Fixers0 wrote...
Visable contradicton within a narrative aren't blind assumptions.
It is a blind asumption to presume the Reapers are incapable of deception; to think that villains within a story cannot lie. The vast majority of his so-called plot holes are the result of his own gullibility and ignorance.
http://social.biowar...8711/1#140187111. "Ultimately, the Reaper gains the ability to use the victim's body to amplify its signals, manifesting as 'alien' voices in the mind."
2. Citadel, as I have proven.
3. Shepard wasn't engulfed and he has survived more powerful explosions. You forget his cybernetic upgrades.
4. Biotic ability: Dominate
5. He was unconscious. Fighting ensued while he was out. Duh!
6. Game mechanics which have nothing to do with story. The last part isn't intended to be a combat level. It's an interactive cinematic.
7. Two theories: Anderson arrived in a different corridor. There were more than one. Because he is not limping he would move faster and if that area of the Citadel can shift and move it may have moved to where Shepard was which signifies they were being corralled to that spot. The problem with this theory is that Anderson's dialog isn't paced realistically with the environment and they didn't fix it.
Which leads to theory two. Anderson died on the beam run. Anderson is a hallucination on the Citadel. He's pretty clean and Hackett say's "he did it", not "they did it". He says "someone" made it into the Citadel. That scene with Hackett was place explicitly to denounce dream theory. To show that Shepard did actually make it in the Citadel.
8. Harbinger doesn't want to kill Shepard. It clearly let's him live. It killed other runners and aircrat with pinpoint accuracy.
9. See #8
10. He doesn't know where Shepard is. You are assuming they came in at the same place even though it's said they didn't.
11. He was always wounded. You chose to focus on it only after Anderson is shot.
12. Astoboy isn't on the Citadel. Could just be Harbinger communicating via hullcination just like at the end of Arrival DLC.
13. Yes. You're problem is you're assuming the Kid is being 100% honest and isn't omitting any information.
14. Because they are programmed to think this way. Just like Shepard things the same thing in the opening of the Control narration. "Eternal. Inifinite. Immortal." anyone?
15. A hallucination or hologram cannot kill anyone.
16. See #14. You not liking a story doesn't make it bad writing.
17. You don't know what other cycles knew, rather or not the Leviathans played a role in the Crucible or any other data about how the Crucible came about. You cannot infer knowledge through ignorance. Furthermore, you continue to make the baseless assertion that the Kid = truth.
18. You're assuming the Kid is telling the truth and that characters within a story cannot lie.
19. Protheans got info from past cycles. It was passed down.
20. It had knowledge of it.
21. The same reason you can't just change a car so that a device that connects to the exhaust tip can't connect. Some parts are critical to the proper function of a device.
22. Vendetta
23. They couldn't get to it in time. The fleets held them at bay. Unless you have low numbers and they severly damage it. If shepard dallies for to long they will eventually destroy it after it has docked.
24. They make reapers within the citadel. They were sending humans and human goo up to the Citadel. This is stated in-game.
25. Because it was designed to lift up when the wards were open (15 degrees). Pressure activated.
26. To convince Shepard not to destroy the Reapers. It would have gotten done one way or the other.
27. Again, you assume everything works like the Kid says and that it is incapable of lying.
28. See #27
29. Like every other reaper tech you've seen.
30. No crucible. Aslo, see #27.
Took me 16 minutes to respond to these weak arguments. Many of which are a product of sheer ignorance of the story and lore.
Fixers0 wrote...
Welcome to Fixers' quick analysis to discover signs of bad writing:
Subject: Andersons problamatic Location
Catagory: Contradiction/inconsistancy.
Observed Fact A: Anderson is nowhere to be seen at the Conduit acces in London
Observed Fact B: Anderson claims to have followed Shepard up second after s/he arrives on the citadel
Conclusion: Anderson is clearly not at the conduit base in London though the narrative does claim that he enters the conduit just after Shepard.
Result: contradiction within the narrative.
There are many corridors. Not just one. Anderson says this himself. You can see the other doors and bridges. You are ignoring the very dialog in the scene you are intentionally trying to make seem contradicting. That area of the Citadel was capable of reconfiguring. Even this is stated. Of course you ignore it because you WANT it to be bad writing. Anderson could have come out of the different corridor, crossed a different bridge and the dias could have moved to the position in front of Shepard. But that would involve taking the evidence presented to come to a rational conclusion within the context of the story. What you are doing is shutting your eyes and just deeming it bad writing without any consideration to the in-game dialog and events.
Anderson could also be a hallucination as some believe. Hackett says "He did it" and that "someone" made it in. Not that they made it in. The walls shifting could have been a hallucination as we've heard of this before from the logs on the Derelict Reaper.
But by all means, ignore the lore because you want your sunshine and butterflies ending. Trust the Reapers and die to advance their goals. It's gotta work out because it's the ending you like the best. God forbid things don't work out like you would like them to.
Modifié par The Twilight God, 01 octobre 2012 - 05:39 .