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Interaktive Geschichte: Mass Effect 4 - Feedback und Entscheidungsthread
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#177
Posté 17 octobre 2012 - 10:18
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Öh also keien Möglichkeit die Bilder und Musikstücke da rein zu kriegen?
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Posté 17 octobre 2012 - 10:19
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Leider nein. Aber es gibt die Möglichkeit ein Titelbild hochzuladen.
P.S. Aber theoretisch kann ich einfach nur den Titel samt Komponist dazu schreiben und sagen man findet die auf youtube.
P.S. Aber theoretisch kann ich einfach nur den Titel samt Komponist dazu schreiben und sagen man findet die auf youtube.
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#179
Posté 17 octobre 2012 - 10:28
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Das kannst du, ist zwar etwas umständlicher und die Leute können nicht flüssig lesen, weil sie kurz umschwenken müssen, aber denke das ist gut so.
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 04:00
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Not_Zero wrote...
Starting Summary:
35 years have passed since the War against the Reaper. 35 years of chaos, reconstruction and hope. 35 years since the journey of Commander Shepard has ended. And now a new journey begins. Accompany the young Asari Kysaek on her journey through a galaxy which is similar to our own, but still as different as night from the day.
Ich wollte mal nachfragen ob ihr mit dem einverstanden seid. Man muss nämlich auf FF bei der Veröffentlichung auch eine Kurzzusammenfassung liefern, damit jeder sich irgendwie denken kann, worum es in der Geschichte geht, bevor er den Link anklickt.
#182
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 06:01
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Scheint nicht so und ich denke die Zusammefassung ist okay.
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:26
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Hab einen weiteren Teil übersetzt:
Voice: “Switch it!”
Another voice: “Well, all right.”
At the words a loud click is heard and the picture of the N7 soldiers vanishes. It changes the whole time in a rapid way and one can recognize only hardly what is happening on the following pictures.
Voice: “Have we not the rule: No Zapping.”
Another Voice: “Yes, but we have also the rule, that we rotate who decides the channel and today it is my turn.”
One Asari is sitting on a chair, which spins around with a movement of her, and is leaning back slowly.
Kysaek: “I would say it is obvious who has the today’s privileges.”
In the same gesture a man turns around in his chair to the Asari. It is a human, a little plumper and chubby, and he is raising his lightly haired hands.
Jim: “I think we need to add a third rule, which decides if zapping is allowed, no matter who has the today’s privileges.”
Kysaek: “666 channels…and there is nothing interesting. That leads inevitably to zapping. Besides this is something, which you humans have introduced to the Galaxy anyway.”
Jim: “You are talking about real Entertainment? Then you are right.”
Kysaek: “Zapping is Entertainment?”
Jim: “No…I bet this existed in the Galaxy even before us, considering your boring Shows….I mean, seriously…>>The Hour with the Salarian<<, good for the mind, but during it you feel dumper, than being good taught.”
Kysaek: “Indeed…and these shows from Earth like >>Big Earth<<…we watch a dozen idiots, how they live in a house full with cameras for a full year…there are Pyjaks even higher quality.”
Jim is grabbing a cup in which a black liquid is found, probably coffee, and is drinking a big gulp before he is slurping a bit. “Okay, okay…turn it off, soon the next Security Update must come.”
Kysaek: “You are right…” And with one click of the controls the picture the small screen vanishes and Jim turns around to the bigger desk, which is coined with various buttons and switches and over it several smaller screens and one big one. The Asari emulates his deeds then and turn around to the electronic construction.
Kysaek: “How is the status of our Security-Chief-1?”
Jim, a little murmuring: “Mhrrr let’s see…where is our good SC…” he grins lightly “…if we would miss him…”
The man activates an Omni-tool over the desk and it seems to go through few cameras, which show different places of the building, in which they are sitting. On the big screen one can see the whole layout of the building, which is roundish and seemingly divided into several rings. The tool is scanning though the areas of the outer Ring until Jim is laughing.
Jim: “There we have him…he is coming closer to Station 2 with his Security Patrol…10 Credits that he trashes them?”
Kysaek: “Come on…that is his ritual, no matter when and which Station…every half hour he trashes somebody. The bet no one wins, because we both would say trashing.”
Jim, lightly resigning: “Okay, okay…but today it was especially bad or not?”
Kysaek in approving and serious voice: “Yes…probably because he was not promoted to the SC-2…”
The Asari takes also a cup, drinks a gulp of the coffee, while Jim access to the bigger Screen via Omni-tool, where the layout is shown more precisely.
The building appears. It is round and there are seemingly five rings. On the Outer Ring is written down Level 1 and there are moving around 3 white points, which would form a triangular by connecting them, whereby one point is always blinking, and there is also the Station, where the two are sitting. The next ring is without a Station, but here is written down Level 1 as well.
Kysaek: “Do you believe that he strays to the second Ring of Level 2 once and then will be shot down by the Mechs….for the Level 1 Mechs he has the authorization.”
Jim: “Ah…I am working for 3 years here…an unfulfilled dream…”
Again the human drinks a gulp coffee, while still observing the layout. The next area is identical to the Outer Level 1 Ring, but there is written Level 2, as well like the second ring of Level 2 is identical to the second ring of Level 1. All 4 rings are a little wider corridors like it seems and in the middle is a seemingly a bigger room, which is looking like the Core and on it is written down Level 3.
Kysaek: “Tell me…what is Level 3 actually?”
Jim, a little annoyed: “You don’t want to start a >>What can be in Level 3?<<-Speculation now?”
Kysaek: “You are working here for 3 years…Me a little shorter. You need to know, what you are guarding there.”
Jim, smacking, because he had bitten into a piece of bread: “I kfow onfly one tfing….I get my money evefy monfay. Mofe I don’t fant to kfow.”
Kysaek: “First chewing…then talking….”
Jim, swallowing his food: “You have understood me pretty well.”
Kysaek: “Very well then….” She lifts her eyes before the Intercom is heard.
Voice: “Hey, you two…SC-1 has left us right now…like always with the best mood. He is coming to you now.”
Jim: “Were you nice to him at least?”
Voice: “Of course. We have given him many kisses…these he will give you now.”
Kysaek: “Sounds exciting…” She looks at the clock. “Thought we would be lucky today…the second night shift starts in 10 minutes…I go to make a tour and then directly to the locker room. I want to go to the Eternity then and that I want to do without being pissed off.”, she adds murmuring. With a small grin she jumps on her feet.
Jim, surprised: “The Eternity? A date?”
Kysaek: “No, but who knows what will happen…besides you know, we Asari are very popular.”
Jim, a bit slow: “Mhhh oh wellllll, since the Salika appeared…the female Salikans are rivaling the Asari quite pretty…I mean they are humanoid Insects and the guys are butt ugly with their huge eyes and this horn plates…but the women are rather similar to the Asari.”
Kysaek, a little sullen: “With their smooth, gleaming skin, these black eyes and the Dreadlock hair, which is similar to our hair cartilage…but is not so stiff by light years.” She is buzzing.
Jim: “You are saying it…but before you go, tomorrow I want to hear the story what has led you to the army in the first place and then to the position here!”
The Asari nods, which is why Jim adds: “Good…then hurry up, otherwise the SC gets you at the door, before you get out. We see us tomorrow evening.”
The Asari nods again, checks her Predator Gun at its retainer, as well like the flashlight, which retainer is positioned at her shoulder and then turns around to march through the door, opening it with the control in the middle of it. With a hiss the door opens to all sides, like everyone knows is typical for doors of today. The Asari takes the first steps forward, lifting her head, after the flashlight is jammed tight at its retainer and running right into the Security-Chief-1, who is buzzing more than displeased.
SC-1 Phonor, with an annoyed voice: “Where to Bluish?” [das hier meine ich]
The Human gasps once again so one could guess that he is 40 or 50 years old and classify him in this way as the typical old soldier. The face is stamped with scars, furrows and bruises, the glance is stiff and the hair style short with grey hairs. This picture is rounded out only more by the two masked soldiers behind him, both with Assault Rifles at the ready and the Logo of the PGI on their shoulders.
Kysaek, relatively fast standing at attention: “SC-1! I wanted to make a tour right now, before the first night shift is over!”
Phonor, slowly speaking: “For what a tour? We are here for tours…you can place your small blue ass right beside the fatso and with him keep in view the cameras.”
Kysaek, raising her eyebrow a little: “Excuse me Sir, but also tours are written down in our employment agreements. If you dislike this…you should address the Personal Department…don’t you need to….Sir?”, in a little arrogant undertone.
One of the soldiers behind the SC, who is recognized easily as a Turian despite wearing a helmet, retorts: “Sir, maybe we should let our blue honey here do something useful. She seems to be underemployed…the janitor needs probably help by cleaning.”
Phonor, shortly laughing: “Yeah indeed, that would be something…but this would be an insult to the good man.”
Kysaek: “Sir, you have not answered my question….do you let me do my job now or should I use my time further for talking until my shift is over?”
Growling Phonor responds: “Out of my sight. Move your ass!”
Bei der Übersetzung mit Bläuling habe ich jetzt Bluish verwendet, da mein Übersetzungsprogramm mir nur Namen von Schmetterlingen geliefert hat. Fällt jemanden was besseres ein?
Voice: “Switch it!”
Another voice: “Well, all right.”
At the words a loud click is heard and the picture of the N7 soldiers vanishes. It changes the whole time in a rapid way and one can recognize only hardly what is happening on the following pictures.
Voice: “Have we not the rule: No Zapping.”
Another Voice: “Yes, but we have also the rule, that we rotate who decides the channel and today it is my turn.”
One Asari is sitting on a chair, which spins around with a movement of her, and is leaning back slowly.
Kysaek: “I would say it is obvious who has the today’s privileges.”
In the same gesture a man turns around in his chair to the Asari. It is a human, a little plumper and chubby, and he is raising his lightly haired hands.
Jim: “I think we need to add a third rule, which decides if zapping is allowed, no matter who has the today’s privileges.”
Kysaek: “666 channels…and there is nothing interesting. That leads inevitably to zapping. Besides this is something, which you humans have introduced to the Galaxy anyway.”
Jim: “You are talking about real Entertainment? Then you are right.”
Kysaek: “Zapping is Entertainment?”
Jim: “No…I bet this existed in the Galaxy even before us, considering your boring Shows….I mean, seriously…>>The Hour with the Salarian<<, good for the mind, but during it you feel dumper, than being good taught.”
Kysaek: “Indeed…and these shows from Earth like >>Big Earth<<…we watch a dozen idiots, how they live in a house full with cameras for a full year…there are Pyjaks even higher quality.”
Jim is grabbing a cup in which a black liquid is found, probably coffee, and is drinking a big gulp before he is slurping a bit. “Okay, okay…turn it off, soon the next Security Update must come.”
Kysaek: “You are right…” And with one click of the controls the picture the small screen vanishes and Jim turns around to the bigger desk, which is coined with various buttons and switches and over it several smaller screens and one big one. The Asari emulates his deeds then and turn around to the electronic construction.
Kysaek: “How is the status of our Security-Chief-1?”
Jim, a little murmuring: “Mhrrr let’s see…where is our good SC…” he grins lightly “…if we would miss him…”
The man activates an Omni-tool over the desk and it seems to go through few cameras, which show different places of the building, in which they are sitting. On the big screen one can see the whole layout of the building, which is roundish and seemingly divided into several rings. The tool is scanning though the areas of the outer Ring until Jim is laughing.
Jim: “There we have him…he is coming closer to Station 2 with his Security Patrol…10 Credits that he trashes them?”
Kysaek: “Come on…that is his ritual, no matter when and which Station…every half hour he trashes somebody. The bet no one wins, because we both would say trashing.”
Jim, lightly resigning: “Okay, okay…but today it was especially bad or not?”
Kysaek in approving and serious voice: “Yes…probably because he was not promoted to the SC-2…”
The Asari takes also a cup, drinks a gulp of the coffee, while Jim access to the bigger Screen via Omni-tool, where the layout is shown more precisely.
The building appears. It is round and there are seemingly five rings. On the Outer Ring is written down Level 1 and there are moving around 3 white points, which would form a triangular by connecting them, whereby one point is always blinking, and there is also the Station, where the two are sitting. The next ring is without a Station, but here is written down Level 1 as well.
Kysaek: “Do you believe that he strays to the second Ring of Level 2 once and then will be shot down by the Mechs….for the Level 1 Mechs he has the authorization.”
Jim: “Ah…I am working for 3 years here…an unfulfilled dream…”
Again the human drinks a gulp coffee, while still observing the layout. The next area is identical to the Outer Level 1 Ring, but there is written Level 2, as well like the second ring of Level 2 is identical to the second ring of Level 1. All 4 rings are a little wider corridors like it seems and in the middle is a seemingly a bigger room, which is looking like the Core and on it is written down Level 3.
Kysaek: “Tell me…what is Level 3 actually?”
Jim, a little annoyed: “You don’t want to start a >>What can be in Level 3?<<-Speculation now?”
Kysaek: “You are working here for 3 years…Me a little shorter. You need to know, what you are guarding there.”
Jim, smacking, because he had bitten into a piece of bread: “I kfow onfly one tfing….I get my money evefy monfay. Mofe I don’t fant to kfow.”
Kysaek: “First chewing…then talking….”
Jim, swallowing his food: “You have understood me pretty well.”
Kysaek: “Very well then….” She lifts her eyes before the Intercom is heard.
Voice: “Hey, you two…SC-1 has left us right now…like always with the best mood. He is coming to you now.”
Jim: “Were you nice to him at least?”
Voice: “Of course. We have given him many kisses…these he will give you now.”
Kysaek: “Sounds exciting…” She looks at the clock. “Thought we would be lucky today…the second night shift starts in 10 minutes…I go to make a tour and then directly to the locker room. I want to go to the Eternity then and that I want to do without being pissed off.”, she adds murmuring. With a small grin she jumps on her feet.
Jim, surprised: “The Eternity? A date?”
Kysaek: “No, but who knows what will happen…besides you know, we Asari are very popular.”
Jim, a bit slow: “Mhhh oh wellllll, since the Salika appeared…the female Salikans are rivaling the Asari quite pretty…I mean they are humanoid Insects and the guys are butt ugly with their huge eyes and this horn plates…but the women are rather similar to the Asari.”
Kysaek, a little sullen: “With their smooth, gleaming skin, these black eyes and the Dreadlock hair, which is similar to our hair cartilage…but is not so stiff by light years.” She is buzzing.
Jim: “You are saying it…but before you go, tomorrow I want to hear the story what has led you to the army in the first place and then to the position here!”
The Asari nods, which is why Jim adds: “Good…then hurry up, otherwise the SC gets you at the door, before you get out. We see us tomorrow evening.”
The Asari nods again, checks her Predator Gun at its retainer, as well like the flashlight, which retainer is positioned at her shoulder and then turns around to march through the door, opening it with the control in the middle of it. With a hiss the door opens to all sides, like everyone knows is typical for doors of today. The Asari takes the first steps forward, lifting her head, after the flashlight is jammed tight at its retainer and running right into the Security-Chief-1, who is buzzing more than displeased.
SC-1 Phonor, with an annoyed voice: “Where to Bluish?” [das hier meine ich]
The Human gasps once again so one could guess that he is 40 or 50 years old and classify him in this way as the typical old soldier. The face is stamped with scars, furrows and bruises, the glance is stiff and the hair style short with grey hairs. This picture is rounded out only more by the two masked soldiers behind him, both with Assault Rifles at the ready and the Logo of the PGI on their shoulders.
Kysaek, relatively fast standing at attention: “SC-1! I wanted to make a tour right now, before the first night shift is over!”
Phonor, slowly speaking: “For what a tour? We are here for tours…you can place your small blue ass right beside the fatso and with him keep in view the cameras.”
Kysaek, raising her eyebrow a little: “Excuse me Sir, but also tours are written down in our employment agreements. If you dislike this…you should address the Personal Department…don’t you need to….Sir?”, in a little arrogant undertone.
One of the soldiers behind the SC, who is recognized easily as a Turian despite wearing a helmet, retorts: “Sir, maybe we should let our blue honey here do something useful. She seems to be underemployed…the janitor needs probably help by cleaning.”
Phonor, shortly laughing: “Yeah indeed, that would be something…but this would be an insult to the good man.”
Kysaek: “Sir, you have not answered my question….do you let me do my job now or should I use my time further for talking until my shift is over?”
Growling Phonor responds: “Out of my sight. Move your ass!”
Bei der Übersetzung mit Bläuling habe ich jetzt Bluish verwendet, da mein Übersetzungsprogramm mir nur Namen von Schmetterlingen geliefert hat. Fällt jemanden was besseres ein?
Modifié par Not_Zero, 18 octobre 2012 - 07:31 .
#184
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:28
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Ich glaube Übersetzungsmässig bist du hier der Beste^^ keine Einwände.
Aber sag mal, diese Seite wo du das postest, istd as sowie wie Deviantart, nur eben mit Geschichten?
Aber sag mal, diese Seite wo du das postest, istd as sowie wie Deviantart, nur eben mit Geschichten?
#185
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:32
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ähnlich...ja kann man sagen.
was mich jetzt wurmt ist das bluish bläulich heißt
was mich jetzt wurmt ist das bluish bläulich heißt
Modifié par Not_Zero, 18 octobre 2012 - 07:33 .
#186
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:38
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^^ Ah ich brauche Hilfe für den lettzen Textpart...wie heißt der Sound aus ME2, wenn man in dem Reaper ist, um die FFS zu holen?
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:51
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 07:54
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hier ist eine Tracklist der CD 2 dabei
Hier von CD 1
Hier von CD 1
Modifié par Not_Zero, 18 octobre 2012 - 07:55 .
#189
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 08:32
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Also bei den tracks wars nicht dabei:/
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 08:33
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ich kann mich persönlich auch nicht erinnern, dass es eine besondere Musik hatte
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 08:40
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Na die Musik im reaper, wenn du die ganzen Leichen findest und eben permanent. Solange du nicht im Kampf bist, das hat so ein wenig was von "unheimlich"
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 08:40
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Meinst du das hier? www.youtube.com/watch
so bei 2:30 denk ich
so bei 2:30 denk ich
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#193
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 08:49
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Es stimmt fast, das ist ja die Musik wenn Feinde auftauchen...ich will die ohne Feinde*g*
Ach verdammt, im Happy End Thread bei den ganzen Bildern, als ich meine Fanende schrieb, hatte irgendwo jemand ne dicke Liste mit extrahierten Sounds reingestellt...glaube so um die Seiten 90-130 wars, gerade nur so unwillig das zu Suchen^^
Ach verdammt, im Happy End Thread bei den ganzen Bildern, als ich meine Fanende schrieb, hatte irgendwo jemand ne dicke Liste mit extrahierten Sounds reingestellt...glaube so um die Seiten 90-130 wars, gerade nur so unwillig das zu Suchen^^
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 09:03
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Mhm hab gerade auf youtube auch so n paar unrealeased soundtracks durchsucht aber nix gefunden
Geht alternativ nicht der soundtrack *collectors base*?
Geht alternativ nicht der soundtrack *collectors base*?
#195
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 09:08
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Ne hab ich alles schon durchgehört:/ Ich brauch einfach so einen "unheimlich" Sound..oder zumindest "schleichen"....natürlich von ME:)
#196
Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 09:15
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Fast fertig, vll steht der neue Teil vor Mitternacht drinne....nur dann ohne diesen Sound:(
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Posté 18 octobre 2012 - 09:27
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Lass dir Zeit....muss nämlich jetzt schlafen gehen ;P
#198
Posté 19 octobre 2012 - 02:20
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So nächster Teil ist da....ich muss schauen das ich nächstes Mal anderst vorgehe mit dem Text, wenn ich nach beenden des Schreibens, immer wieder die gespeicherten Texte einfüge(und vorher schon big drinne hatte) ist im gespeicherten Text die Formatierung, als wäre alles noch Big, aber wieder eingefügt ist es hier im BSN weg und so muss ich es neu makieren, was mir den Text zerschießt.
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Posté 19 octobre 2012 - 07:45
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copy and paste ist in diesem Forum echt scheiße gelöst
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Posté 19 octobre 2012 - 08:10
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Ja, deswegen sieht es an manchen Stellen nun auch so komisch aus...ich hab lieber ne ganze Zeile frei gemacht, anstatt da so halb beschrieben Zeilen zu haben....aber solange die GEschichte gut ist, denke ich ist das verkraftbar:)
