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[TanithAeyrs]

Well, I finally finished the first installment.  My thanks to all of you who have submitted your stories, you gave me the courage to take the leap.  Please let me know what you think (good, bad or otherwise). 

This is the story of Aithne, a Dalish elf rogue who gave up Alistair for the good of Ferelden.  With Alistair married to a human she is increasingly discontent as Chancellor.  Her good friend Zevran finally pushes her to try to rebuild her life without the human king.  Aithne and Zevran end up leaving Denerim together on a quest to find Morrigan and dicover what has happend with the child.

Adventure, Romance, Dalish lore and lots of Zevran.

A Grey Warden's Honor 

Chapters 1-19 are now up, hope you enjoy them.

Links to some short stories about Zevran and Aithne:

Precious Metals : What do the gold and silver bars mean to Zevran?

Memories : A gift of leather boots reminds Zevran of his past.

Adventurers Again: A bit of epilogue for Aithne and Zev's story.  Contains spoilers for  "A Grey Warden's Honor"

Modifié par TanithAeyrs, 20 février 2011 - 05:17 .

[Mythria]

It's very good! Keep going!

[TanithAeyrs]

Thanks for the vote of confidence Mythria. I am hoping to finish chapter 2 today (my 3 year old is sick so I am not working today).

[tevikolady]

I like the portrayal of Zevran, how he is always persistant, and ever the gentleman.

[Kanissa]

I was looking for some good fanfics to read--thank you so much for sharing! I'll be watching for more chapters.

[TanithAeyrs]

Thank you all so much for the kind comments. It inspires me as a writer to know that people enjoy what I am writing. If you have any constructive criticism that is welcome too. I am currently working on chapter 3, hope to have it out soon.

Tevikolady, I am glad you like the direction I have taken with Zev. I wanted show how much of an effect learning to care has had on him. He still has his ungentlemanly moments as you will see in future chapters, but overall he has matured alot.

[TanithAeyrs]

It takes me a while to get new chapters up but I just put chapter 5 up last night. I will try to have the next few up a little more quickly.

[Sisimka]

Just caught up on your story and I like it a lot! I'm looking forward to more.

[TanithAeyrs]

Thanks Sisimka. I just put chapter 6 up yesterday and sent chapter 7 to my beta. I was off work last weekend so I got a lot of writing done.

[peacemaker]

I read the first chapter and i'll be sure to read the others as soon as possible, they are good!

Modifié par peacemaker, 09 mars 2010 - 09:03 .

[TanithAeyrs]

Thanks peacemaker, I'm glad you liked it. I think I may have overdone the angst a little in the first couple of chapters but the plot gets rolling after that.

[Tarante11a]

Quick note to say how much I'm enjoying the relationship growing between these two. It's so very sweet. And now the plot thickens!

Just to point out to other readers that Tanith has updated with three Chapters in the last few days - wouldn't want to you miss out on them!

Modifié par Tarante11a, 12 mars 2010 - 10:06 .

[flanad]

Recently discovered the fanfic forums. I am very pleased with your writing style as well as the content and attention to lore detail. Please keep writing. You are doing a fantastic job.

[TanithAeyrs]

Thank you so much for your vote of confidence flanad. I am glad you like it, sometimes I feel like the writing is a little choppy and I struggle with keeping Zev in character.



The Dalish lore is fun to play with and Aithne uses it as a bit of an anchor when she is otherwise adrift. I have departed from canon a bit as there aren't a lot of details about the Old Gods availible. I should have chapter 10 up this weekend.

[TanithAeyrs]

Bump with update - chapter 13 now up

[Gilgamesh1138]

OH how I love this! Great job as always my dear friend. You rock! : D Can't wait until we all get to set sail with Izzy. *bounces, and takes Dramamine* I get seasick.

[TanithAeyrs]

Bump for update. Chapter 14 up.

[Gilgamesh1138]

Hehe, I posted my review on FF, but I love to put one here too!  Great job Tanith! I  would love more naked Zev.  And  I am enjoying this.  As I said on FF, I love Zev's comment about love being more selfish than he had thought it would be.

[TanithAeyrs]

Thanks GIl. That comment just popped into my head for Zev. It really summed up how he felt about the situation. My characters are writing themselves - is this bad?

[Gilgamesh1138]

If our characters writing themselves is wrong, then I don't want to right!

Modifié par Gilgamesh1138, 13 mai 2010 - 05:16 .

[weyrleader]

Hey Tanith!!!! Nice! Nice! Nice! And no, it's not bad. Characters with well written personalities and souls do just that! So, well done. After all, the writer is simply servant to its master; the character he or she creates. And, with pen, we do our master's bidding.

[Gilgamesh1138]

Weyr!!!!! *GLOMPS* Hey sweetie I have missed you!



And Weyr said it better Tanith, nothing wrong with them writing themselves. I am a happy slave to my master. : D

[weyrleader]

Heya! Heya! Woot! Woot! I signed up on the fanfic website, so that I wouldn't have to simply use my blog on the network, and I could join my friends, but they told me I couldn't post anything for a couple of days! *new user* ARRRGH! I've be GOOSE-STOPPED! Once I am "able" to post, I will probably be moving my current work over there.

[Gilgamesh1138]

SWEET! I will give you a shout out sweetie! YAY! *Glomps Weyr again