Mr.House wrote...
*snippity snip snip*...
Also there is one shot where you can see Anderson
Maybe for another version where Anderson lives
"...."
Yeah, not likely
I really think the video's getting much better (maybe cut the animation for the dude clearing up the ruble just a little shorter) since the current one still shows he's picking up some object instead of just clearing a rubble to get someone out of that debris. Just after he smiles, cut to black and we'll hear an audio: "We found the Commander!" (or something like that. But what ever it is, it's better to keep the dialogue short) The reason why I suggest to cut in black for a couple of seconds it's because I think it'll be somewhat jarring if the character said something but his lips isn't moving, imho.
And maybe make the video sequence a bit shorter? Just to fit in better with the Citadel's surrounding / atmosphere and the overall MEHEM pacing.
Just my 0.02 credits here





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