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[Ziegrif]

@dr_Random.
All I can really say to that is DAWWWWWW.
That was adorable!
Btw how big is Zar in that situation?
Kneehigh?

[Catastrophy]

Hump or head-height? I'd say well above waist level being a seasoned schoolkid ready for the tough sports. Not necessarily the tallest but definitely the biggest in class.

[Broganisity]

I'm late to the DAWWWWWWWWWWW! D:

Also working on a little sum'tin sum'tin.

[Ziegrif]

dr_random wrote...

Hump or head-height? I'd say well above waist level being a seasoned schoolkid ready for the tough sports. Not necessarily the tallest but definitely the biggest in class.

If were making Zar more flexible I think the hump will be underdeveloped. The head would also then be able to go a little more upwards. Well that's how I'd see it.

[drgSebi]

When I entered this thread I thought it was about a krogan having wub wub with 3 quarian hotties.

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drgSebi wrote...

When I entered this thread I thought it was about a krogan having wub wub with 3 quarian hotties.

A thing to consider, although I'm more eager for crashing through bulkheads and jamming other people's necks with headbutts.

[redhood7]

 Awesome thread. So will Zar have to take part in the rite or the pilgramige? 
Possibly both? 

[Catastrophy]

redhood7 wrote...

 Awesome thread. So will Zar have to take part in the rite or the pilgramige? 
Possibly both? 

A real hero cannot choose - he HAS to do both. The gods demand it.

[Broganisity]

redhood7 wrote...

 Awesome thread. So will Zar have to take part in the rite or the pilgramige? 
Possibly both? 

He will declare his Quarian friends (who are on Pilgrimage) his krantt and they shall proceed to rid a massive horde of pijacks from Clan Ganar's food stores.

...or something like that.

[redhood7]

Broganisity wrote...

He will declare his Quarian friends (who are on Pilgrimage) his krantt and they shall proceed to rid a massive horde of pijacks from Clan Ganar's food stores.

...or something like that.

That sounds awesome.

Modifié par redhood7, 04 novembre 2012 - 03:47 .

[Ziegrif]

Broganisity wrote...

He will declare his Quarian friends (who are on Pilgrimage) his krantt and they shall proceed to rid a massive horde of pijacks from Clan Ganar's food stores.

...or something like that.

Zar in a food store.
Seriously Zar in any place housing food seems like a major bad idea.
*Headbutts meat container*

[Broganisity]

Ziegrif wrote...

Zar in a food store.
Seriously Zar in any place housing food seems like a major bad idea.
*Headbutts meat container*

I thought of this exact same thing. Even before I clicked the link.

[Broganisity]

Man, I'm just stumped on how to introduce Vida to the story.

Whenever I try to add on to the concept I go back to Zar's gardening/farming, then suddenly this song pops into my head, and I'm left giggling too much to come up with a legitimate thought that doesn't involve Zar driving a Tractor shirtless while a bunch of women pass out nearby.

Modifié par Broganisity, 14 novembre 2012 - 06:26 .

[Catastrophy]

Broganisity wrote...

Man, I'm just stumped on how to introduce Vida to the story.

Whenever I try to add on to the concept I go back to Zar's gardening/farming, then suddenly this song pops into my head, and I'm left giggling too much to come up with a legitimate thought that doesn't involve Zar driving a Tractor shirtless while a bunch of women pass out nearby.

The first that comes to my mind when I hear "Vida" is the song "Living la Vida Loca". Then I usually need to calm myself and ease my mind by thinking about the movie "Desperado". Perhaps "Zar" is just a poor mariachi singing a song for his flowers and crops when that crazy truck driver flattens his plot. And then things really got interesting.

Just a thought.

[Ziegrif]

dr_random wrote...

Broganisity wrote...

Man, I'm just stumped on how to introduce Vida to the story.

Whenever I try to add on to the concept I go back to Zar's gardening/farming, then suddenly this song pops into my head, and I'm left giggling too much to come up with a legitimate thought that doesn't involve Zar driving a Tractor shirtless while a bunch of women pass out nearby.

The first that comes to my mind when I hear "Vida" is the song "Living la Vida Loca". Then I usually need to calm myself and ease my mind by thinking about the movie "Desperado". Perhaps "Zar" is just a poor mariachi singing a song for his flowers and crops when that crazy truck driver flattens his plot. And then things really got interesting.

Just a thought.

Vida. Life. Joy. Come to mind first from the name.
So.
We git her a good ole shoutern akcent a lean mean attitude a farmers lil grandaughter.
Tomboy all the way up to her naval in gun knowledge.
Hell a gun fetish!
Then we make her crazy! or a bit cooky...
And a drinker!
And then we have a dance party!

So I concur with Random!
We get Vida!
Put her tipsy on a tractor!
And make her mov over Zars crops by accident!

[Broganisity]

Have I mentioned that I love you people?

[geroni24]

please keep this story im just loving this!
By the way is he a biotic or not?

Modifié par geroni24, 25 novembre 2012 - 10:48 .

[Ziegrif]

geroni24 wrote...

please keep this story im just loving this!
By the way is he a biotic or not?

Doesn't seem like it.
Least I think there was a discussion about him not being one. I think.

[Catastrophy]

*Sigh!*

I've begun writing something but it turned out to be a story about a mad Quarian scientist setting out to abuse people as test subjects. I don't know - unless I find a nice twist. Must be the days getting darker - Ziegrif, how do you northern people survive the yearly great autumn depression?

[Ziegrif]

dr_random wrote...

*Sigh!*

I've begun writing something but it turned out to be a story about a mad Quarian scientist setting out to abuse people as test subjects. I don't know - unless I find a nice twist. Must be the days getting darker - Ziegrif, how do you northern people survive the yearly great autumn depression?

By having a great fighting tournament in the honor of Odin and his son Thor.
Mainly consisting on monkey knife fights.

Kidding!

Personally Vitamin D and C supplements, sleep and exercise. Oh and the couples that am friends with recommend copious amounts of sex. Endorphins and sex and stuff.
Also Science story. Make the scientist a support chaarcter or minor villain and post the thing!

Modifié par Ziegrif, 26 novembre 2012 - 11:27 .

[Broganisity]

Ziegrif wrote...



By having a great fighting tournament in the honor of Odin and his son Thor.
Mainly consisting on monkey knife fights.

Kidding! TRUFAX!

Also Science story. Make the scientist a support chaarcter or minor villain and post the thing!

What's this? Mad Quarian scientist who plans to create Krogan Supersoldiers!?

CAPTAIN TUCHANKA IS BORN!

Though I'm not too sure what to write myself, I always get like this around the fall/winter seasons. Just want to sit down and sleep until spring. Still, that could be the reason Zar leaves the flotilla with Vida on her Pilgrimage: he assaults this mad scientist for attempting to do something with a few Quarians (including Ol' Adao?), and thus leaves the fleet before he gets prosecuted...or maybe he wouldn't have even if he stayed because they realize he was doing the right thing, who knows?

Maybe later they see the same scientist now working with the Blood Pack to stage a raid on the flotilla or something, I dunno.

Modifié par Broganisity, 27 novembre 2012 - 09:06 .

[Ziegrif]

Welp.
I guess the story kinda died.
Too bad really.

[Catastrophy]

All right, all right, I'm writing it. I can't see you disappointed, Ziegrif.
Prepare for some teenage bulkhead smashing headbutt frenzy.

[Catastrophy]

It was about time - an action had to be taken and Zar indeed had taken not one but a couple. Right now, he sat squeezed tight in one of the escape capsules that were originally meant for emergency evacuations. It had rudimentary controls but it would be sufficient for the intended short "transit".

A couple of weeks ago the number of disappearing teenagers aboard the shot above the dozen and people had no clue about the whereabouts of the kids. Things got really awkward for Zar when Vida, his girlie classmate disappeared two days ago. She just wasn't the type to run away but nobody wanted to listen to his orphan-kidnapping-theory.

Thing is, he couldn't tell the grown-ups that Vida was a nerdy girl. All she did was sinking into a book, a holosim or VI that dealt with "Obnox' Great Theory of Beta-Garblozoids in Resonance to Thingumite Structures" or something like that.
She was a pain in the ass when she was waving her finger at him and lecturing what he ought to do to pass the exams. And that voice! It always tingled in his ears for hours after. Zar always was tempted to grab her and, and - and do something to her. Something that really got him excited if he thought about it.

His mates were already making jokes about him and the "knack" he had for Vida. Outrageous idea! She had fair eyes, though. And why did she leave him a picture of her without a mask? It'd been a common thing among the boys - to show each other you were a true "bro" to them. Zar guessed the girls did the same among themselves and...

"Grmbl! Should focus now! I'm checking my gear: Suit? Check! Dad's omni-tool? Check! He's gonna be mad! Drinks? Hm, a days worth. My hump? Fat and filled. Thermal lance? Check! The chief is gonna kill me for this. Weapons? Yeah, got my muscles, some brain and my teeth. Well, I guess I better rely on the surprise!"

To determine what had become of Vida, Zar had done some detective work, sniffing around finally figuring out there were clues that Vida might have been brought to the QSF Banduk, a private vessel affiliated to Special Operations. He had to eat a lot of dirt and used dirty tricks to break into a couple of systems, including the abuse of some of his parents access codes. He probably was about to get skinned, but right now the whole thing was just pleasantly thrilling.

The control over the escape pod was acquired by treachery and to be frank: Zar stole it.
The thermal lance was a tool Zar deemed useful to breach something - like an airlock or so. It wasn't too sophisticated a device and dangerous as hell if used by clumsy inexperienced hands.

A signal flashed, followed by a klaxon - collision warning. Obviously he was nearing the target he had set a course for. He overrode the safety routine and made a crude correction of his trajectory, the capsule would impact in a couple of seconds.

[Ziegrif]

dr_random wrote...
Zar always was tempted to grab her and, and - and do something to her. Something that really got him excited if he thought about it.

Woooh!
Sexual Teeeeeen~siooooon.~!

And for the folks at home this is a thermal lance.
High power heat inducer cuts through anything really.