Davik Kang wrote...
I've read some more about various people's interpretation of the ending so I wanted to give my own so far...
Btw let me make it clear from the beginning that I think Indoctrination is blatantly intended as a possible explanation of the final scenes, even if you decide in the end that you aren't indoctrinated or are above indoctrination, and choose Synthesis or Control anyway.
I think that a lot of the events after the Harbinger blast are actually real. There seem to be too many problems if you consider the whole thing to be a hallucination. In particular, that you could then interpret that Shepard is still unconscious and the battle is still going on after the ending, which a really don't think is meant to be the case.
The indoctrination doesn't have to play out in real time. Just like dreams can seem long but occur in seconds. In fact Doomsday found a slowed down reaper horn during TIM scene. So the battle isn't necessarily raging in the background.
Davik Kang wrote...
So, I think that, semi-consciously, Shepard does indeed struggle past some ground into the beam, and does find herself (/himself) on some obscure part of the Citadel. I also think that, implausible as it may seem, Anderson and TIM find themselves on the vessel too. Shepard's appalling physical (and possibly mental) condition contributes to the dream-like quality of the occurrences here. The fact that TIM can manipulate Shepard on the Citadel into shooting Anderson, amongst other things, is rather eyebrow-raising, but I think that basically, these implausible elements contribute to a more epic finale. Implausible yes, but not totally ridiculous.
TIM is indoctrinated. It's a little more than eyebrow raising. All you're doing is calling it mostly bad writing in the name of coolness factor.
Davik Kang wrote...
Thus the final conversation with Anderson is genuine, which it does appear to be.
How does Anderson get on the citadel again? Why didn't he help Shepard? How is TIM controlling Anderson? Hand waving to be epic by Bioware? That's bad writing theory
Davik Kang wrote...
Then, as Shepard realises she is bleeding severely, and the Alliance radios in asking her to do something to make the crucible work, she struggles forward, but collapses with the controls just out of reach.
I think the true hallucination and indoctrination attempt start here, with previous suspicious imagery being a result of Shepard's weakened condition and semi-conscious state.
If that scene is real Shepard is passed out. How is he going to activate anything?
Davik Kang wrote...
As for the next scene, I think that, just as Vigil made himself understood to the ME1 characters on Ilos, I think that the Crucible has been designed such that it can be understood by a sentient being, so that it can be manipulated and activated at the right time. Here, Shepard is guided to this understanding, but simultaneously confronted by the Catalyst, on awaking. I think the Catalyst, appearing as a ghost AI of the boy plaguing her dreams, is a reaper intelligence on board the Citadel, itself being some kind of dormant Reaper. Thus, in her drained and hallucinatory state, Shepard sees this image of the Catalyst explaining the possible solutions to its galactic problem, while simultaneously coming to understand how to operate the Crucible. I think that the perception of the Catalyst actually presenting these choices is a fallacy, and a desperate last-ditch attempt by the Reapers/Catalyst to indoctrinate Shepard into believing that Control or Synthesis are better options. But he cannot avoid Shepard understanding each of the choices and how to do them, because these choices are becoming understood simply because the sentient being (Shepard) made it to the controls (before passing out and then awaking, in the hallucinatory state).
That doesn't make sense on so many levels I don't know if I have the energy to explain it. In your scenario the Reapers don't want the crucible firing - just for starters:
Why is Harbinger turned into a total retard that...
1. Doesn't turn off the beam
2. Defends the beam by himself
3. Misses Shepard after bullseyeing everyone
4. Doesn't make sure he's dead
5. Leaves
6. Doesn't defend the beam against Anderson
You're point about starchild trying to trick Shepard into the wrong choice:
If it's a hallucination/indoctrination...
1. Shepard understands the controls even though he is hallucinating and passed out before reaching them?
2. That makes starchild pointless and powerless
I can't take it anymore. Your version makes no sense. It bounces between IT, literal, bad writing, space magic, hand waving, and things you invented
Davik Kang wrote...
Main problem with this theory is how Shepard appears to be back on Earth after surviving, and all I can say is, we're still speculating as to exactly where Shepard wakes up. But it certainly seems peaceful, and not in the middle of a heated battle.
Anyway, I hope some of you can give your thoughts on exactly how you see the reality of the ending, and where your interpretations differ from mine.
I'm sorry but there's just too much wrong here to explain it all.
But you basically ascribe more power to TIM then the Reapers.
You hand wave all the plot holes away during the beam run, about the crucibles design and options, the TIM scene, the available.decisions...that's saying it's only 95% bad writing.