Next mistakes are from Legacy DLC. When you take Anders with you he has a sort of b***h fit at the Prison Tower Base and turns into Justice and goes all crazy... he summons fade demons Uhhh wtf? When Justice came with me to sort out Faynriels wet dreams, he got all pissy about simply talking to Torpor... so why is Justice suddenly hip and on board with summoning demons?
Same DLC content - Whence I returned to my abode and had a friendly heart to heart with my rivalled brother Carver, my male mage Hawke inquired:
"Weren't you upset that father spent so much time with Bethany and I?"
Surely "Bethany and me".
To make sure you don't make this kind of error in DA3, use this trick I usey. If you are using multiple people in a sentence then quite right, you start with others before yourself. Starting with the 2nd person, going through the 3rd person(s) and finally ending on the 1st person... but do we say "I" or "me"? Well a good way to get this right is to remove the 2nd and 3rd person(s) from the sentence first.
So "Weren't you upset that father spent so much time with I?" is incorrect.
I also noticed at some point in the game another error in grammar. I cannot be entirely sure where the line was, I have a feeling it was whilst speaking with Javaris Tintop and it is the line where your male Hawke asks who stole the Saar-Gamek. Anyway, the line is
"To who?". Now you will notice of course that the subject in this sentence is "who"... that means that grammatically the sentence should have looked like this;
"To whom?"
Anyway, what I am saying is, continuity is vital to me and it is a shame you made these mistakes and several others I have not remembered/can't be bothered to mention because you won't fix them anyway.
Anyway, back to Bioware, good luck with DA3, I will be playing it. I pray you put more effort in and give us the same freedoms as in Origins.
Also one other point... how come we ended up killing like thousands upon thousands upon thousands of bandits etc in DA2? Surely people either learnt or gangs just don't get that big? There were more members in that Invisible Sisters gang than in the whole of Kirkwall (except other gangs).
Also, I could understand the Warden not being able to stop off for a pint... what, with the Blight and all, but who drinks alone?! Every day I would go to the Hanged Man with my brother, Varric and my bit on the side Isabela for drinks and Hawke is such a selfish bastard he only orders one drink! Outrageous!
Give us some social freedom.
EDIT: Made the post more friendly and mature.
Modifié par Moroch, 20 septembre 2012 - 02:50 .




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