ridiculed him for it?Ignis Mors wrote...
I think it was lexOr11 got on people's cases in the IT thread because they were bickering amongst themselves and weren't stopping. Something along those lines anyways.
That is why I don't want to visit that thread anymore.
#2199
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 10:53
That's just disgusting. Deciding to help somebody else but them makes them evil? It makes them literalists? Where the hell did all the open.mindedness go that they showed 4 months ago?!Ignis Mors wrote...
That's what it sounded like to me. Seems kinda lame of them in my opinion.estebanus wrote...
...and they ridiculed him for it?Ignis Mors wrote...
I think it was lexOr11 got on people's cases in the IT thread because they were bickering amongst themselves and weren't stopping. Something along those lines anyways.
That is why I don't want to visit that thread anymore.
#2200
Posté 04 janvier 2013 - 11:05





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