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Our_Last_Scene wrote...

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Situation: Shepherd is bleeding out but has successfully opened the Citadel arms allowing the Crucible to dock
Problem: Though Docked, the Crucible is not firing.
Solution: Unexpectedly, an elevator appears that takes Shepherd to the bottom of the Citadel Tower, where he meets the Catalyst and shows him how to fire the Crucible.

Thessia merely states that somebody controls the Reapers and that is all. Though it is a reference about the Catalyst controlling the cycle, it still has nothing to do with the Catalyst being a literary Deus Ex Machina.

A Deus Ex Machina also does not mean it is a new character, but it is about problems and solutions. To show you waht that would look like I am going to tell you a story. You and your friends are running through the woods one day. However, you start being chased down by a pack of wolves and though you are able to escape for a while, they finally have you cornered in a cave. However, all of the sudden fire begins shooting out of the hands of your childhood friend. The wolves are now fried and you can go home safely.

That is what a deus ex machina is. It is the unexpected solution of a seemingly unsolvable problem through unexpected intervention. It does not matter if the catalyst is vaguely referenced at Thessia, his unexpected intervention on the Citadel is what makes him a literary Deus Ex Machina.


We always knew that the Catalyst was needed to fire the Crucible, that's not unexpected.

Judging by the fact that the Catalyst seemignly has no power over the Citadel, it's more likely that the elevator is a function the Crucible activated.


1. We are already told that the Catalyst was the Citadel by the Prothean VI on Cronus Station.  It is unexpected to find out that the Reaper Overmind lives in the Citadel and calls itself the Catalyst.  

2. First of all, where is it referenced that the Catalyst has no control over the Citadel?  Second, how did the Designers of the Crucible know to make a feature that activates an elevator that takes the occupent to the base of the Citadel Tower?  Also, the Keepers continually change the Citadel and when the Reaper's took over the whole place is unrecognisable.

3. The Catalyst is still a Deus Ex Machina as he is an unexpected intervention to an unsolveable problem.

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whoops. my tablet doesnt like quoting

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wrong definition of a DEM, thecrazyhobo.

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Funkdrspot wrote...

wrong definition of a DEM, thecrazyhobo.


Really, then fill me on the correct definition.

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TheCrazyHobo wrote...

1. We are already told that the Catalyst was the Citadel by the Prothean VI on Cronus Station.  It is unexpected to find out that the Reaper Overmind lives in the Citadel and calls itself the Catalyst.  

2. First of all, where is it referenced that the Catalyst has no control over the Citadel?  Second, how did the Designers of the Crucible know to make a feature that activates an elevator that takes the occupent to the base of the Citadel Tower?  Also, the Keepers continually change the Citadel and when the Reaper's took over the whole place is unrecognisable.

3. The Catalyst is still a Deus Ex Machina as he is an unexpected intervention to an unsolveable problem.


1. Doesn't make the Catalyst unexpected. We knew that the Catalyst was needed to fire the Crucible, not knowing what the Catalyst is does not make the Catalyst unexpected, it just makes what it is unexpected. Not DEM material.

2. The Catalyst appears to have no direct power over the Citadel or the Crucible, otherwise he would've mearly stopped the events of the end from happening. He appears to be a sort of guiding force, a subconcious if you will, behind the Reapers.

3. Not unexpeted, lets just leave out this number from now on because really it's just a repeat of your original point, rather than an explanation of your original point, and therefore irrelevant.

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TheCrazyHobo wrote...

Funkdrspot wrote...

wrong definition of a DEM, thecrazyhobo.


Really, then fill me on the correct definition.

page 1 bro. youre missing a crucial detail about what separates a DEM from literaly every regular ending

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That you find the Crucible plot ridiculous is an opinion, however, and thus does not proove that it is bad writing. You could just as easily dismiss your arguments here as a lack of imagination: Nobody ever states that no cycle has ever known what the Crucible does – The Protheans (and, through them, our cycle) know it can destroy the Reapers, but only from previous cyles. Neither we, nor the Protheans, added anything to the Crucible design. None of this solidifies the idea that *nobody* ever knew what it did. Previous cycles could have been fully aware of both the inner workings of the Crucible and thep potency of the Citadel as an "amplifier" – Which is even hinted at by Vendetta saying the somebody chose to integrate the Citadel as the catalyst, though it is unclear which cycle that was.


It is not lack of imagination that compels me to think that the Crucible plot is stupid, rather it is my imagination that leads me to think that the only logical conclusion is that the Crucible has to be of Reaper design.  Possibly even Leviathan now after the DLC. 

The thing is, I keep coming down the question of if the Protheans knew about this thing and obviously they did, why was this not the first thing they sent out in the Beacons?  Why not make sure something like Vigil was screaming out, "There are giant space squids coming to kill you and here's how you defeat it!"  Its pure luck and contrivance that we find that thing and far too late in the narrative for my liking to be anything other than one giant Deus Ex Machina.  

My point through all of that it is, we don't know what it did.  Did the Protheans know?  Who knows because they sure as hell didn't feel the need to tell us about it.  Why?  And I mean exactly what this thing was capable of too.

There might have been cycles in which the workings of the Crucible were clear, but they didn't manage to build (or use) it anyway. Maybe those cycles lacked military strength, whatever. It is really not important. Yet the claim that the actual story that we have ever states that *none* of the cycles had any idea of how the Crucible and Citadel work is simply not true, and even more so, it is never implied that a cycle who did not understand these workings added anything to the Crucible design (e.g. neither we, nor the Protheans).


See my above point.  For this to really work for the backstory of the narrative the Protheans at least should know what it did./  If the plans could have been passed on and on in as good a condition as was required to build it and to add on to it, the actual purpose of the thing should have survived too and there is no logical explanation as to why the detailed functionning of it was left out.

Also, I wouldn't take the catalyst's "You are the first organic to ever stand here" all too literally: This could very well mean "stand here, before me, the catalyst AI".


All I have to go on is what the Catalyst says.  He doesn't lie.  He is badly misinformed, but hes no liar. 

That the design hasn't been eradicated by the Reapers, well, on one hand, the Reapers are notoriously bad (or simply not concerned) with removing all traces of previous cycles from the galaxy – we find Prothean ruins all over the place, as well as some traces of previous cycles (lots of these in planet descriptions, but also things like the cave paintings in Leviathan). On the other hand, in the EC, the catalyst even states that it thought the Crucible plans to be eradicated, but he is surprised at the organics' resourcefulness – I'm sure Liara wasn't the only one ever to think of a time capsule to help the next cycle – Vendetta suggests this as well even.


They are utterly incompetent then.  The Catalyst clearly knows about this thing and still lets it carry on cycle after cycle after cycle.  Its not as if he didn't have a minion left in the galaxy who could have continued to search for it.

Anyway, I'm not arguing against your opinion, you are totally entitled to that.


Ditto.:lol:

Then again, the victory was reaching the Citadel and, despite all odds, dock the Crucible. Beyond that point, we only resolve the Cerberus arc (partly related to the Reapers via TIM's indoctrination, but actually more of a clash of (human) views).


Neither of which are the main conflict.  They are small victories and not suitable replacements for the main victory we all desperately craved.

The catalyst pretty much took the wind out of our sails by solidifying that the only way for the Reapers to truly fail their goal would be by destroying all organics, which is the only outcome that would truly qualify as a failure for them. Thus, there is little room for an externalized conflict anymore, the situation is more akin to a clash of philosophies, but even that is diluted if you interpret the cycle as a solution the Reapers chose to buy them time for their experiments with evolution, as the Leviathan DLC hints at.


A philosophy we have disproven.  See Geth/Quarian conflict.  I think this should give us liscence to discount everything he says and blow him the hell up. 

You certainly won by ending the cycle, but it's not a satisfying "standing atop a pile of Reaper corpses" kind of victory. It's more of an "I could achieve what you didn't manage to do in billions of years of your horrible cycles" kind of intellectual victory, and this is certainly a valid conclusion (to my mind), but I see how other people might have preferred a more tangible "slaying the villain" type of victory. Leviathan only adds to this by stating that it's only a war for us, but just a harvest for the Reapers, basically meaning that they are not even playing the game we are trying to win.


You won by playing ball with the villain.  I didn't feel particularly heroic about it did you?

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The crucible was supposed to resolve the primary conflict (somehow) but we do not know how, or if, it would work. Shepard, the protagonist, reaches the citadel and it, in fact, does not work. The protagonist, bruised and bloodied (practically dying), collapses before being able to activate the crucible.

Coincidentally, the spot that the protagonist collapses on is an elevator that is activated (somehow) and lifts the protagonist into a hitherto unseen bright white light.

The protagonist regains consciousness in a surreal setting facing a luminous, translucent figure of a child that informs the protagonist that it, in fact, is the god (creator and controller) of the antagonists (who are Demi-gods in their own right).

The child proceeds to succinctly explain the hitherto unknowable motivations of the antagonists and presents 3 options that (somehow) resolve the hitherto impossible-to-resolve conflict.

The writers included some exposition that may technically remove the strict definition of a DEM but ineffect it is clearly a DEM.

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1. Doesn't make the Catalyst unexpected. We knew that the Catalyst was needed to fire the Crucible, not knowing what the Catalyst is does not make the Catalyst unexpected, it just makes what it is unexpected. Not DEM material.

2. The Catalyst appears to have no direct power over the Citadel or the Crucible, otherwise he would've mearly stopped the events of the end from happening. He appears to be a sort of guiding force, a subconcious if you will, behind the Reapers.



1. How is he expected?  I guess I missed out on the point where the Reaper Overmind was expected to transport you to his lair and tell you how to use the Crucible. The best part is, even though he calls himself the Catalyst he is not.  Shepherd, as the agent of change, is the Catalyst. If the one scentence on Thessia made you expect the intervention of the Reaper Overmind at the end, congratulations.    

2. The Reaper Overmind's power is a mute point as it is not fleshed how much,if any, control he has over the Citadel.    
Just out of curiosity, what is your definition of Deux Ex Machina?

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SackofCat wrote...

The crucible was supposed to resolve the primary conflict (somehow) but we do not know how, or if, it would work. Shepard, the protagonist, reaches the citadel and it, in fact, does not work. The protagonist, bruised and bloodied (practically dying), collapses before being able to activate the crucible.

Coincidentally, the spot that the protagonist collapses on is an elevator that is activated (somehow) and lifts the protagonist into a hitherto unseen bright white light.

The protagonist regains consciousness in a surreal setting facing a luminous, translucent figure of a child that informs the protagonist that it, in fact, is the god (creator and controller) of the antagonists (who are Demi-gods in their own right).

The child proceeds to succinctly explain the hitherto unknowable motivations of the antagonists and presents 3 options that (somehow) resolve the hitherto impossible-to-resolve conflict.

The writers included some exposition that may technically remove the strict definition of a DEM but ineffect it is clearly a DEM.


And once again, you are missing the point.

Due to the protagonist's ACTIONS, this is allowed to happen. It doesn't come out of the blue and it isn't coincidence.

The very fact that he is helping Shepard due to her actions makes this, not a DEM. The protagonist acted on it, and the "god machine" needs the protagonist....this subverts the very thing you are criticize it being.

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TheCrazyHobo wrote...

1. How is he expected?  I guess I missed out on the point where the Reaper Overmind was expected to transport you to his lair and tell you how to use the Crucible. The best part is, even though he calls himself the Catalyst he is not.  Shepherd, as the agent of change, is the Catalyst. If the one scentence on Thessia made you expect the intervention of the Reaper Overmind at the end, congratulations.    

2. The Reaper Overmind's power is a mute point as it is not fleshed how much,if any, control he has over the Citadel.    
Just out of curiosity, what is your definition of Deux Ex Machina?


1. The Crucible takes you too its activation point, which is why the elevator raises after the Crucible docks and you stand at the control panel. Also he is the Catalyst, hence the capitalisation of that word, it is his name. Shepard is a catalyst, but he is not the Catalyst.

2. Seemingly none.

My definition of a DEM? The actual definition: a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem is suddenly and abruptly solved with the contrived and unexpected intervention of some new event, character, ability, or object.

The Catalyst doesn't solve anything, he mearly shows Shepard how to solve the situation, nor is the Catalyst unexpected, it's the driving force behind most of the plot.

Also for future refence could we please refer to the Catalyst as "the Catalyst" and not "Reaper Overmind". It'll get confusing when we talk about Thessia for example if we call the Catalyst a fan name.

Modifié par Our_Last_Scene, 03 septembre 2012 - 12:27 .


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The Reaper God transports the protagonist, using a magical elevator after the protagonist has lost consciounesss, after failing to activate the Crucible.

The Reaper God then tells tell the proganonist to wake the hell up, I'll explain the solutions to your woes (woes propgated by the Reaper God, as logic dictates it can call off his forces at any time).

The Reaper God then shows you 3 ways to kill yourself in order to resolve the central conflict of the trilogy.

How is this not a Deus Ex Machina again?

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fr33stylez wrote...

The Reaper God transports the protagonist, using a magical elevator after the protagonist has lost consciounesss, after failing to activate the Crucible.

The Reaper God then tells tell the proganonist to wake the hell up, I'll explain the solutions to your woes (woes propgated by the Reaper God, as logic dictates it can call off his forces at any time).

The Reaper God then shows you 3 ways to kill yourself in order to resolve the central conflict of the trilogy.

How is this not a Deus Ex Machina again?


"Magical elevator"? Clearly the room with the AI was meant to be accessed by people, and the AI was created to explain what is known about the Reapers and their purpose (something we've known before this game).

You're giving a false dichotomy by explaining something in the worst way possible that fits the mold of your interpretation. I don't believe this game is a DEM, nothing comes out of nowhere without any sort of literary relevance. Everything in ME3 adds up to the ending confrontation.

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Legendary Chop Chop wrote...

fr33stylez wrote...

The Reaper God transports the protagonist, using a magical elevator after the protagonist has lost consciounesss, after failing to activate the Crucible.

The Reaper God then tells tell the proganonist to wake the hell up, I'll explain the solutions to your woes (woes propgated by the Reaper God, as logic dictates it can call off his forces at any time).

The Reaper God then shows you 3 ways to kill yourself in order to resolve the central conflict of the trilogy.

How is this not a Deus Ex Machina again?


"Magical elevator"? Clearly the room with the AI was meant to be accessed by people, and the AI was created to explain what is known about the Reapers and their purpose (something we've known before this game).

You're giving a false dichotomy by explaining something in the worst way possible that fits the mold of your interpretation. I don't believe this game is a DEM, nothing comes out of nowhere without any sort of literary relevance. Everything in ME3 adds up to the ending confrontation.


Oh Really? What activated the elevator? Shepard's consciousness bloody body hitting the ground?

Oh was it the mashing of buttons on the panel? Maybe there was a 15 second lag in activating the elevator?

Are you really saying that it wasn't the Catalyst that intiated the contact between it and Shepard? Until this contact, there was no way of activating the Crucible. Had Shepard opened the arms of the Citadel, having the crucible dock, which THEN caused the Star Child AI to appear, it would'nt have been a DEM. However, docking the Crucible didn't work. Shepard was mashing buttons. Out of Ideas. Fell conscious.

Then Poof! He's ascended into the God's Liar.

This a DEM, anmy way you cut it.

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Mashing buttons might have activated the elevator, there's no reason to expect an immediate ascension. When you call an elevator in the real world, it doesn't appear in an instant. I've seen scenes like that in almost everything I've watched. It's for dramatic effect, that's it.

Really though, that part didn't phase me at all, nor did it come as a catalyst (no pun intended) to the so-called idea that ME3 is a DEM.

The other stuff you explained to me is not at all a DEM.

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Oh for crying out loud... Which part of the Catalyst doesn't appear as a godlike being out of a machine and hand the protagonist the tools to complete the game?

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Because it was the entire point of the game, you were searching for the catalyst and you knew it would defeat the Reapers (it does). Sure you didn't know what it was, but a DEM would be completely out of nowhere and unrelated to the plot, literally an intervention from god.

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Legendary Chop Chop wrote...

Mashing buttons might have activated the elevator, there's no reason to expect an immediate ascension. When you call an elevator in the real world, it doesn't appear in an instant. I've seen scenes like that in almost everything I've watched. It's for dramatic effect, that's it.

Really though, that part didn't phase me at all, nor did it come as a catalyst (no pun intended) to the so-called idea that ME3 is a DEM.

The other stuff you explained to me is not at all a DEM.

Huh? I've never argued the game itself is a DEM. That doesn't make sense.

I've said the introduction of the Catalyst at the end was the use of a DEM. I've explained above why this is so.

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All this lawyering to try to deny what the writers themselves would probably just admit. After all, the space child is the very definition of DeM. They probably got a chuckle out of it.