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Mass Effect 3: Perspective - I made a Shepard/Tali story so you don't have to!


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Mr.BlazenGlazen

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Or perhaps, you still do. Though perhaps it would be enjoyable to read a story about my own interpretation and perspective (pun intended) of the destroy ending, and what may possibly be next for Mr. Superman (Shepard).

I know I advertised this in a few other threads, but I figured that I'd give it it's own thread as well.

Perspective is a story that I have made that continues Male Shepard's story and relationship with Tali and his other closest friends after the events of the crucible activating. The war has left him scarred, physcially and mentally. The only way he can truly recover from his wounds is to cling onto the things he cares the most. Especially when a ghost from the past decides to give him a "pleasant" visit. He now has one last final mission, and this time it's personal. Rated Mature do to adult language, suggestive themes, gore yadda yadda yadda.

This is pretty much my first attempt at telling a story, ever. My grammar sort of sucks, but I think I've sort of impressed myself and some others considering that I slept through most of my high school english class. I hope it does the same for you too! I've got quite an interesting story boiling within my imagination, like how fondue constantly boils at the Melting Pot. I do end up overthinking things, so it does take me a huge chunk of time to write each chapter.

But I hope you guys decide to stick around, because I've got one hell of a story to tell. Cheers!

Mass Effect 3: Perspective

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But doesn't tali say come back to me. Or did you pick a different dialogue option. When i did it she said come back to me. Got me choked up. That was the best part of the EC.

But i read the prologue so i thought is was good is it also on deviantart.com

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Nahuel6 wrote...

But doesn't tali say come back to me. Or did you pick a different dialogue option. When i did it she said come back to me. Got me choked up. That was the best part of the EC.

But i read the prologue so i thought is was good is it also on deviantart.com


I started writing this story 2 months before the Extended Cut was released. So that was before I saw the scene with Shepard putting Tali and Garrus on the normandy during the final push towards the citadel. Although now that I recall, Tali's last words to Shepard was indeed "Come back to me." However, just in my opinion her saying "But I have a home" while pretty much crying got me more choked up. Which is why I went along with that in a much later chapter.

Also no, it's not up on deviantart. 

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oh. ok. makes sense. Haven't gottin a chance to read more but i will write wat i think when i am done reading it.

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Nahuel6 wrote...

oh. ok. makes sense. Haven't gottin a chance to read more but i will write wat i think when i am done reading it.


Thank you, please let me know. I'd greatly appreciate getting feedback from anyone that reads it.

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Updated my story with a new chapter!

Every dark cloud has a silver lining

Let me know what you think!

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New chapter is up!

Chapter 9: Heritage

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 New chapter is up!

Chapter 10: Because of You

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Badda bing, badda boom.

Chapter 11: In the Horizon

Modifié par Mr.BlazenGlazen, 05 septembre 2012 - 02:35 .


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Just want to update this since I've neglected my own thread for over two months. I have updated the story 4 times since my last post here.

Chapter 12: Call of the hound

Chapter 13: Call of the hound part 2

Chapter 14: Life signs fading

Chapter 15: Transparency

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I'm back with another installment.

Chapter 16: Beyond the flames

Enjoy the calm while it lasts. Because there is a storm coming.

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Yeeeeello everyone. I have returned with another chapter. I await you firey pitchforks and knives.

Chapter 17: Ashes,Ashes

Oh, and happy 2013 everyone!

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New chapter is up!

Chapter 18: Revelations