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[TripLight]

We haven't had any TwilightHate in a while, this needs to be remedied:









Alucard FTW:wub:



*is done*

[SurrealSadi]

soignee wrote...

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cannot sleep again
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Oh dear... Do what I do. Do something that forces your mind to constantly think and plot things out. After a little while, it should wear your mind out enough for you to sleep. My weapon of choice? Sudoku. Especially the hard Sudoku puzzles. 15-20 minutes of those, with my MP3 player on listening to Gackt or whatever pops up randomly, and I pass out.

Edit: Trip, thank you. That helped make my night.

Modifié par SurrealSadi, 20 avril 2010 - 01:35 .

[soignee]

Herr Uhl wrote...

soignee wrote...

ffffffffffffffffffffffff-
cannot sleep again
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*welcomes to club*

i ficking tried. I went to bed early, I had my hot milk. I did my breathing exercises... I fell asleep for about 2 hours, they laid there twisting and turning and ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

so I got up. >:|

to make my whinging relevent to Zevran, people who have read my stuff... Is the Zev stuff too much? Third person told me today the Zev part of the story was taking over the plot. And it's making me paranoid now.

Modifié par soignee, 20 avril 2010 - 01:37 .

[SurrealSadi]

Not at all! The Zev-stuff HELPS the plot! Those three people have no idea what they are talking about! *wavies little flag that says, "no such thing as too much Zev"*

[frostajulie]

Agreed I am reading faithfully and reviewing and the Zev stuff seems spot on for the story. And I will quote Surreal Sadi "no such thing as too much Zev"

[soignee]

frostajulie wrote...

Agreed I am reading faithfully and reviewing and the Zev stuff seems spot on for the story. And I will quote Surreal Sadi "no such thing as too much Zev"

oh! thanks so much, I am terrible at replying to reviews :-/

I don't know, I think sex and how Missa deals with it is important to her character development, but... Feh.

[SurrealSadi]

soignee wrote...

frostajulie wrote...

Agreed I am reading faithfully and reviewing and the Zev stuff seems spot on for the story. And I will quote Surreal Sadi "no such thing as too much Zev"

oh! thanks so much, I am terrible at replying to reviews :-/

I don't know, I think sex and how Missa deals with it is important to her character development, but... Feh.

I've read the whole thing so far, Soignee, and I think you're quite right. How Missa deals with sex is very important to how her character grows.

[MorGothic]

soignee wrote...

Herr Uhl wrote...

soignee wrote...

ffffffffffffffffffffffff-
cannot sleep again
fffffffffffffffffffffffffff-

*welcomes to club*

i ficking tried. I went to bed early, I had my hot milk. I did my breathing exercises... I fell asleep for about 2 hours, they laid there twisting and turning and ffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

so I got up. >:|

to make my whinging relevent to Zevran, people who have read my stuff... Is the Zev stuff too much? Third person told me today the Zev part of the story was taking over the plot. And it's making me paranoid now.

Poor soingee, I'm still up too...

and as for too much Zev, my reaction is simply LOLWUT?! (and I'm even as  rabid big fan as others here)

Also considering I just read a fic that kills Zev in the most pointless and stupid way possible...

Looking over to her right she found Zevran crossing his arms in front
of him, face set in stone, making Lynn sigh. "For goodness...Zevran not
you too, just-""No." The assassin shook his head, glaring at the
many soldiers before them, then looked at Lynn. "My warden...if they
take you, you will die, I cannot allow that, my oath forbids it.""Since
when did you..." Lynn shook her head, irritated. Just let me go!
I hate this damn caring! As if Alistair isn't enough, now you
guys have to go on about it too! She eyed the many crossbows, now
more then ever ready to shoot. "By the Maker! Fine! I release
you of your oath! Just step down!" I'm surrounded by idiots!"No."
Zevran shook his head once more, all amusement, all charm...gone.
"It's not yours to remove."Lynn blinked, shocked. "Zevran...what
are you..." She reached out..."The warden is attacking! Kill
her!" The shout jarred her into reality. No!There was a
volley of crossbow bolts loosed at her, making her turn her head and
stare at the attackers with wide eyes, suddenly aware of what would
happen. No!Zevran was fast, an assassin to the fingertips
he was faster than the wind, except this time he didn't dodge the
missiles...he charged into them. No...A dozen wet
thuds...and the man stumbled backwards, into her...and Lynn found
herself stumbling backwards as well, suddenly weak, unable to push aside
the corpse as she had so many others as it rammed her into the wall. No...Sliding
down to a sitting position she pulled the man closer, hearing a raspy
breath escape the assassin as he looked up at her, an amused smirk
forming on his lips. "Not the best of exits...no?" He coughed, blood
flecking his lips. No..."Zevran I....why!?" It
made no difference! I will still be thrown
into a dungeon! You died for nothing! Lynn realised she was
crying. "Why...?""An oath...is an oath..." The elf's eyes
widened, not really seeing her as he begun to shake, the wounds from the
many bolts stuck in his body pumping out an obscene amount of blood
that clung to Lynn's hand as she held him close. "D-did I
e-ever...t-tell....w-why I...c-came t-to....Fe-Ferelden?" Lynn shook her
head, unable to grasp it. It's too unreal...it's not
happening. "Ah...w-well..." His suddenly blue lips smiled. "...a
s-story...f-for an-another la-lady..."Why? You can't
just...I don't...why!? "Zevran...you idiot..." She shook her
head, looked away, shuddered...an old memory of another dead elf
flickering before her eyes."So-sorry...y-you...co-couldn't...b-be...h...h..."Silence."Zevran?"
Lynn looked back down...and saw a familiar sight...yet not. She
had seen it so many times yet...not... "Zevran?" The unseeing
eyes merely stared back at her, uncaring of her tears. "Zevran!?"

Yeah....

YAY for Twilight hate....

[SurrealSadi]

Ewwww, bad kill-Zev scene is flarking bad.

[soignee]

I recognise that style of writing, I think I know what author that is

[Tellervo]

MorGothic wrote...


Also considering I just read a fic that kills Zev in the most pointless and stupid way possible...

Looking over to her right she found Zevran crossing his arms in front
of him, face set in stone, making Lynn sigh. "For goodness...Zevran not
you too, just-""No." The assassin shook his head, glaring at the
many soldiers before them, then looked at Lynn. "My warden...if they
take you, you will die, I cannot allow that, my oath forbids it.""Since
when did you..." Lynn shook her head, irritated. Just let me go!
I hate this damn caring! As if Alistair isn't enough, now you
guys have to go on about it too! She eyed the many crossbows, now
more then ever ready to shoot. "By the Maker! Fine! I release
you of your oath! Just step down!" I'm surrounded by idiots!"No."
Zevran shook his head once more, all amusement, all charm...gone.
"It's not yours to remove."Lynn blinked, shocked. "Zevran...what
are you..." She reached out..."The warden is attacking! Kill
her!" The shout jarred her into reality. No!There was a
volley of crossbow bolts loosed at her, making her turn her head and
stare at the attackers with wide eyes, suddenly aware of what would
happen. No!Zevran was fast, an assassin to the fingertips
he was faster than the wind, except this time he didn't dodge the
missiles...he charged into them. No...A dozen wet
thuds...and the man stumbled backwards, into her...and Lynn found
herself stumbling backwards as well, suddenly weak, unable to push aside
the corpse as she had so many others as it rammed her into the wall. No...Sliding
down to a sitting position she pulled the man closer, hearing a raspy
breath escape the assassin as he looked up at her, an amused smirk
forming on his lips. "Not the best of exits...no?" He coughed, blood
flecking his lips. No..."Zevran I....why!?" It
made no difference! I will still be thrown
into a dungeon! You died for nothing! Lynn realised she was
crying. "Why...?""An oath...is an oath..." The elf's eyes
widened, not really seeing her as he begun to shake, the wounds from the
many bolts stuck in his body pumping out an obscene amount of blood
that clung to Lynn's hand as she held him close. "D-did I
e-ever...t-tell....w-why I...c-came t-to....Fe-Ferelden?" Lynn shook her
head, unable to grasp it. It's too unreal...it's not
happening. "Ah...w-well..." His suddenly blue lips smiled. "...a
s-story...f-for an-another la-lady..."Why? You can't
just...I don't...why!? "Zevran...you idiot..." She shook her
head, looked away, shuddered...an old memory of another dead elf
flickering before her eyes."So-sorry...y-you...co-couldn't...b-be...h...h..."Silence."Zevran?"
Lynn looked back down...and saw a familiar sight...yet not. She
had seen it so many times yet...not... "Zevran?" The unseeing
eyes merely stared back at her, uncaring of her tears. "Zevran!?"

Yeah....

Is the whole thing written like this?  Because I think I'm in love.  That's pretty awful.

[Herr Uhl]

A lot of dots... I think... In that text...



*dislikes overuse of periods*

[ejoslin]

Heh, this is the type of fanfic I usually run into. *I* am a goddess, all men want to die for MEEEEE! And I whine about it!



Ummm, was there more to it? The wall of text kind of made my eyes cross.

[soignee]

Tellervo wrote...

MorGothic wrote...


Also considering I just read a fic that kills Zev in the most pointless and stupid way possible...

Looking over to her right she found Zevran crossing his arms in front
of him, face set in stone, making Lynn sigh. "For goodness...Zevran not
you too, just-""No." The assassin shook his head, glaring at the
many soldiers before them, then looked at Lynn. "My warden...if they
take you, you will die, I cannot allow that, my oath forbids it.""Since
when did you..." Lynn shook her head, irritated. Just let me go!
I hate this damn caring! As if Alistair isn't enough, now you
guys have to go on about it too! She eyed the many crossbows, now
more then ever ready to shoot. "By the Maker! Fine! I release
you of your oath! Just step down!" I'm surrounded by idiots!"No."
Zevran shook his head once more, all amusement, all charm...gone.
"It's not yours to remove."Lynn blinked, shocked. "Zevran...what
are you..." She reached out..."The warden is attacking! Kill
her!" The shout jarred her into reality. No!There was a
volley of crossbow bolts loosed at her, making her turn her head and
stare at the attackers with wide eyes, suddenly aware of what would
happen. No!Zevran was fast, an assassin to the fingertips
he was faster than the wind, except this time he didn't dodge the
missiles...he charged into them. No...A dozen wet
thuds...and the man stumbled backwards, into her...and Lynn found
herself stumbling backwards as well, suddenly weak, unable to push aside
the corpse as she had so many others as it rammed her into the wall. No...Sliding
down to a sitting position she pulled the man closer, hearing a raspy
breath escape the assassin as he looked up at her, an amused smirk
forming on his lips. "Not the best of exits...no?" He coughed, blood
flecking his lips. No..."Zevran I....why!?" It
made no difference! I will still be thrown
into a dungeon! You died for nothing! Lynn realised she was
crying. "Why...?""An oath...is an oath..." The elf's eyes
widened, not really seeing her as he begun to shake, the wounds from the
many bolts stuck in his body pumping out an obscene amount of blood
that clung to Lynn's hand as she held him close. "D-did I
e-ever...t-tell....w-why I...c-came t-to....Fe-Ferelden?" Lynn shook her
head, unable to grasp it. It's too unreal...it's not
happening. "Ah...w-well..." His suddenly blue lips smiled. "...a
s-story...f-for an-another la-lady..."Why? You can't
just...I don't...why!? "Zevran...you idiot..." She shook her
head, looked away, shuddered...an old memory of another dead elf
flickering before her eyes."So-sorry...y-you...co-couldn't...b-be...h...h..."Silence."Zevran?"
Lynn looked back down...and saw a familiar sight...yet not. She
had seen it so many times yet...not... "Zevran?" The unseeing
eyes merely stared back at her, uncaring of her tears. "Zevran!?"

Yeah....

Is the whole thing written like this?  Because I think I'm in love.  That's pretty awful.

Yeah. And what else aanoys me is the overuse of itallic and underline as well as bold. ****ign hate it. The occasional itallics is fine for emphasis, but anything else is bad.

It's an Alistair romance story, so...

[MorGothic]

SurrealSadi wrote...

soignee wrote...

frostajulie wrote...

Agreed I am reading faithfully and reviewing and the Zev stuff seems spot on for the story. And I will quote Surreal Sadi "no such thing as too much Zev"

oh! thanks so much, I am terrible at replying to reviews :-/

I don't know, I think sex and how Missa deals with it is important to her character development, but... Feh.

I've read the whole thing so far, Soignee, and I think you're quite right. How Missa deals with sex is very important to how her character grows.

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

[soignee]

MorGothic wrote...
]

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

no, no, that's bang on. I've just had one anon reviewer call her a "a **** lol" which kind of made my day in a macabre way and a few others who go "what's all this zevran sex? Yes but what about the plot?" And i'm there going, well, okay.

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

[Aroihkin]

*hides from the italics hate* XD I toned mine down as of 12! And when I ellipse it's because my character's throat is like raw hamburger. OH GOD THE INSECURITY.

...Fuuuuu why am I awake again. lol Three hours of sleep or however much = eyes burninating at screen = not good.

@ Kaioku -- I know everyone else already said it, but your mom is totally wasted. There's nothing "girl" about that back. *_* UNF.

[Tellervo]

soignee wrote...

MorGothic wrote...


Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

Fixed that for you.

Modifié par Tellervo, 20 avril 2010 - 02:13 .

[SurrealSadi]

soignee wrote...

MorGothic wrote...
]

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

no, no, that's bang on. I've just had one anon reviewer call her a "a **** lol" which kind of made my day in a macabre way and a few others who go "what's all this zevran sex? Yes but what about the plot?" And i'm there going, well, okay.

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

I dislike reviewers on ffnet...I had 1 story there, I think, and I got so many reviews calling my writing shyte. It was one of the FIRST stories I'd ever written, and I think I even noted that. No one cared. I refused to post any more there, and relied soley on the unbiased opinions of my friends. And yes, they can be very unbiased. They know I want a legitimate review of what I've written and won't hesitate to tell me if its utter crap.

[eucatastrophe]

@Aro:


!

[Aroihkin]

SurrealSadi wrote...

soignee wrote...

MorGothic wrote...
]

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

no, no, that's bang on. I've just had one anon reviewer call her a "a **** lol" which kind of made my day in a macabre way and a few others who go "what's all this zevran sex? Yes but what about the plot?" And i'm there going, well, okay.

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

I dislike reviewers on ffnet...I had 1 story there, I think, and I got so many reviews calling my writing shyte. It was one of the FIRST stories I'd ever written, and I think I even noted that. No one cared. I refused to post any more there, and relied soley on the unbiased opinions of my friends. And yes, they can be very unbiased. They know I want a legitimate review of what I've written and won't hesitate to tell me if its utter crap.

Holy crap, what fandom was this? The readership style varies MASSIVELY by what you're writing in, DA so far in my experience has been the most awesome with concrit.

Edit: In my experience, anyway. I haven't encountered any of the wtf Soignee has, obviously. Yet.

Modifié par Aroihkin, 20 avril 2010 - 02:21 .

[soignee]

SurrealSadi wrote...

soignee wrote...

MorGothic wrote...
]

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

no, no, that's bang on. I've just had one anon reviewer call her a "a **** lol" which kind of made my day in a macabre way and a few others who go "what's all this zevran sex? Yes but what about the plot?" And i'm there going, well, okay.

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

I dislike reviewers on ffnet...I had 1 story there, I think, and I got so many reviews calling my writing shyte. It was one of the FIRST stories I'd ever written, and I think I even noted that. No one cared. I refused to post any more there, and relied soley on the unbiased opinions of my friends. And yes, they can be very unbiased. They know I want a legitimate review of what I've written and won't hesitate to tell me if its utter crap.

Yeah. In some ways it's good because someone who read it asked me what I was going ot do about Loghain and it made me lean back and reaffirm a few things, and have another rethink about the plot, so in some ways it's good.

And I'm sorry you got the bull****, Sadi; ff.net really is a pit of shrews >:|

Modifié par soignee, 20 avril 2010 - 02:22 .

[Herr Uhl]

soignee wrote...

Ah **** it, will write what I want. 

[soignee]

Herr Uhl wrote...

soignee wrote...

Ah **** it, will write what I want. 

Genuine lol

[MorGothic]

soignee wrote...

MorGothic wrote...
]

Agreed the way I see Missa (and forgive me if I'm wrong) is that she grown up knowing bad sh*t can and does happen, and it can happen at anytime to anyone. She lives each day as it comes knowing tomorrow she could be dead. In Zev she see someone who knows this too and has lived it unlike the rest of her compaions. Sex to her is not about love, but more about need and enjoyment, she feels it's somewhere she and Zev meet on a common ground.

I suspect that either doen't make much sense or is totally wrong or both...

no, no, that's bang on. I've just had one anon reviewer call her a "a **** lol" which kind of made my day in a macabre way and a few others who go "what's all this zevran sex? Yes but what about the plot?" And i'm there going, well, okay.

Ah **** it, will write what I want.

I can write myself and what I wrote abut Missa seems obvious to me, because she is how I would write a Brosca, but you have to remember there are alot of idiots out there remember the "Zev is rapist" thread? Or how some people think Morrigan is nothing more then cold hearted b*tch? Or that ridiculous Alister gush thread? Idiots the lot of them...

I mean some people will like that awful thing I posted above, despite the fact it so far OOC for Zev it more or less AU...<_< (sorry about the formatting the story is on ff.net "from dirt, chapter 56" but you know what this forum is like...)