David Gaider wrote...
Foolsfolly wrote...
Hey, David Gaider and other BioWare writers. This year I got to hear dialogue I wrote performed by actors for the first time. I had a minor crisis of... "I suck forever and no one speaks like this but me." Specifically I told the director "Oh ****. I wrote me speaking to also me." How do you guys deal with hearing your dialogue. Does it get better? Will I ever stop cringing at it?
I tend to read my lines out loud as I'm writing them, and for important scenes we have a readthrough with the VO team where I get to hear someone else reading my lines out loud-- both of these things allow me to pick out the things that are awkward, or which people just don't say. So, yes, it should get better if you work at it. You just need to remember that you must write your dialogue as if it's going to be recorded, not just as prose on the page.
Thanks. You've convinced me. I'm going to the table reads next time, it being in another country be damned. And I'm bringing a notebook and three pens. Thanks again, sir.





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