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[Muhkida]

Geth Hunter appears
Can't shoot because of stunlock
**** those Geth Hunters

[Shia Luck]

Krogan rage, like fire
Snow hazard on Firebase white
I can't see a thing


Have fun

[Muhkida]

Pressed "one" on keyboard
Biotic Charge doesn't work
Bioware hates me

[DelusionFel]

Stupid newb in way,
unable to dodge, death by
sync killing banshee.



Why I cannot find,
any ammo for my rifle?
Team mates have harriers.

Modifié par DelusionFel, 04 décembre 2012 - 09:37 .

[Ashevajak]

Grab all the grenades
Tech bursts fry everything in range
Killstreaks too easy now

[Controllerfreak]

shot twice, ouch my life
time to activate ops pack
oops dead. insta-gel

[N7Kopper]

Firing my laser
Ninja comes behind my beam
Sword in the backside
-Praetorian fighting a Shadow

[Daynan]

Hit hard by missile
Biotic charge will save me
Dingdingdingdingding!

[Shia Luck]

Daynan wrote...

Hit hard by missile
Biotic charge will save me
Dingdingdingdingding!

*laughing* Excellent!


Two for the delightful little store...

Glorious store Gods!
Black winter night cards, I plead!
Gold ammo, again...

Operation Gods!
Hurricane II, 8 months now
Please, no more Eagle

Have fun

[DarthSpot]

Fight for Tuchanka
I'm packed with many grenades
Enemies will burn

[NobodyofConsequence]

Takeyama wrote...

metaempiricist wrote...

Grinch57 wrote...

Terrapin wrote...

3 lines: 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.

Actually three lines, 5 words, 7 words, 5 words.

And if you really want to be authentic, three vertical columns, not lines.

Wrong and I'll tell you why. English verse is typically characterized by meter, Japanese verse counts sound units known as "on" or morae. Traditional haiku consist of 17 "on" or syllables, in three phrases of five, seven and five "on". Among contemporary poems teikei (定型 fixed form) haiku continue to use the 5-7-5 pattern while jiyuritsu[/i] (自由律 free form) haiku do not. 

  To say it needs to be vertical columns is ridiculous that's Japanese sentence structure and has nothing to do with haiku:police:

At least somebody said it before me. Really these are also closer to being senryu, since haiku traditionally have elements of nature and have to do with seasons and all sorts of other complicated stuff. XD

Does this come even close, in this context? Genuinely curious.


Stars burst above us:
Four missiles to celebrate
We will see summer.

[kipac]

I'mma Krogan
Don't make me rage, or else
"They're DEAD"

[Kommandant Schaefer]

All enemies have fallen
The favour of the gods is yours
Warp IV costs 99000

Modifié par Kommandant Schäfer, 04 décembre 2012 - 01:22 .

[smashthings]

A once mighty Krogan,
Beseeches a Volus, together
in a box, whimpering.

The joy of spring! dawns,
But meanwhile, I realize;
Spectre packs be trollin'

[avenging_teabag]

Pylon deployed.
Back to Rannoch, suit rat,
Don't touch my grenades!

[Wentletrap]

N7 Haiku: (posted some of these in another thread a while ago:)


wild Fury girl
ports through walls, up ladders too
everything explodes

oh lonely pylon
I move you across the map
just to stay awake

from across the map
Shadow zooms and turns around
I am motion sick

now I have a sword
and a palm gun just like yours
suck on that, Phantom

Devastator Mode
makes me feel like an old man
whats the red square for?

mighty Paladin
you look like a preview for
Dragon Age MP

Modifié par Wentletrap, 04 décembre 2012 - 02:24 .

[Wentletrap]

female Quarian
Sabotages everything
scoreboard does not care

poor Sticky Grenade
all enemies laugh at you
two meters away

Sabotage to stun
then Wraith headshot fired from cloak
"enemies finished"

Modifié par Wentletrap, 04 décembre 2012 - 02:25 .

[Salzella]

Phantom incoming
Dancing backwards frantically
Sword in the belly.

[Dokteur Kill]

One I wrote a while back when Tully Ackland asked for ME haikus on Twitter:

I run from banshee
My shields down, swarmer gets me
Krogan: "Stop whining!"

[toshiroandthecat]

Banshee's magnet hand
gently caresses your head.
Is this liver yours?

[Terrapin]

Aralakh burns high
fighting for a future in
nuclear summer

[RowanSane]

bumping for awesome
to haiku or not haiku?
thread must continue

--

Noverian spring
renovations and snowstorms
no more farming here

[Armenhammer]

Quarrelous greetings?
Weapons report my reply
Sharp tongues do battle

[Terrapin]

RowanSane wrote...


Noverian spring
renovations and snowstorms
no more farming here

Brilliant!

[DivineAtropos]

X gun needs a buff.
Y character needs one too.
Balance all the things.