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"All organics must destroy or control synthetic life forms" - foreshadowing the ending and why it failed: a fundamental disconnect between writers and players


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Ieldra2 wrote...

@Wulfram:
Well, ME2 downplayed pretty much everything but the characters, but it's certainly odd for ME3. Only the Rannoch plot provides a fundament - and Javik, which makes it even more annoying that he was cut out of the game for DLC.


the obvious end of a plotline is the only fundament for the plot twist at the end ..

you are right .. the foreshadowing is so thin, that it is even overshadowed by a plotarc, that was dropped in me2.

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If you remember that scene then you will remember it was the AI that initiated an attack on Shepard. No were did Shepard move to attack or kill it before threatened.

Also, with the VI on the moon. It (now EDI) gained awareness while under attack and responded yet, in ME2 and 3, EDI does not.

Why then is the message about organics attacking synthetics when the reverse is true?
I ask this as EDI 'woke up' on a training range where the targets were supposed to be attacked and, even with the burgeoning AI, it would have known that the things being attacked were there solely for that reason. The computers that housed the AI were, at the time, not being assaulted.

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I doubt it was foreshadowing because i would never in my life believe there was any sort of planning in ME plot whatsoever. Considering the crazy jumps between concepts that happened duringtrilogy it's more like fundamental disconnect between the writers and the writers.

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Ieldra2 wrote...

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Well, ME2 downplayed pretty much everything but the characters, but it's certainly odd for ME3. Only the Rannoch plot provides a fundament - and Javik, which makes it even more annoying that he was cut out of the game for DLC.


If Javik hadn't been cut, he'd have been written before the ending was decided on, and so wouldn't have referenced Synthetics vs Organics

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I think they, or at least Casey, assumed everyone read Ray Kurzweil and agreed with his vision.

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Interesting read, though two minor things.

Ieldra2 wrote...
(2) I think the writers expected us to lump the Reapers together with the geth into the "synthetic" and thus "other" category of life. So that while we were learning to accept synthetics as people, we would also consider the possibility that the Reapers were "just enemies" and otherwise valid forms of life.
What brought that to ruin so completely that there was no recovery was that they pushed the horror up to eleven in ME2 and again in ME3. To estimate the role of the "abomination aesthetic", consider how you would've reacted if the Reapers had harvested organics, but in a somewhat "cleaner", more clinical way, without all the unnecessary pain and the re-use of organic body parts for their minions. What if the Reaper minions had been machines instead of travesties of existing species? I venture to guess that many of us would have been rather more ready to see the Reapers as "just enemies" instead of "eldritch abominations", enemies with which to make peace was generally considered possible.


I have a hard time accepting that Reapers were meant to be filed under the "synthethic" catagory after the end of ME2.

The idea that the main theme of ME  boils down to for Bioware is "Synthethics vs organics" baffles me. After ME2 everything changed, the Reapers were revealed to be hybrids and the Geth were threatend by them just as much as any other organic species. It was no longer "Synthethics vs organics" but "Reapers (hybrids) vs everyone".

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As for (3): It is heavily suggested by Miranda when she says she'd never worked with so many black boxes before. What could black box technology refer to but Reaper tech? Anything else would not have been beyond her understanding.


Except that there is no mention of Reaper tech in the cronos video logs. If Bioware had any intentions about Shepard being revived with Reaper tech, it would been stated there.

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@Lizardviking:
re: nature of the Reapers:
Not so. It doesn't matter if chemically organic stuff is used in their construction, they're still synthetics because they're constructs. As revealed by Legion, the defining characteristic of a Reaper was that it was a machine body organic minds were uploaded to. The appearance of the "Terminator" points in the same direction, as well as Javik saying "machines had surpassed us long ago" when referring to the Reapers.

I think EDI's lines at the CB suggesting something different were only put in to justify the organic appearance they had in mind at some time for the human Reaper. You can see this in the concept art from the ME2 art book that came with the CE. All the rest of the lore soundly pointed - and still points - to Reapers as synthetics. That the ME team made up things to suit their dramatic needs with no regard to the lore shouldn't surprise anyone at this point.

The giant retcon came with Leviathan. Only then were the Reapers "revealed" to target all life, not just organics.

re: Lazarus using Reaper tech:
They wanted to keep it ambiguous, like so much else. Miranda's explanation is at the very least highly suggestive of Reaper tech.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 15 décembre 2012 - 09:38 .


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I think what you have said in the OP is almost synonymous with "the writer's constant reimagining of the series direction bit them in the ass."

They did go overboard with the horror and gruesome violence of the Reaper harvesting process. Because at that time, I honestly don't think they planned to flip the Reapers or turn them into a good or neutral force. Really seems like the writers were your classic horror movie directors at that point, trying to project the correct air of villainy. So they piled on all this over-the-top horror movie fodder, and in the end seemed to expect that seeing a pretty blue hologram boy in an aesthetically pleasing space dome would be enough to make us accept the Reapers as non-villains. 

Even the AI on the Citadel was a trivial sidequest that I doubt was intended to be any kind of foreshadowing -- and if it was, they were likely just trying to pave the road for the geth conflict, not the "Reapers as good guys" revelation.

I have mixed feelings about your two points. I do very much think they made the mistake of lumping the geth in with the Reapers. In the only ending where you destroy the Reapers, you must also even destroy the geth. Yet there is no connection there that is felt by me the player. None. Reconsidering the geth does not open the door for reconsidering the Reapers.

However, there seem to be a lot of people on this forum who did have quite a lot of trouble getting over the geth's inorganic nature, so I'm not sure it was as much a non-issue as all that. Ironically, because the writers seemed to expect this, they kind of oversold the geth's innocence, which fed the flames of some people's dislike and distrust.

I think, though, that you are ultimately right: it was the geth's actions that made us distrust them, just as it was their actions that made us end up giving them another chance. If the writers did think it was the geth's inorganic nature that inspired our distrust, and that this same inorganic nature represents the only reason why we also distrusted the Reapers, then they made a grave mistake.

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Dr_Extrem wrote...

dreman9999 wrote...

Dr_Extrem wrote...

do not argue with a rock.

That alone speaks volumes on the issue the catalyst brings up about synthetics vs organics. He is just a machine doing whathe is programed to do. He never saw it as an issue on his own. His creators did.


qoud erat demonstrandum


i dont know if i want to cry or laugh ..

In my point ofview that issue is reversed.

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Masha Potato wrote...

I doubt it was foreshadowing because i would never in my life believe there was any sort of planning in ME plot whatsoever. Considering the crazy jumps between concepts that happened duringtrilogy it's more like fundamental disconnect between the writers and the writers.

I don't see any real jumps in concepts.

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dreman9999 wrote...

Dr_Extrem wrote...

dreman9999 wrote...

Dr_Extrem wrote...

do not argue with a rock.

That alone speaks volumes on the issue the catalyst brings up about synthetics vs organics. He is just a machine doing whathe is programed to do. He never saw it as an issue on his own. His creators did.


qoud erat demonstrandum


i dont know if i want to cry or laugh ..

In my point ofview that issue is reversed.


*sigh* ... dreman just dont gets my point ..  this is amusing and frightening at the same time.

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Ieldra2 wrote...

@Lizardviking:
re: nature of the Reapers:
Not so. It doesn't matter if chemically organic stuff is used in their construction, they're still synthetics because they're constructs. As revealed by Legion, the defining characteristic of a Reaper was that it was a machine body organic minds were uploaded to. The appearance of the "Terminator" points in the same direction, as well as Javik saying "machines had surpassed us long ago" when referring to the Reapers.

I think EDI's lines at the CB suggesting something different were only put in to justify the organic appearance they had in mind at some time for the human Reaper. You can see this in the concept art from the ME2 art book that came with the CE. All the rest of the lore soundly pointed - and still points - to Reapers as synthetics. That the ME team made up things to suit their dramatic needs with no regard to the lore shouldn't surprise anyone at this point.


With the human Reaper reveal the dialog is build up to present them as freak-hybrids and not synthethic. If that was not their intentions then I wonder what on earth they were thinking when making the dialog. 

The giant retcon came with Leviathan. Only then were the Reapers "revealed" to target all life, not just organics.


Fairly certain Legion already said back in ME2 that the Reapers threatens their future.

re: Lazarus using Reaper tech:
They wanted to keep it ambiguous, like so much else. Miranda's explanation is at the very least highly suggestive of Reaper tech.


I disagree, the complete lack of mention of Reaper tech. Especially when the scientist guy got worked up over using Reaper parts to build EDI heavily implies that Shepard's revival was simply done by "normal" means. 

Or does people really need both the scientist and TIM  to look into the camera and say "And for the record to anyone who watches this classified video. We did NOT use any Reaper tech!"

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@ The OP I would tend to agree with this however I would also argue that ME3 displayed it's AIs very poorly with the very crude emotional plays in the Geth mission and EDI's arc which seemed to argue that the highest aspiration of AIs is to be a knock off human.

EDI is an a AI it/she has no gender and no hormones so why is it interested in knocking boots with the pilot? I would argue it would work better if EDI was more obviously alien the conversations with Shepard were a good start but they then threw it away with the romance arc presumably added to "humanise" a character that shouldn't be human in the first place.

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Lizardviking wrote...

Ieldra2 wrote...

@Lizardviking:
re: nature of the Reapers:
Not so. It doesn't matter if chemically organic stuff is used in their construction, they're still synthetics because they're constructs. As revealed by Legion, the defining characteristic of a Reaper was that it was a machine body organic minds were uploaded to. The appearance of the "Terminator" points in the same direction, as well as Javik saying "machines had surpassed us long ago" when referring to the Reapers.

I think EDI's lines at the CB suggesting something different were only put in to justify the organic appearance they had in mind at some time for the human Reaper. You can see this in the concept art from the ME2 art book that came with the CE. All the rest of the lore soundly pointed - and still points - to Reapers as synthetics. That the ME team made up things to suit their dramatic needs with no regard to the lore shouldn't surprise anyone at this point.


With the human Reaper reveal the dialog is build up to present them as freak-hybrids and not synthethic. If that was not their intentions then I wonder what on earth they were thinking when making the dialog.

I do not associate much thinking with a dialogue containing something as nonsensical as "essences of species". It's certainly nothing supported anywhere else in the story, even Javik refers to the Reapers as machines. I think the "hybrid" suggestion was put in to justify the organic appearance of the original human Reaper concept as well as the Reaper minions. They wanted the Reaper minions to look as repulsive as possible, and to hell with the consequences for the lore. The need for cheap drama overruling lore consistency? Really, nothing remotely new. 

The giant retcon came with Leviathan. Only then were the Reapers "revealed" to target all life, not just organics.


Fairly certain Legion already said back in ME2 that the Reapers threatens their future.

Yes, but that was accidental. At that point, the geth were not targeted by the harvesting. They were just in the way. Legion says that: "The Reapers are your future rather than ours". Only with Leviathan did the agenda change to "preserve ALL life". Before, it had always been just organics.

re: Lazarus using Reaper tech:
They wanted to keep it ambiguous, like so much else. Miranda's explanation is at the very least highly suggestive of Reaper tech.


I disagree, the complete lack of mention of Reaper tech. Especially when the scientist guy got worked up over using Reaper parts to build EDI heavily implies that Shepard's revival was simply done by "normal" means. 

Or does people really need both the scientist and TIM  to look into the camera and say "And for the record to anyone who watches this classified video. We did NOT use any Reaper tech!"

So why then the "black boxes"? Why the insistence that Shepard had been DEAD, suggesting that he couldn't have been revived by "normal" means not involving the technology of transcendence-themed entities who came to be known for dealing with minds of organics and machine bodies? Given those very suggestive elements, yes, it would take an explicit mention of not having used Reaper technology to convince me that "Lazarus used Reaper tech" was not on the list of intended interpretations.

Modifié par Ieldra2, 15 décembre 2012 - 10:30 .


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Dr_Extrem wrote...

dreman9999 wrote...

Dr_Extrem wrote...

dreman9999 wrote...

Dr_Extrem wrote...

do not argue with a rock.

That alone speaks volumes on the issue the catalyst brings up about synthetics vs organics. He is just a machine doing whathe is programed to do. He never saw it as an issue on his own. His creators did.


qoud erat demonstrandum


i dont know if i want to cry or laugh ..

In my point ofview that issue is reversed.


*sigh* ... dreman just dont gets my point ..  this is amusing and frightening at the same time.

I get your point, that why I said in my point of view it's reversed

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paul165 wrote...

@ The OP I would tend to agree with this however I would also argue that ME3 displayed it's AIs very poorly with the very crude emotional plays in the Geth mission and EDI's arc which seemed to argue that the highest aspiration of AIs is to be a knock off human.

EDI is an a AI it/she has no gender and no hormones so why is it interested in knocking boots with the pilot? I would argue it would work better if EDI was more obviously alien the conversations with Shepard were a good start but they then threw it away with the romance arc presumably added to "humanise" a character that shouldn't be human in the first place.

What in dear lord shows in the plot that AI's want to be more human? EDI's humanity is here own issue ofa child imatating a parent. The geth arn't trying to be more like organics and don't end up like organics.

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I think people are missing the point that when we do encounter alian life they are likely to be extremely different from us. more like the rachni and thorian and less like turian and asari.

Ieldra2 wrote...

I think there is such an underlying assumption, mainly in the perceived incapability of synthetics to feel genuine emotion. Note how post-Synthesis, we see EDI smiling and hugging Garrus. She had never smiled before and was always more detached. She showed determination in the FOB scene, but her post-Synthesis appearance was markedly different from before.

There appear to be three fundamental assumptions:
(1) Synthetics cannot feel genuine emotion, or at least have a much more limited capacity for it. See EDI; and


It would be more correct to say synthetics don't express emotion like we do. EDI expresses her effection for her crew, and legion expresses feelings like shame and happiness. Expressing an emotion is basically because you lose control: You feel an emotion so intensly that you can't help but expressing it. Synthetics don't have this "overload" of emotions (or if they do it will probably lead to madness).  Emotion is almost the opposite of logic, which is a fundamantal part of synthetics life forms. A program that acts "illogicaly" is by definition defective, since it makes decisions not based on objective parameters.

There are alot of repressed people, it doesn't mean they're not alive. In our society, for man to express emotion is considered improper and "womanly".

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(2) Human-like individuality is required for life to be really valid. Thus, pre-Rannoch geth are not considered equal to organics before and unless they acquire the Reaper upgrade.


So the rachni, aren't considered alive because they have a collective conciousness? Just because a species thinks and acts differently from what is human norm, doesn't make them inferior. Just different.

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dreman9999 wrote...

paul165 wrote...

@ The OP I would tend to agree with this however I would also argue that ME3 displayed it's AIs very poorly with the very crude emotional plays in the Geth mission and EDI's arc which seemed to argue that the highest aspiration of AIs is to be a knock off human.

EDI is an a AI it/she has no gender and no hormones so why is it interested in knocking boots with the pilot? I would argue it would work better if EDI was more obviously alien the conversations with Shepard were a good start but they then threw it away with the romance arc presumably added to "humanise" a character that shouldn't be human in the first place.

What in dear lord shows in the plot that AI's want to be more human? EDI's humanity is here own issue ofa child imatating a parent. The geth arn't trying to be more like organics and don't end up like organics.


Really? You could argue either way with the Geth, because they advocate self-determination as well as wanting better relations with the Quarians and organics, but EDI's entire character in ME3 is about her wanting to become more human, hence all the questions she asks.

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Lizardviking wrote...

The idea that the main theme of ME  boils down to for Bioware is "Synthethics vs organics" baffles me. After ME2 everything changed, the Reapers were revealed to be hybrids and the Geth were threatend by them just as much as any other organic species. It was no longer "Synthethics vs organics" but "Reapers (hybrids) vs everyone


Like Derperus and the Geth the Reapers are superb examples of "plot clay" that changes on the fly.

ME1: Machine gods that hold organic life in contempt and consider them an "accident". They also assist the Geth against organics.

ME2: Now they're cyborgs who turn the "genetically diverse" species into liquid goo to form space terminators while exterminating those who don't meet their criteria.

ME3: Now they're about killing organics and turning them into goo to save them from creating synthethics that kill organics. All past establishments of Reapers wiping out entire species and aiding Geth against organics in both past and present is conveniently overlooked.

If there's anything good I can say about how this series was handled is that it's a textbook example of how NOT to write a trilogy(and how not to handle RPG mechanics and choices).

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Calinstel wrote...

If you remember that scene then you will remember it was the AI that initiated an attack on Shepard. No were did Shepard move to attack or kill it before threatened.

Also, with the VI on the moon. It (now EDI) gained awareness while under attack and responded yet, in ME2 and 3, EDI does not.

Why then is the message about organics attacking synthetics when the reverse is true?
I ask this as EDI 'woke up' on a training range where the targets were supposed to be attacked and, even with the burgeoning AI, it would have known that the things being attacked were there solely for that reason. The computers that housed the AI were, at the time, not being assaulted.


EDI gained awareness and was afraid. She didn't know what was happening, that's the point. 

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Seboist wrote...

Lizardviking wrote...

The idea that the main theme of ME  boils down to for Bioware is "Synthethics vs organics" baffles me. After ME2 everything changed, the Reapers were revealed to be hybrids and the Geth were threatend by them just as much as any other organic species. It was no longer "Synthethics vs organics" but "Reapers (hybrids) vs everyone


Like Derperus and the Geth the Reapers are superb examples of "plot clay" that changes on the fly.

ME1: Machine gods that hold organic life in contempt and consider them an "accident". They also assist the Geth against organics.

ME2: Now they're cyborgs who turn the "genetically diverse" species into liquid goo to form space terminators while exterminating those who don't meet their criteria.

ME3: Now they're about killing organics and turning them into goo to save them from creating synthethics that kill organics. All past establishments of Reapers wiping out entire species and aiding Geth against organics in both past and present is conveniently overlooked.

If there's anything good I can say about how this series was handled is that it's a textbook example of how NOT to write a trilogy(and how not to handle RPG mechanics and choices).



ahem .. to some people here, the reapers just undergo "character development".

i thing they are neutered in mass effect 3.

turning them int o space terminators is far fetched but not essentially lore breaking .. in me1, sovereign states, that they are "each a nation". this nation has to have an origin.

in mass effect 2, we learn about this origin - harvested civilisations .. implementation was not lucky though.


but in mass effect 3, the once proud reapers were degenerated to become simple husks (with laser guns), who obey their master ai .. wich is broken..  

Modifié par Dr_Extrem, 16 décembre 2012 - 12:08 .


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Seboist wrote...

ME1: Machine gods that hold organic life in contempt and consider them an "accident". They also assist the Geth against organics.


To be fair, they use Geth against Organics. Saren says Sovereign holds the Geth in contempt

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Wulfram wrote...

Seboist wrote...

ME1: Machine gods that hold organic life in contempt and consider them an "accident". They also assist the Geth against organics.


To be fair, they use Geth against Organics. Saren says Sovereign holds the Geth in contempt


because sovereign saw them as insects as well .. just synthetic insects ..

they were primitives in me1 .. not the cause of their problems.

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It was clear to me that the reapers were organic/synthetic hybrids in Mass Effect 1...
They all but spelled it out...

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It's not a major theme of the trilogy when it just appears once on a side mission in the original game, only to come back another time during the last five minutes of the third. Had it been the intent of the devs from the start (making synthetics vs organics a main theme) it would have been explained and presented clearly during the original, and for way more than just during one side mission that some players surely missed during the first or later play-throughs.