Vox Draco wrote...
Interesting course this thread has taken...actually I am all for the IT, I love this idea, but even if it was true, maybe even planned from the start and everything now just a "placeholder" I do NOT consider the entire plotline of Mass Effect from ME2 onwards as very well written...because it really has a lot of issues not handled very well
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Yeah, I actually agree. I quite like IT , too, as an idea, or at least I quite like the idea that Shepard will be finally resisting indoctrination himself by the end. And it's such a powerful tool, I'm a little surprised it doesn't feature more prominently in the story (I'm not really sure I can bring myself to counting TIM here... that was all pretty incoherent).
What I
hate, though, is the whole 'everything was an illusion' thing followed by waking up and insert new ending here idea that people are pushing (i.e. the indoctrination is also kind of just another superflous detail to but the writers a little more time). I'm glad there's no real evidence for
that.
Personally, if I
had to try and repair the ending with minimal change, I think I'd make much more heavy use of indoctrination in general, though. Best I can come up with at present is something along the following lines:
1) Scrap the star-child. If shepard is to talk to some form of the child that's been bugging his dreams in the end what he's actually talking to is a figment of his borderline-indoctrinated imagination.
2) The reapers themselves aren't quite so immune from indoctrination as we may have been led to believe. Their minds aren't eventually destroyed by it like ours would be, but it's a powerful thing. They're not really the masters of it or the indoctrinators per se. This maybe goes some way to describing why the hell the reapers do what they do even though we've met them initially as free independant strong-willed individuals. I don't think it goes the whole way, but it's maybe a start. I'm not going to dignify the organics vs synthetics thing as presented in ME3 with a response, frankly.
3) The reapers themselves designed the crucible. It's design conspicuously survives because ultimately/sub-consciously they actually
want it to.
4) The crucible is actually an indoctrination breaker. This is what they designed it for. They can't fire it themselves, though, they need a catalyst for that.
5) The catalyst is Shepard him/her self (or, rather, any mind not yet so enthralled it can't fire the crucible, Shepard needn't be a 'chosen one'), if he can manage to shake himself/herself free long enough to do so.
6) Firing the crucible frees the reapers, fundamentally changing the nature of the conflict and destroying the reapers as a unified single-mindedly genocidal force. It doesn't instantaneously make everything better, but it makes surviving the cycle possible.
7) Possibly you could use this to explain ME2 a little better. Humans are painted (sort of, at least) as diverse individualists who have managed to stand up to and kill a reaper. Maybe they hope there will be something correspondingly special and free about a human reaper, and that's both why they were so keen to create one and why they wanted to include Shepard therein so badly. Like the OP, though, I have a hard time understanding why your choice at the end of ME2 was destroy base or hand it to TIM, rather than hand it to TIM or hand it to the alliance.
That's probably about the best I can do at the moment. I don't think it's that great, though, to be honest. Like I say I think we're in something of a corner at this point.
As far as I can tell, the only thing ME2 actually set us up for in the third act is certain extinction barring something truly miraculous (or wildly implausible, which is kind of what we got). The only major advantage they've really given us as opposed to other cycles is the delay and fore-knowledge afforded to us by the Protheans but they've almost gone out of their way to make sure that wasn't used
at all. They actually seemed to use ME2 as a fast-forward button to reaching the problem they had no idea how to solve.