Thanks Weyr. I like the way you put that "and with pen we do our master's bidding." I swear some days my characters are practically shouting at me. Other days I have to bribe them out with wine and chocolate.
And I second Gil, as soon as you post let us know so we can give you a shout out Weyr.
TanithAeyrs Fanfic - new chapter February 2011. Links to short stories added.
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TanithAeyrs
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#27
Posté 13 mai 2010 - 06:45
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Yeah, I'm gonna have to tuck that away...MINE!!!...lol! Just seemed like the 'right' thing to say. God knows, it's how we all feel!!!! 
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#28
Posté 13 mai 2010 - 05:18
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ROFL Tanith, that is so true! Some days they won't shut up. And others....
#30
Posté 23 mai 2010 - 03:40
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WOOT! I love it! The way you wrote the storm is fantastic. And I love the humor between Zev and Anders. Hehe and that Anders is getting a run for his money with Isabela. ROFL!
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Posté 18 juin 2010 - 09:28
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Looks like you conquered that problem you were having after all. I knew you could do it! 
#34
Posté 25 août 2010 - 04:07
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Just caught up to the latest chapter, Cannot wait to read more!
#35
Posté 30 août 2010 - 11:30
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Hey, this is good. I've been skipping over the early chapters (not because they are bad but because I've become God baby obsessed). One thing I would say is that I played as an Elven mage, romancing Alistair, and because I knew he couldn't marry an elf and be king, I prevented him from the throne. How romantic. (I was expecting to be able to continue the romance of course.) It is interesting to read your take on the other possibility.
Also, the idea that Aithne is Alistair's "ex" and Morrigan's child is (sort of?) his child is an interesting avenue to explore. Obviously, Alistair is also having a legitimate child too concurrently which higlights the issue. And Alistair is also "illegitimate" himself. Clever.
I do recall hearing Oghren saying "sodding nughumper" this or that, but I don't think its meaning hit home until a nice Dalish elf lady said it (even in battle). Good for effect.
Anyway, up to chapter 12 - with a fair bit of skim reading. So far, you have raised some interesting questions about the God baby and how Wardens should view such a thing. Is it finished at 17 chapters or is there more? (I haven't skipped ahead.)
Also, the idea that Aithne is Alistair's "ex" and Morrigan's child is (sort of?) his child is an interesting avenue to explore. Obviously, Alistair is also having a legitimate child too concurrently which higlights the issue. And Alistair is also "illegitimate" himself. Clever.
I do recall hearing Oghren saying "sodding nughumper" this or that, but I don't think its meaning hit home until a nice Dalish elf lady said it (even in battle). Good for effect.
Anyway, up to chapter 12 - with a fair bit of skim reading. So far, you have raised some interesting questions about the God baby and how Wardens should view such a thing. Is it finished at 17 chapters or is there more? (I haven't skipped ahead.)
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Posté 30 août 2010 - 04:41
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@ Firky -Chapter 18 should go up today, just waiting for my betas to finish finding all the problems I missed. I don't see the story finishing in less than 30 chapters, so we have a way to go. In chapter 18 Aithne and Zev will finally catch up to Morrigan and the child.
@Hilde- glad you are enjoying it, thanks.
@Hilde- glad you are enjoying it, thanks.
#37
Posté 30 août 2010 - 10:08
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Oh Tanith! I love this so much. The plot thickens. I feel for Ainthe. I don't want to have Morrigan die, or have her kill her. Love how Zev and Anders play with Mei. She is adorable for a God baby. 
MOAR please! I hope you dont' mind, but I am putting this same review on FF too. It really needs to be praised everywhere!
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MOAR please! I hope you dont' mind, but I am putting this same review on FF too. It really needs to be praised everywhere!:wub::wub:
#38
Posté 13 septembre 2010 - 07:58
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Well. Looks like I caught up just in time. When is the next chapter?
To me, the strengths are that Aithne was in love with Alistair and Morrigan's child is his - and all that might entail for the child's fate. And the idea that a vulnerable (to Templars etc) and self-absorbed (because children are) child would bring out previously unseen qualities in Morrigan. You've laid a good foundation for your story.
To me, the strengths are that Aithne was in love with Alistair and Morrigan's child is his - and all that might entail for the child's fate. And the idea that a vulnerable (to Templars etc) and self-absorbed (because children are) child would bring out previously unseen qualities in Morrigan. You've laid a good foundation for your story.
#39
Posté 20 février 2011 - 05:24
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Apologies for a long delay and a bump for Chapter 19 - now up on FF.net. Life interfered with my writing for a while. I'm hoping not to have any extremely long delays now. I hope to have the next chapter up in March (I'm writing some dialog for the "Hidden Circle" mod that Questorian is hoping to have finished before DA2 comes out - so I'll be concentrating on that for a few more weeks).
@Firky- thank you for your comments - I always love it when someone has specific things they like or dislike about my writing. Apologies for the long delay in replying to you.
@Gil - *HUGS* for all your amazing support.
@Firky- thank you for your comments - I always love it when someone has specific things they like or dislike about my writing. Apologies for the long delay in replying to you.
@Gil - *HUGS* for all your amazing support.
#40
Posté 20 février 2011 - 10:18
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WOOT!!!! I am so glad you posted again! *does happy happy Tanith writing dance*
Aw sweetie, I adore you and your writing. If that is supporting you, well, that's easy! *HUGS*
Aw sweetie, I adore you and your writing. If that is supporting you, well, that's easy!
*HUGS*
