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#26
Broganisity

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Hello there Phantom.
I headbutt you in the face.
Fooor Tuchanka

Modifié par Broganisity, 04 décembre 2012 - 02:23 .


#27
metaempiricist

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Grinch57 wrote...

Terrapin wrote...

3 lines: 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.

Actually three lines, 5 words, 7 words, 5 words.

And if you really want to be authentic, three vertical columns, not lines.


Wrong and I'll tell you why. English verse is typically characterized by meter, Japanese verse counts sound units known as "on" or morae. Traditional haiku consist of 17 "on" or syllables, in three phrases of five, seven and five "on". Among contemporary poems teikei (定型 fixed form) haiku continue to use the 5-7-5 pattern while jiyuritsu[/i] (自由律 free form) haiku do not. 

  To say it needs to be vertical columns is ridiculous that's Japanese sentence structure and has nothing to do with haiku:police:

Modifié par metaempiricist, 04 décembre 2012 - 02:20 .


#28
felipo89

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Slayer will slash Geth
Biotic slashes will fly
Stun mod just in case

#29
Imp of the Perverse

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doozerdude wrote...

LegionofRannoch wrote...

Hilarious, you
Have fallen for my trap card
Your death approaches

..oops wrong game.



Did... Did that guy just speak in haiku?


I think the drell infiltrator needs to speak in haiku.

#30
Cakekey

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Phantoms approaching
Hand-cannons lay waste to all
No need for the sword

#31
Takeyama

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metaempiricist wrote...

Grinch57 wrote...

Terrapin wrote...

3 lines: 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.

Actually three lines, 5 words, 7 words, 5 words.

And if you really want to be authentic, three vertical columns, not lines.


Wrong and I'll tell you why. English verse is typically characterized by meter, Japanese verse counts sound units known as "on" or morae. Traditional haiku consist of 17 "on" or syllables, in three phrases of five, seven and five "on". Among contemporary poems teikei (定型 fixed form) haiku continue to use the 5-7-5 pattern while jiyuritsu[/i] (自由律 free form) haiku do not. 

  To say it needs to be vertical columns is ridiculous that's Japanese sentence structure and has nothing to do with haiku:police:


At least somebody said it before me. Really these are also closer to being senryu, since haiku traditionally have elements of nature and have to do with seasons and all sorts of other complicated stuff. XD

Anyways...

Do my eyes deceive?
Is that a Salarian
Punching a Geth Prime?

#32
bondiboy

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He hits and he laughs
Nemesis is on the floor
Her song has ended

Modifié par stricko, 04 décembre 2012 - 04:28 .


#33
TheGreatDayne

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I like to chill, here,
Playing Silver with strangers...
...Refrigerator...

#34
Uh Cold

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Stunlocked after a gel
Fury of 1000 suns
Combat drone please stahp

#35
RGB

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My dearest Phantom
When you get to the hot place
Tell them I sent you

#36
Moby

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I don't need poetry
I let the actions I take
Speak louder than words

#37
Terry Yaki

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Players whine too much
Ask for nerf and buff of guns
They can go to Hell

#38
Mindfane

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doozerdude wrote...

LegionofRannoch wrote...

Hilarious, you
Have fallen for my trap card
Your death approaches

..oops wrong game.



Did... Did that guy just speak in haiku?


I think it is

How hillarious
You just set off my trap card
Your death approches

#39
Tyrannus00

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VORCHA VORCHA FIRE
VORCHA FIRE VORCHA FIRE FIRE
VORCHA TASTEFUL ART
  • mrs_anomaly aime ceci

#40
Mindfane

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Damn these seeker swarms
Eating away my powers
And I'm out of ammo

#41
VII Revenant

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This one is squishy.
This platform does not approve.
Add shields to me now.

This one has fallen.
This one needs medical aid.
Bring two batteries.

Behold, the new geth.
It has Flames, shields, and wall hacks.
Its hardware is beast.

Did you know Volus
Have seventeen ways to say
'Thrifty' in Vol-speak?

Volus who don't use
Equipment aren't jerks;
They're in character.

#42
Terry Yaki

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I check manifest
I maxxed out my manifest
Players are jelly

#43
Josic

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Tyrannus00 wrote...

VORCHA VORCHA FIRE
VORCHA FIRE VORCHA FIRE FIRE
VORCHA TASTEFUL ART


Image IPB this made my day!

#44
mybudgee

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More poor Turians
Why They beg for Stim packs?
...They have a jet-pack!

#45
avenging_teabag

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You can't see me run
But rolling boom never ends
Hell hath no Fury

My blades are jagged
Armor cuts out your bowels
Come closer, human scum

Modifié par avenging_teabag, 04 décembre 2012 - 07:17 .


#46
ArchFox-GX

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doozerdude wrote...

LegionofRannoch wrote...

Hilarious, you
Have fallen for my trap card
Your death approaches

..oops wrong game.



Did... Did that guy just speak in haiku?


Hah~.

I do these often just to pass time in lobbies.

1)
Sure, my score is low
Because I do objectives
Yet I still get kicked

2)
Hacking Credit Wave
Teammates nowhere to be found
God I hate you guys

3)
While you play with husks
I'm stuck here fighting banshees
Who carries who, now?

Modifié par ArchFox-GX, 04 décembre 2012 - 08:26 .


#47
Scarlet_Grimangel

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常冀沙场改
一朝更之却不识
方知尚眷昔

(I always want the map changes
But when it comes,I can't accustomed to it
Then,I know I like the older.)


Well I'm a Chinese......

#48
d_nought

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Wave 6 solo gold
Four devices objective
Dragoons are OP

Modifié par chipsandwich, 04 décembre 2012 - 08:51 .


#49
Homey C-Dawg

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want to kill Scion
completely out of ammo
fist will have to do

#50
WindOverTuchanka

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Crimson Vanguard wrote...

1 shot 1 kill
I am the pro
Bow before me


A pre-nerf Scion on Bronze while the team is on a gate cooldown?