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[Renmiri1]

CENIC wrote...

The concept of ANY female Hawke concieving a mage child is pretty interesting to me, given the events that would be affecting the world at the time. What if a pro-templar Hawke produced a mage? It's very probable, given her bloodline. A favorite headcanon of mine to chew on is that a Hawke who romanced Sebastian, sided with the templars, and became Viscountess of Kirkwall/Princess of Starkhaven has a mage son in the middle of the Mage/Templar War. A mage heir to the thrones of TWO influential Free March cities! That would cause some conflict, for sure.

Oh wow, this sounds like an awesome plot! <3

I am writing my fanfic with Anders as LI and father but your idea is great too. Why don't you write it ? I will read it happily 

[Nightdragon8]

it didn't help the mage underground killed itself when they kidnapped one of your party, and ended up getting slaughtered for no other reason than being stupid and not finding out who they where kidnapping

[w0lfam0da1s]

There is a few things that need to be fixed with that.

Even if Anders and Hawke are a couple and him a Warden. Hawke would of know before he blew up the Chantry that she was with child. A woman knows within the first two weeks or no later then the end of a cycle. If she herself was a mage I would say she would know defiantly within the first two weeks. The body starts the change instantly with hormones and stuff. Also not having a menstrual cycle the next month would indicate something.

Besides that. I can't see Anders letting Hawke be in Kirkwall if a child was conceived. He would of gotten her out of Kirkwall. If he was to go back and blow up the Chantry while Hawke was not in Kirkwall that is totally believable. I don't think he would let her know anything about what he was doing if she was with child.

With that said. Anders was too hell bent on his mission. It was freedom at any cost. And with Justice being bound to him. I don't see him having children. It would be seen as a problem.

Just be ready for any back lash that comes with the ones who read the story.


Also just as a side note......

Isabela would have ALOT of questions.
My Hawke would have some explaining to do if she was with child.

Anyways good luck with the story.


Have A Good Day

Modifié par w0lfam0da1s, 12 avril 2013 - 10:19 .

[Renmiri1]

w0lfam0da1s wrote...

There is a few things that need to be fixed with that.

Even if Anders and Hawke are a couple and him a Warden. Hawke would of know before he blew up the Chantry that she was with child. A woman knows within the first two weeks or no later then the end of a cycle. If she herself was a mage I would say she would know defiantly within the first two weeks. The body starts the change instantly with hormones and stuff. Also not having a menstrual cycle the next month would indicate something.

I was basing this detail on personal experience (I'm a mom of 2). When I got pregnant from my first child my periods were very irregular and me and hubby had been trying for a baby for over 5 years. After that long, we simply weren't expecting a pregnancy and had started talking about going to a fertility doctor, in vitro, etc.. We both thought a kid would not happen without expert medical help.

Then I started to feel more tired and had a huge appetite but I thought it was the flu and my mom's cooking since we were visiting her. I even got scolded by my mom for being so lazy and eating so much! 

When I got back from visiting her I went to my doctor for "the flu" that wouldn't go away and found out I was 6 weeks pregnant. 

w0lfam0da1s wrote...

Also just as a side note......

Isabela would have ALOT of questions.
My Hawke would have some explaining to do if she was with child.

Anyways good luck with the story.


Have A Good Day

Txs, I should get back to updating it at Fanfic.net It's called "Never Taunt a Mage" and author is Renmiri if you want to check it out ^^

Modifié par Renmiri1, 12 avril 2013 - 05:01 .

[w0lfam0da1s]

Renmiri1 wrote...

w0lfam0da1s wrote...

There is a few things that need to be fixed with that.

Even if Anders and Hawke are a couple and him a Warden. Hawke would of know before he blew up the Chantry that she was with child. A woman knows within the first two weeks or no later then the end of a cycle. If she herself was a mage I would say she would know defiantly within the first two weeks. The body starts the change instantly with hormones and stuff. Also not having a menstrual cycle the next month would indicate something.

I was basing this detail on personal experience (I'm a mom of 2). When I got pregnant from my first child my periods were very irregular and me and hubby had been trying for a baby for over 5 years. After that long, we simply weren't expecting a pregnancy and had started talking about going to a fertility doctor, in vitro, etc.. We both thought a kid would not happen without expert medical help.

Then I started to feel more tired and had a huge appetite but I thought it was the flu and my mom's cooking since we were visiting her. I even got scolded by my mom for being so lazy and eating so much! 

When I got back from visiting her I went to my doctor for "the flu" that wouldn't go away and found out I was 6 weeks pregnant. 

w0lfam0da1s wrote...

Also just as a side note......

Isabela would have ALOT of questions.
My Hawke would have some explaining to do if she was with child.

Anyways good luck with the story.


Have A Good Day

Txs, I should get back to updating it at Fanfic.net It's called "Never Taunt a Mage" and author is Renmiri if you want to check it out ^^

First off I want to say congratulations on becoming a mother. It is a long and tough journey that brings out so much in us. Even in the worst of times our children remind us just how beautiful the world can be.

Now that the sappy stuff is out of the way.

When I posted about Hawke's menstrual cycle.

Several things I was considering when I posted.

1- The time frame of events in the game.
2- The Era of the game its self. ( the middle ages loosely / King Arthur time period )
3- Hawke being a mage or not being a mage
4- Anders being a Grey Warden

There is more but they are just little compared to the main 4 I just listed.
However the 2nd one on the list is what I was mainly referencing when talking about Hawke's cycle.

I already know that many will be like.....WHF does that have to do with any thing.
So I'll break it down simply and try not to sound like a know it all.

During Hawke's Era ( as portrayed in game ) we can see that it loosely the Middle Ages.
So taking in account of that time frame. We know different factors come into play as far as health not just then but now.

So I ask you only to consider that the difference between HOW we eat now and how they ate then.

If you look back on the food itself you will notice a BIG change in it.

First off the growing season.
Second the way the crops was fertilized.
Third the size of the animals like dairy cow and beef cow.

That is only to name a few.

There is so much we have done based on supply and demand that it has changed the way we eat.
( I'm not a saint I'm guilty of it also.)

So back to what I was saying.

The fact is that the chemicals and steroids we use in our food has more of a factor in why women in today's Era have a higher risk of not being able to become pregnant. 
(Yes it was also a risk way back then but the risk was much more limited.)

So that was what I was basing my post on when I talked about Hawke's menstrual cycle.
I was taking in the way they ate compared to today. 
It's just something to think about.

I didn't try to imply anything about Hawke or yourself. I'm sorry if I did offend you.
Once again I'm glad that you was blessed with two children.  

Have A Good Day

[Renmiri1]

Oh no you haven't offended me! I myself knew little about pregnancy before experiencing it myself!

Wasn't expecting many old coots like me on BSN, hence not expecting people who have been pregnant and was just trying to explain that finding out you are pregnant by week 6 (2nd month) happens even today. Is quite common actually.

Also on the fanfic I make Justice cause the pregnancy so another reason Hawke doesn't suspect a thing is because she has been taking some precautions and using whatever Thedans use for birth control (a herbal tea on the fanfic). I used one of the suggestions in this thread and made Justice make sure the Rivaini fertility talisman Hawke finds is placed under Hawke's mattress, counteracting the herbal tea. Sneaky Justice! 


Being pregnant with my first kid was a fun surprise and writing about it, albeit transferring the experience to Hawke, was a fun activity

Modifié par Renmiri1, 15 avril 2013 - 01:59 .

[w0lfam0da1s]

Renmiri1 wrote...

Oh no you haven't offended me! I myself knew little about pregnancy before experiencing it myself!

Wasn't expecting many old coots like me on BSN, hence not expecting people who have been pregnant and was just trying to explain that finding out you are pregnant by week 6 (2nd month) happens even today. Is quite common actually.

Also on the fanfic I make Justice cause the pregnancy so another reason Hawke doesn't suspect a thing is because she has been taking some precautions and using whatever Thedans use for birth control (a herbal tea on the fanfic). I used one of the suggestions in this thread and made Justice make sure the Rivaini fertility talisman Hawke finds is placed under Hawke's mattress, counteracting the herbal tea. Sneaky Justice! 


Being pregnant with my first kid was a fun surprise and writing about it, albeit transferring the experience to Hawke, was a fun activity

I'm not sure who is an old coots but I can see where your coming from.
I'm glad that I didn't offend you.
Yeah finding out that late is something common. It is more common in women that are over a certain age. However like I said before other things become a factor.
When my twin sister became pregnant her first child she was already 7wks along. So I know how unsure it can be.
I got a few fanficts I've been reading and I've got you on the list to read. I should start it in the next day or so depending on what comes up. Just know that I can be brutally honest when I do reviews sometimes. Sometimes I just let you know if its good or like it.

Anyways...

Have A Good Day

[Shienis]

So... what if Hawke was pregnant with Anders... Would it change his actions? In my opinion, it would make any change only if it happened in Act 2, then he *might* reconsider he's acting foolish and started to care about his child.
But we're talking about end of Act 3, right? Well, poor Anders almost doesn't exist, most of him was consumed by the Vengeance demon, so... I agree with your story, Vengeance would use this fact against Anders to make him more fanatic.

By the way, it's a nice story. I'm looking forward to another chapter.

[CENIC]

Renmiri1 wrote...

CENIC wrote...

The concept of ANY female Hawke concieving a mage child is pretty interesting to me, given the events that would be affecting the world at the time. What if a pro-templar Hawke produced a mage? It's very probable, given her bloodline. A favorite headcanon of mine to chew on is that a Hawke who romanced Sebastian, sided with the templars, and became Viscountess of Kirkwall/Princess of Starkhaven has a mage son in the middle of the Mage/Templar War. A mage heir to the thrones of TWO influential Free March cities! That would cause some conflict, for sure.

Oh wow, this sounds like an awesome plot! <3

I am writing my fanfic with Anders as LI and father but your idea is great too. Why don't you write it ? I will read it happily 

I've been thinking about it, but since I'd like to have the child in question as the protagonist, I kinda have to wait for DA3 first, to see how the whole Mage-Templar war pans out.
Still, it's fun to mull over possible characters and conflicts. I know for a fact that I want Allure to make an appearance, and offer Hawke's child the deal she wasn't willing to make with Hawke.

[Tiastarshine]

Well... I remember when during the first playthrough in the Act 3 I was like "whoa, Anders, what has happened?" I even waited for explanation later in the game, but there came nothing. Anders keeps telling that mages are being made tranquil more and more often but wait - that is not big news, it has happened before. So why now? Why these mages? There must have been something more than that.
And then Anders telling Hawke about "their children" in the end made me a tiniest bit suspicious... He doesn't mean Mage children in general, because he tells this only to fem!Hawke. Maybe that is a hint at the end?!
If Hawke really got pregnant and with a Mage child (which is almost 95% possible because magic always runs in Amell/Hawke family) there would be no surprise if Abders went ablaze. His child is a Mage and will be taken from him and put in the circle and Anders knew everything about the injustice of circles. This would definitely be the cause to eliminate the chance of compromise between mages and Templars. Moreover Justice would definitely use this fact to force him follow his will - not only mages in general are oppressed but his own child too!

[Renmiri1]

Yup, that is what I thought as well.

I even started a fanfic about it

Sadly I think the explanation is simpler: Act 3 was rushed and Anders going ablaze was handled / written badly. One day he tells you this last 3 years with you have been the best thing in his life, the next day he is pushing you away and asking you to get bomb making stuff for him. I literally felt I had skipped about 2 hours of cutscenes or like 20 pages on a book.