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Read this Bioware! WE NEED dragon age 3 Inquisition ORIGIN Stories!!!!


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  The human female princess: (you should be able to choose the personality of your character: mean, kind, shy, shallow etc. and this should change like if you want to go hunting or remain at the castle) As the princess of one of the most important famililies in your country your family is holding a Orleasian masquarade ball and even the empress of Orlais is invited. you dress in an elegant gown and in court that morning it was known that a small blonde girl was found nearly dead and brought back to the castle. you put on your mask and enter the ball room. and the dancing begins. you begin dancing with the son of king Alistair/queen anora and are interupted by a eoman in a blue dress wearing a black mask. all you can tell is she has short red hair (wonder who it is!) she says you must leave at once. you ask why and she replies "your life depends on it". you ignore her and continue dancing. but then there is a BANG! and for a darkspawn was hidden in the rafters and has shot the empress with a crossbow! the red haired woman takes you by the hand and you both run out of the building. you get on your horse and she reveals herself as Leliana, herion of the blight. she says ride to a mansion hidden in the mountains and tell the lord/mistress of the house that Leliana is fine, and to also say who you are. you ride to this mansion, still in your dress and persued by darkspawn. you enter the gate and it turns out the lord/mistress of the house is nonother then the hero of ferelden. 

Bard: You are hired to sing at the birthday party of a nobleman in Ferelden. when your finished you seek information by stealing his journal and ledger. your caught in the process and locked up. you escape from the dungeon through the sewers and are caught again. before you cn be executed a grey warden invokes you and you can agree, or agree and lie. if you agree you  become a grey warden, if you lie then you go to the warden HQ and then run away.

****/prostitute: you live in a small city and one night when your hired you go up to the room. when your finished the man grabs your arm and becomes extremely violent. he hits you and you dig your dagger into his eye and run. it turns out he was the arl of the city. you flee and join the fight against the darkspawn.
these are only a few of my ideas!:innocent:

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More paragraph breaks would do wonders for the readability of your post. First one seems a bit Mary Sueish. Princess, meets and is saved by both Leliana and the HoF.

Also I note they are all darkspawn/grey warden related. The leaks indicate the game really isn't about them, making implementation of any of these difficult to say the least.

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Wow. Those are really good ideas. Seriously, I'd like any of those in DA3. You should post your other ideas.

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Yeah but those are actually good ideas. more likely than not it will be the player character having their father killed in a mugging or something, with some emotional moment, only you don't really care because you only knew him for about a minute and a half.

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First: Vandicus, i did kind of rush it! i'll fix my other ideas. but also i guess it may not be about the wardens but i do hope there is something about the darkspawn. like the blight in the anderfels

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My ideas usually have darkspawn in them. i guess the blight in the anderfels may be the game after DA3 so i guess my ideas could be for both games.

Like with DAO i think Elfs should be split into three groups: mages, dalish and city elfs. but it should go into these options more.

Male Elf and female Elf dalish scout: you have been wandering the wilds in (ferelden/Orlais) and kill some animals and bring them back to camp. on the way back you see your camp in the distance being burnt and destroyed by darkspawn and a small blonde witch (flemeth) you want to help but there are to many. you watch as children, men and women are cut down and burned. when the darkspawn see you you and your hunters flee. you run to the nearest castle and beg for help. but you are turned away. you return to running and learn from some merchants that an army is building in the north to kill the darkspawn, led by a general grey warden and the champion of kirkwall.
this story wasn't very impressive but i couldn't really think of much for dalish elfs.

Male elf and female Elf mage, also human female and human male mage: you are about to be given the honour of being first enchanter, but as the empress/leader is about to bestow this honour on you, a mage in the audience turns feral and blows up the empress/leader. pandamonium takes over and the templars start killing mages. the right of anullment is brought forward and you have to fight for your life as you make your way through templars trying to kill you. you get away and join the mages fight against the templars. whoever army wins turns towards the darkspawn.

City elf male and femal: Your a servant in the castle and you happen to hear talk of treason by the knight captain and some guards. they capture you and you kill the knight captain. the king (not knowing the truth) sentences you to death for murder. a friend of yours disguised as a guard frees you and you escape to the woods. you hear that your family, who lived in the alienage, were killed by the guards. Hell bent on revenge, you go to an enemy kingdom who support the mages and you fight against the kingdom who mudered you family, before fighting the darkspawn.

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What i loved so much about DAO was the origin stories (human noble, castless dwarf etc). and thats a reason i didn't really like DA2. having an origin story is what makes the game so personal. these are a few short ideas at what some could be for DA3:

Male human: the choices for human male should be entertwined somehow. for example: prince or thief. here are some stories for those origins:
Human male prince: You are hunting with your knights when you happen upon a small girl wrapped in a cloak. she is blonde and starving and bearly alive. you take her back to your castle where you lay here on a bed in a guest room. later in the evening a ceremony is going to be held to formaly recognise you as Prince of (ferelden, orlais, or where ever you want out of the major kingdoms) you dress for the ceremony and got to the main dining hall. you are also to marry a princess of the neighbouring countrie, whether or not you want to. after the dinner you kneel and are knighted and a crown is placed on your head. just then you see the little blonde girl sitting on the kings dinner chair. she claps sarcastically as the room goes silent, all stare at her. she rises to her feet and declares "yet another leader has been recognised. but it matters not for what follows will be the destruction of you all!" she grabs a knife and stabs the nearest guard. she is knocked out and taken to the dungeons. later that night you are fast asleep when you have a dream. the little girl speaks to you. she mocks you and urges you to wake, for you shant want to miss whats next. you wake, dress and wonder to the window where you see thousands of darkspawn around the walls. the guard captain and twelve other guards come to get you to safety for someone has opened the draw bridge and the creatures are already inside the castle. you are reluctant but you leave via the dungeons. just before you descend into the berial crypts you see the little girl outside her cell. she smiles and says "yet another kingdom falls to me, flemeth, witch of the wilds" and with that she turns into a dragon and destroys half the castle.

Human male thief or female thief: you are the most famous thief in (ferelden, orlais) and you are approached by a shadowy figure who offers you the chance of a lifetime. steal the jeweled crown of the empress (or queen, depends where you are) you accept and enter the castle at night. you sneak past the guards and into the treasury. you see the crown and take it on the way out you are caught, it seems the guards where tipped off by the very person who hired you. they merely wanted you in jail. you're tortured and left in a cell. the person accross from you is either male or female. if your male she is female, and if your female he is male. you talk to this person and find out that he/she was innocent of the crime. you fall in love him him/her and vow to get them out. nut the castle is taken by darkspawn and everyone except you the other prisoner and maybe a certain prince/princess :). the darkspawn can talk and are horiible to the other prisoner using him/her as a prize. you watch as he is murdered or ash she is violated (i dont waant to actually see this but they could use screaming so you know what is happening) as the darkspawn comes to you trick it and steal its sword and escape. vowing vengeance on all darkspawn.

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Man....those are even better imho. Did you just think of those or have you been working on them for a while?

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 some of it i had planned but most of it just now:lol::lol::lol::lol:

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I'm impressed. You got mad skills bro lol. If you think of anymore feel free to share.

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Male/female dwarf noble: You and a few of your hired men are braving the deep road to find missing thaigs and reach kalsharok. one of your men cries out and you turn to see darkspawn approaching from behind. you fight them with everything you have, but their numbers are too numerous.
your men are slain and you have to run deeper into the deep roads (lol) you see no sign of life in the thaig you enter. there is no real light. just lamps and a torch you discovered earlier. you wander in deeper, feeling the shadows's eyes on your back. suddenly you see a pedestal holding some kind of locket. it whispers (like a horcrux!) and you touch it. immediately your mind is swimming in images not your own. an old woman saying farewell to her daughter, morrigan...
suddenly there is a voice of an old woman: 'you are the one... the one destined to fend away the darkness. to lead men and women to their freedom!' then the amulet shakes and bursts open. Flemeth jumps out and looks around. 'Crude place for a baby!' she says with a laugh. 'Are you the one who activated my amulet? we thank you... i am now closer to finding my stupid daughter and her old god baby. i have reason t believe they are here. you however are better then this: finding old thaigs and treasures! go to the surface and find and seek the ones they call hawke... and the hero of ferelden' and with that she disappears.

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Dude. Why hasn't Bioware used something like these? Seriously...well done again. This is sad. The more I read your origin stories the more I'm reminded that DA3 probably won't have them. It makes me sad...

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really?????????? because the demand for them is massive! maybe they will

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City Elf
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CITY ELF!

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I think they will be doing origins! just a feeling. everyone wants it. except for BORING people...

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If BW is taking an Origins approach to DA3 (and I sincerely hope that they do) I would really like to play as a human Ben-Hassrath double-agent, that is my ultimate origin. If not than at least a mod-editor to make my own Origin.

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 Sounds great. :happy: 

i just want the origins to be very different from each other:O they should fit into the setting of orlais. like; noble, merchant, servant. i just want there to be an amazing story before the amazing story.:happy::happy::happy::happy::happy::happy::happy::happy::o:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O:O :wizard:

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Ever since Shepherding Wolves I've wanted to be a Saarebas. Most likely one that's been freed, but still...loosely?...follows the Qun. Lugging around an Arvaraad as a permanent companion (as in, can't be switched out) would be tiresome after a while.

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Dalish elf, city elf, noble dwarf, casteless dwarf. human noble, poor human, apostate, qunari, tal-vashoth, magi.

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That's a good list.

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Yeah, but maybe too much. I really really really hope there are origins in DA3I, and if there are, at least two different ones where I can play as a mage.

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Whatever it is, I want it to end with me drinking the blood and saying the words.

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ORIGINS MUST HAPPEN!!!!

or i'll cry and then i'll be forced to start a thread saying "You had your chance bioware... you had your chance....

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Subscribe if you love ORIGINS!!!!!!!

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Edit: See the next page, as I moved my post there.

Modifié par The Ethereal Writer Redux, 29 septembre 2012 - 01:32 .