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[Verly]

well, the dalish women already wear unpractical armor, so she's used to it. lol


top page, I'll show off my in game look-a-like Dwarf Veylya.  She and Zev are at the flirting stage at the moment...she finds him very cute sexy, and exotic, but is not sure she can trust him yet, but she also thinks that the others in camp might not trust her if they really knew her lbackgroud either.

Modifié par Verly, 03 juin 2010 - 06:15 .

[Sannox]

Korina1982 wrote...

Sannox wrote...

@ Korina, yes, I believe that would have been my prompt! No nice, fluffy kink for me. I wondered if anybody would fill it and was over the moon to get three very different fills. I'm so glad I posted it if it inspired you to write (why have you spent all these years not writing?). I loved your story. At the risk of looking like I'm stalking you, I'll admit that I have kept checking back just in case you posted a sequel. Yes, it was dark, which is a very good thing.

If we are talking of the same thing ... I've started trying to draw after barely doing it for many, many years. You mentioned a picture, and I'd like to have a go. I don't really know what to draw, and the emotion in your story might inspire me. You might not get a picture at all, and if you did it wouldn't be up to much (and may have no ears), but if you don't mind me trying, post a screenie. And thank you again.

Or if you're not who I think you are, ignore the above!

No, I'm definitely who you think I am!

As for why I haven't been writing, there are two main reasons.  1) I have this annoying thing where I feel like everything I write is crap even if told otherwise.  2) I've been in college, and later grad school for ten years (and still not done) and it just eats up so much of my time.  I've been so stressed lately and writing that was such a good stress reliever that I will definitely keep writing now! 

And you will get the sequel, I promise!  I seem to be discovering, however, that I while can serve up some serious Hurt, the Comfort part is proving to be much more difficult.  <_<  Seriously, I saw your prompt and the idea just came to me and wouldn't leave me alone until I wrote it.  My muse is being less forthcoming now...

My avatar picture is the character I used.  Will post a better picture when I can fire up the game later.  I would draw it myself, and even have this image in my head of what I want to see, but I can't draw anything beyond stick figures. 

Edit: Aro,  I won't say what the prompt & fill is because Sannox seems to be skirting around it.  I'll put up a link only if she (?) is okay with it.

Oh, I don't mind my prompt being shared so much.  I had a bit of worry about it after discussion here about non-con, because it was non-consensual, and something that would be very edgy even if it was consensual.  So it might need a warning.  But it might not, because it's not actually sexual, as such.  (I'm still struggling with the etiquette).   It's my crappy writing that I'm trying to keep anon, rather than the prompts (especially as I did write a non-con-ish story before the discussion.  Although I think the prompt is warning enough for it, probably).   So it's best that I stay anon.

I must admit, I'm more into hurt than comfort.  Probably just totally into hurt, if I'm honest  .  But I really wanted to read the end of your story, because of the story rather than the kink.  

I might have a go at doing a picture in a minute.   Trying to write straightforward consensual kink is proving very difficult for me, for some reason.   I can't believe it's so much harder than the dodgy stuff I wrote.  I wouldn't even attempt what you wrote - that's why I made it a prompt so that other people could write it for me.   So thank you again.

(ETA:  Might as well ... Warning - emotional/physical abuse but no sex).

Modifié par Sannox, 03 juin 2010 - 06:32 .

[Sannox]

soignee wrote...
Leske deserved a funeral! Poor bastard, I forgive him. Ah, I've probably missed something with the Rinna thing, but it seemed what I picked flowed better.

He did ,  My character was pretty upset about the whole thing.   I remember playing through and hoping to get a dialogue option that would make him swap sides, so I didn't have to kill him.

The main bit I was thinking of was the lines where he said that Rinna said he loved him and he laughed and said he didn't care - in my playthrough, thanks to EJ, I love the way those lines fit with being able to say you love him at the Gates.   The two times (I bet it's the only times in his life) that he hears 'I love you', the second time in such different circumstances, and with such a different reaction.    But that's just me.  I really liked what you added to the conversation, and Missa's reaction, and particularly that you put it at that point in the story, where it's pertinent. 

Modifié par Sannox, 03 juin 2010 - 06:33 .

[soignee]

Sannox wrote...

soignee wrote...
Leske deserved a funeral! Poor bastard, I forgive him. Ah, I've probably missed something with the Rinna thing, but it seemed what I picked flowed better.

He did ,  My character was pretty upset about the whole thing.   I remember playing through and hoping to get a dialogue option that would make him swap sides, so I didn't have to kill him.

The main bit I was thinking of was the lines where he said that Rinna said he loved him and he laughed and said he didn't care - in my playthrough, thanks to EJ, I love the way those lines fit with being able to say you love him at the Gates.   The two times (I bet it's the only times in his life) that he hears 'I love you', the second time in such different circumstances, and with such a different reaction.    But that's just me.  I really liked what you added to the conversation, and Missa's reaction, and particularly that you put it at that point in the story, where it's pertinent. 

Ah, I don't think he would mention the L word, especially as he knew Missa would be subconsciously comparing it to Leske (who was her idiot salroka and that's about it.)

I'm actually fairly chuffed with this chapter as it's a bit of an overhaul of Missa and she gets some closure, even if she's still an emotionally stunted cow.

[Ramante]

Verly wrote...

well, the dalish women already wear unpractical armor, so she's used to it. lol


top page, I'll show off my in game look-a-like Dwarf Veylya.  She and Zev are at the flirting stage at the moment...she finds him very cute sexy, and exotic, but is not sure she can trust him yet, but she also thinks that the others in camp might not trust her if they really knew her lbackgroud either.

I love the colour of this armor. o.o

The Female Dalish armor makes little sense, though it might be usable for an archer, but wearing it in the middle of battle.. unless the person has a dead wish. -.-'

[Verly]

haha, I know, but I wanted my girl to show a little more skin and they just don't make much sexy armor for dwarfs. It's an armor called Orion's armor I'm not sure where I got it from since I can't find it anywhere. It was obviously a recolor of the dalish. She's kick ummm butt enough that she can wear it and not even get a scratch.

[SurrealSadi]

Oh, I love Dalish armor. My f!Mahariel DW Rogues wore their Dalish Armor almost all the way through the game. Mostly because they killed shyte too fast for them to hit her

[LadyDamodred]

I just wanted to share an absolutely beautiful scene tmp has created.  Right now, it's just Alistair/PC, but I've suggested adding the other LIs and hopefully he will look into it.  And since I know how you all enjoy sweet, touching things, enjoy!

Alistair's Sacrifice
Ultimate Sacrifice

*hands out tissues*

Edit:  It's part of his mild romance scenes project.

Modifié par LadyDamodred, 03 juin 2010 - 09:49 .

[soignee]

*looks at rope pics ready for tomorrow on the thread*



Yep, sweet and touching. That's me.



Trollin' aside, that was well done. I've often imagined the scene to be like that in my head.

[Jayelet]

LadyDamodred wrote...

I just wanted to share an absolutely
beautiful scene tmp has created.  Right now, it's just Alistair/PC, but
I've suggested adding the other LIs and hopefully he will look into
it.  And since I know how you all enjoy sweet, touching things, enjoy!

Alistair's
Sacrifice
Ultimate
Sacrifice

*hands out tissues*

Edit:  It's part of his mild romance
scenes project.

What?


blog dedicated to Zevran

Modifié par Jayelet, 03 juin 2010 - 10:03 .

[Aroihkin]

Creature 1 wrote...

Aro: My strange new plot bunny--your fault!

I am both intrigued and concerned, considering our recent PMs.

But mostly, intrigued. I think it's obvious now I don't scare easily.

[ejoslin]

I think the scene is really sweet. I'd love to see a Zevran variant, honestly, with him saying, "I'm prepared to see this through to the end with you. Someone, after all, must take responsibility for preventing your untimely death." and then add, "Cruel to the end."

I think I would cry at that!

Edit: Or even better, instead of cruel to the end, him saying, "Fare you well, my love."  The "and good luck" would have to be cut from that, though.

Modifié par ejoslin, 03 juin 2010 - 10:06 .

[Sarah1281]

Jayelet wrote...

LadyDamodred wrote...

I just wanted to share an absolutely
beautiful scene tmp has created.  Right now, it's just Alistair/PC, but
I've suggested adding the other LIs and hopefully he will look into
it.  And since I know how you all enjoy sweet, touching things, enjoy!

Alistair's
Sacrifice
Ultimate
Sacrifice

*hands out tissues*

Edit:  It's part of his mild romance
scenes project.

What?


blog dedicated to Zevran

I clicked on the link and it took me to a place with words I do not understand.

[Jayelet]

@Sara



If the world that there are more languages. But if anyone can come to advertise to Alistair, I can make propaganda while the letter is not in English.

[Sarah1281]

Jayelet wrote...

@Sarah

If the world that there are more languages. But if anyone can come to advertise to Alistair, I can make propaganda while the letter is not in English.

I didn't say that you couldn't. I just have no idea what most of it says.

[Sannox]

Google translate is your friend! .

I have never sacrificed anyone at the archdemon. What sort of scene do you normally get, if any? Those scenes look good. Maybe they could even work without the characters being in love?

Modifié par Sannox, 03 juin 2010 - 10:15 .

[ejoslin]

Jayelet, I suggested she post it in here. So blame me I thought it was beautiful, and thought people may like to see it! I'm always posting Zevran stuff in there, including pictures.  She actually wasn't going to post it intially.

tmp7704 is amazing, though -- makes absolutely incredible mods.

Modifié par ejoslin, 03 juin 2010 - 10:16 .

[Jayelet]

Sarah1281 wrote...

Jayelet wrote...

@Sarah

If the world that there are more languages. But if anyone can come to advertise to Alistair, I can make propaganda while the letter is not in English.

I didn't say that you couldn't. I just have no idea what most of it says.

It is written in my mother language, Spanish.
They are tales of adventure with Zevran. But they are not acts for fans of Alistair, so better not be understood.

[Arundor]

Edit: Whoops, someone already posted that.

Modifié par Arundor, 03 juin 2010 - 10:21 .

[Sarah1281]

Sannox wrote...

Google translate is your friend! .

I have never sacrificed anyone at the archdemon. What sort of scene do you normally get, if any? Those scenes look good. Maybe they could even work without the characters being in love?

Normally if Loghain or Alistair is in your party they will stop you to try and talk you into letting them do it (to make up for ****ing up Ferelden or to save you for once and try to be the best King he can be depending on who it is) and Alistair, of course, gives someone he loves no choice. There isn't any special scene except that they are the ones to grab the sword and stabs it instead of you and then it switches to Teagan with the white light engulfing the roof like usual and then it goes to the coronation. If Loghain dies the Alistair will sort of make up with you (if he's King) and Anora will ask how her father died. You can bring up both Alistair and Loghain to Wynne. No one else seems to notice.

If you die you get a funeral and Alistair or Anora (depending who is on the throne but if Loghain lives then Anora will do it no matter what) will give your eulogy with your origin-coronation companion recieving the origin-specific boon.

[Jayelet]

ejoslin wrote...

Jayelet, I suggested she post it in here. So blame me I thought it was beautiful, and thought people may like to see it! I'm always posting Zevran stuff in there, including pictures.  She actually wasn't going to post it intially.

tmp7704 is amazing, though -- makes absolutely incredible mods.

So forgive me, but I do not imagine that in this post were allowed Zevran propaganda.
Well my blog post better not there, if anyone understands it may upset a "little."

[ejoslin]

Jayelet wrote...

ejoslin wrote...

Jayelet, I suggested she post it in here. So blame me I thought it was beautiful, and thought people may like to see it! I'm always posting Zevran stuff in there, including pictures.  She actually wasn't going to post it intially.

tmp7704 is amazing, though -- makes absolutely incredible mods.

So forgive me, but I do not imagine that in this post were allowed Zevran propaganda.
Well my blog post better not there, if anyone understands it may upset a "little."

*grin* Nothing wrong with linking your blog here!  I never would have started reading the fanfics I do read had people not posted them.

<3 Jayelet.  I just wanted you to be mad at the right person (me, because, yes, I'm an idiot at times).

Modifié par ejoslin, 03 juin 2010 - 10:21 .

[Sarah1281]

One of these days I will write a Zevran one-shot so people here will actually read it...

[Sannox]

Thanks, Sarah! I had seen video of the sacrifices but not what came after. So that is a completely new scene? It's a great addition then.

What a shame that nobody but Wynne will talk about Loghain and Alistair if they do the sacrifice!

[Jayelet]

ejoslin wrote...

Jayelet wrote...

ejoslin wrote...

Jayelet, I suggested she post it in here. So blame me I thought it was beautiful, and thought people may like to see it! I'm always posting Zevran stuff in there, including pictures.  She actually wasn't going to post it intially.

tmp7704 is amazing, though -- makes absolutely incredible mods.

So forgive me, but I do not imagine that in this post were allowed Zevran propaganda.
Well my blog post better not there, if anyone understands it may upset a "little."

*grin* Nothing wrong with linking your blog here!  I never would have started reading the fanfics I do read had people not posted them.

<3 Jayelet.  I just wanted you to be mad at the right person (me, because, yes, I'm an idiot at times).

If you dare to google translator, you can try to read my blog, I can always help you understand a sentence.